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Talk:Jon Corzine/GA2

GA Reassessment

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:This discussion is transcluded from Talk:Jon Corzine/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.

Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:33, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Starts GA Reassessment. The reassessment will follow the same sections of the Article. {{thank you}} --Whiteguru (talk) 12:25, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

 

Instructions: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment

=Observations=

:GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

HTML document size: 393 kB

Prose size (including all HTML code): 70 kB

References (including all HTML code): 199 kB

Wiki text: 110 kB

Prose size (text only): 39 kB (6444 words) "readable prose size"

References (text only): 30 kB

  1. It is reasonably well written.
  2. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|yes}}

:::* The Lede is too short. There is a tag on this page to this effect.

:::* Infobox is comprehensive.

;;;* Tenure section is excessively overlinked. See WP:MOSLINK

  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
  2. :a (reference section): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|yes}} c (OR): {{GAList/check|yes}} d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|yes}}

:::* Reference 2 is a dead link

:::* All links to Time Magazine are dead links. Run the Internet Archive Bot over this page.

:::* There are seven citation needed tags on the page.

:::* There are no references for the Electoral History tables.

:::* Committee assignment section has a{{cn}} tag outstanding since 2019

:::* every resident to enrol in a health plan and have taxpayers help pick up the tab for all the welfare low- and middle-income residents. In June 2008, state legislators voted for the first phase of that program mandating health care coverage and Corzine signed it into law in July.[citation needed]

:::* Corzine was one of several United States Governors and following in this paragraph is overlinked.

:::* MF Global section is too big; (MF Global and their collapse have their own article.)(Corzine has a complete section in this article.) This section is too large, reduce it to three paragraphs. Current paragraph 3 is far too large and contains material that belongs on the MF Global page.

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  1. It is broad in its coverage.
  2. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (focused): {{GAList/check|yes}}

:::* It is meet and fitting that Corzine spent $62 million on his senate election campaign. This election has its own page and this section may be effectively trimmed back to three paragraphs. Too much detail, see WP:PROSELINE.

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  1. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  2. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|yes}}

:::* The section during Corzine's tenure as Governor and Presidents Clinton and Obama is excessively overlinked.

:::* Consideration was given to the scandal section, referencing Carla Katz. Neutral point of view and verifiability were examined and confirmed.

  1. It is stable.
  2. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|yes}}

:::* Page created 5 October 2003 by Academic Challenger

:::* Page has 2725 edits by 1219 editors

:::* 90 day page views has 30,676 views with an average of 337 views daily.

:::* Page has had occasions of minor vandalism; Cluebot and other editors resolving quickly.

:::* Page is considered basically stable.

  1. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
  2. :a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|yes}}

:::* File:SenatorJonCorzine.jpg = This United States Congress image is in the public domain, due being a photograph of a (former) elected official (US Senate).

:::* File:Jon Corzine.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license.

:::* File:Corzine final.pdf = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license.

  1. Notifying Editors:

:::* Page Creator Academic Challenger notified;

:::* Editor RFD notified;

:::* Editor Anomalocaris notified;

:::* Editor TonyTheTiger notified;

:::* Editor Offenbach notified;

:::* Editor WikiProject United States governors notified;

:::* Editor WikiProject U.S. Congress notified;

:::* Editor WikiProject New Jersey notified;

:::* Editor WikiProject Biography/Politics and government notified;

:::* A total of five involved editors and several WikiProjects were notified.

  1. Overall:

:::* The Internet Archive bot should be run over this page and its references. Many are 404.

:::* The lede section is too short and needs more content.

:::* There are seven [7] citation needed tags on this page which need resolution

:::* Material in the MF Global section is too large and needs to be trimmed; MF Global has its own page.

:::* There is over-linking on this page. The Electoral History tables lack references.

:::* An amount of work is required on this page.

 

{{on hold}} for one week. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:33, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

:{{u|Whiteguru}}, I agree that the article would need significant work to maintain GA status. Suggest delisting it since it's been a week. (t · c) buidhe 07:02, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

 

{{icon|DA}} Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:33, 10 July 2021 (UTC)