Talk:Lucian/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:36, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:36, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

=Criteria=

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GA Criteria:

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  • :2.d {{tick}} (35.5% is highest, however it is only due to both site and article containing a quoted paragraph from Lucian.)
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=Prose Suggestions=

==Lede==

  • {{xt|frequently poked fun at superstition, religious practices, and belief in the paranormal.}} suggest {{xt|frequently ridiculed superstition, religious practices, and belief in the paranormal.}}.
  • {{xt|sculptor, but, after a failed attempt at sculpting, he ran away to pursue an education in Ionia.}} suggest {{xt|sculptor, but after a failed attempt at sculpting, ran away to pursue an education in Ionia.}}.

==Life==

  • {{xt|most people in the Hellenistic world were joining Mystery Cults, }} suggest {{xt|most people in the Hellenistic world joined Mystery Cults, }}
  • {{xt|After this point, he disappears from the historical record entirely.[14] Nothing is known about his death.}} suggest {{xt|After this point, he disappears from the historical record entirely, and nothing is known about his death.}}.

==Legacy==

  • {{xt|Lucian's writings were forgotten during the Middle Ages,}} suggest {{xt|Lucian's writings were lost during the Middle Ages,}}
  • {{Ping| Katolophyromai}} That is all of my comments, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:10, 20 February 2018 (UTC)