Talk:Louis Crews/GA1

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 23:35, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.
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• Added college basketball coaches in the US due to there being no Jarvis coaches cat and added Yale alumni cat.
• In the lead should there be a comma after Lewis? {{done}}
• Actually, I don't think noting that there was sometimes misspelling is that important for the lead - I removed that part.
• Shouldn't we include the womens basketball championships in the infobox?
• Added.
• Infobox says when they won the two titles but body doesn't. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
• Added.
• And the Alcorn and Albama baseball also since the football SIAC is included. {{done}}
• Added.
• unlink Southern Intercollegiate Athletic Conference in later life. Its already linked in the body. {{done}}
• Delinked.
• What's the Lewis Crews Classic? {{done}}
• Explained.
• Can we expand a little more and say its the [https://aamusports.com/news/2023/9/7/football-what-to-know-louis-crews-classic-2023.aspx first home game of every season]. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
• Added.
• Where are the Javier records from in the record table? {{done}}
• Jarvis Christian? [https://www.newspapers.com/article/alabama-tribune/117145701/ Here] - should I add it in as a ref?
• There's already a ref at the end of the table so yes add ref 2 also.
• Added.
• Do you think we should say something about all three of those schools being historically black? Idk {{done}}
• Eh, I don't think its needed, but I can add it if you want.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:05, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

• {{ping|WikiOriginal-9}} BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:56, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
• {{ping|WikiOriginal-9}} BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:18, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
• "the women's basketball team to two championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) crown in 1953." Having SCAC on just the baseball part makes it sound like the basketball titles weren't SCAC. Were they? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:11, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
• {{ping|WikiOriginal-9}} I would assume the basketball titles were SCAC, as the [https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/748322502/?terms=alcorn%20women%27s%20basketball&match=1 men's team at least were in the SCAC] and I don't think I've seen an instance were the men were one conference and women the other, so I changed the wording to {{tq|and led the women's basketball team to two South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a SCAC title in 1953}} — does that work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

All issues have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)