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Talk:Jim Lankas/GA1

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| result = Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:51, 26 April 2025 (UTC)

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Jim Lankas/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: {{User|BeanieFan11}} 17:38, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:09, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:09, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written.

  1. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
  3. :a (references): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}}
    c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
    d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  4. It is broad in its coverage.
  5. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  6. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  7. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  8. It is stable.
  9. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
  10. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
  11. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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Overall:

Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}

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=Comments=

  • {{tq|Lankas was born on August 26, 1918, in Stratton, Nebraska.[1] He was of Czechslovakian and Polish descent.}} I would combine these two sentences
  • {{tq|he scored 126 points, and his coach}} comma isn't needed
  • {{tq|those games, an average}} change the comma to "for"
  • {{tq| In 204 quarters of play,}} this is a weird stat, one that isn't very common. Why is the number of quarters relevant?
  • Cut.
  • References:
  • All appear consistently formatted and reliable for what is being cited
  • Spot checks: 3, 7, 9, 10, 15, 18, 21, 26

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:49, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

  • {{ping|Gonzo fan2007}} I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:27, 26 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 26 April 2025 (UTC)

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