Talk:Leanna Cavanagh/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:12, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

• The use of "young age" in the second paragraph of the lead feels repetitive.
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• "her mother died at a young age" - was her mother young when she died or did she die when Leanna was young? Clarify.
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "as a troublemaker".
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "reconcile".
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "time off from school".
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "the party".
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "situation to Liam".
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• "have been" {{right arrow}} "had been"
• {{Done}} – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
• Recite references at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE.
• Are there particular places where sentences with quote(s) aren't recited? I can't see any; I can see a bunch of sentences that use multiple quotes but they are derived from the same cite at the end of the sentence? – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

::: {{re|DarkGlow}} After "[her] remark" and for "floods of hate" in #Reception. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:50, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

:::: {{Done}} now! That's the section I wrote prior to learning of WP:QUOTE LOL. – DarkGlow • 20:54, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

• References are archived. {{smiley}}
• Websites are linked. {{smiley}}
• Everything else looks good.
• Thank you! – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)