Talk:K-170 (Kansas highway)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:58, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

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Bolded items indicate things likely worth fixing in other pages, since you have so many similar ones.

• Add commas after {{tq|north of Emporia}} and {{tq|renumbered to K-99}}

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "farmlands" in {{tq|flat rural farmlands and after about}}

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add "the" before "Neosho River"

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after {{tq|After crossing Cable Creek}}

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Commas after {{tq|At this point}} and {{tq|From this point}}

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• {{tq|two lane}} should be "two lanes"

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Consolidate the two NHS sentences; does the definition need to be in every page if the term is wikilinked?

:I agree, so I changed it a little, let me know if not ok -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• {{tq|K-170 was commissioned as K-70 by 1930, to a highway}} — unclear what "to" indicates as a preposition here

:not sure what to change it to? -420Traveler (talk) 04:54, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• {{tq|three state}} should be hyphenated, maybe with a comma after

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Comma after {{tq|December 12, 1945}} and {{tq|October 23, 1946}} (MOS:DATECOMMA). You can avoid excessive commas by switching "December 12, 1945, resolution," to "resolution on December 12, 1945,".

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Merge the last two sentences

:Should be fixed now. -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Use IABot to archive sources.

:I'm not sure how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• Mixed date format in citations. The User:Ohconfucius/script/MOSNUM dates.js date format script will fix this and also catch the GEOCOMMA errors. Consider using it regularly!

:{{fixed}} -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

• No images.

:I checked flickr and there aren't any. Next month I will be travelling through the are and will take and add pictures. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

{{ping|420Traveler}} On hold. Not that much to change. Some of these are things you should consider for all your pages. Not going to go after the "US-XX" format for Kansas since that's a project standards issue as identified earlier. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

:{{ping|Sammi Brie}} Most issues are fixed, just had a couple questions. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

::{{u|420Traveler}}, the link to the bot is [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotsingle] — check the checkbox. You'll need to authenticate with your Wikipedia account. You can also do a list (say, all Kansas highways) at [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotqueue]. I made the other fix; let me know if that works. No images is fine, I was just noting it. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

:::{{u|Sammi Brie}}, It looks good. Also thanks, I figured out how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 05:31, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

:::: It's ready, {{u|420Traveler}}. Consider going through all your GAs and GANs and archiving the sources. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:02, 30 July 2021 (UTC)