Talk:Lee Joannes/GA1

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 14:00, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this one, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 14:00, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

:Thanks {{U|Kosack}}. Appreciate the review! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:28, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Initial review

• Could do with a reference for his full name as I can't see it referenced in the main text anywhere.

• The sentence "Joannes remarried in 1972 to Delia Joannes" makes it sound like her name was Joannes already and he married a family member.

In all honesty {{re|Gonzo_fan2007}}, I'm having difficulty in finding anything really to complain about! Two minor issues above perhaps, so placed on hold until these are addressed. Kosack (talk) 19:59, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

:Thanks {{U|Kosack}}. I believe both comments have been addressed. His full name can be found in the Packers.com ref, and I have removed Delia's name from the article (her maiden name isn't in any references). « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:48, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Happy to promote this. Well written, suitably referenced and no copyvio concerns. Nice work. Kosack (talk) 20:52, 2 May 2019 (UTC)