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Talk:Joe Secord/GA1

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| result = Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Joe Secord/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: {{User|BeanieFan11}} 03:09, 13 February 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:01, 13 February 2025 (UTC)

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:01, 13 February 2025 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written.

  1. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
  3. :a (references): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}}
    c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
    d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  4. It is broad in its coverage.
  5. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  6. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  7. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  8. It is stable.
  9. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
  10. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
  11. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|yes}}
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|yes}}
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Overall:

Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}

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=Comments=

  • I would add a sentence to the end of the lead about his post football career.
  • {{tq| company rebranding as the Pioneer Distributing and Pioneer Liquid Company in 1946}} --> "rebranded"
  • {{tq|He lived nearly his entire life in Green Bay and he died there on August 21, 1970, after a short illness}} delete the second "he"
  • References are consistently formatted and appropriate for what is being cited
  • Ref 10 needs an access-date
  • Spot checks: #3, #4, #5, #7 and #10 all check out.

Nice work {{U|BeanieFan11}}. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

  • {{ping|Gonzo fan2007}} I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:48, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

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