Talk:Madame LaQueer/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Averageuntitleduser (talk · contribs) 13:46, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
Saving my spot for this! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 13:46, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
:Thank you! Looking forward to resolving any concerns you may have. ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:42, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
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=Well-written=
- I would add her DOB to the first sentence of "Early life and education", so that you don't have to source it in the infobox.
- {{Done}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- Link "drag" (and depending on your stance towards MOS:DUPLINK delink it in the "Career" section)
- {{Done}} Linked first appearance in article body ("Early life and education") ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- {{tq|Melendez is a drag performer who competed as Madame LaQueer on season 4 of the American television series RuPaul's Drag Race.}} — I would clarify that this took place around 2011—12
- {{Done}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- {{tq|the WWE-inspired drag wrestling challenge}} — "the show's WWE-inspired"
- I've clarified that the second episode was WWE-inspired. ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- {{tq|(alongside Chad Michaels)}} — a tie, or as a duo? (it seems to be the latter, I would rephrase this)
- Changed "alongside" to "tied with". ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- I would delink "single"
- {{Done}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- Link "grand marshal"
- {{Done}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- {{tq|the beauty department at a}} — change "at" to "of"
- {{Done}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- Link "came out"
- {{Done}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- A couple words on what a "drag daughter" entails? Although, I'd understand if you can't make it work.
- Generally speaking, "drag mothers" are mentors of "drag daughters", teaching the art of drag to the next generation. I've added "(or mentees)" as helpful context. ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- I like the change! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 19:20, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- In the external links, update the IMDb name.
- Good catch! The name change was very recent. :) ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:07, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
=Verifiable with no original research=
Most sources are reliable. Refs 2 and 7 are fine in their use as primary sources. WP:VG/S calls Screen Rant marginally reliable, but I'll allow it as it's not being used for controversial info. Earwig shows an absurdly low score of 6%. I've added a few more params to the sources, but otherwise:
- Refs 19 and 21 are the same
- I think you've addressed the duplicate ref? ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:01, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- Whoops! They are different, they just looked very similar at a glance. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 19:20, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
==Spot-check==
- {{Cite web |last=Nolfi |first=Joey |date=2024-01-23 |title='RuPaul's Drag Race' season 4 star Madame LaQueer comes out as trans |url=https://ew.com/rupauls-drag-race-madame-la-queer-comes-out-trans-8548325 |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240124062054/https://ew.com/rupauls-drag-race-madame-la-queer-comes-out-trans-8548325 |archive-date=2024-01-24 |access-date=2024-01-24 |website=Entertainment Weekly |publisher=Dotdash Meredith |language=en |issn=1049-0434 |oclc=21114137}}
- Looks good {{y}}
- {{Cite web |last=Coker |first=Matt |date=2017-11-06 |title=She's Here, She's LaQueer: RuPaul's Madame Helps Puerto Rico, Rips Trump |url=https://www.ocweekly.com/shes-here-shes-laqueer-8549480/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20191205085210/https://ocweekly.com/shes-here-shes-laqueer-8549480/ |archive-date=2019-12-05 |access-date=2023-12-01 |website=OC Weekly |publisher=Duncan McIntosh Company}}
- Safe assumption, looks good {{y}}
- {{Cite magazine |last=Tenreyro |first=Tatiana |date=2017-11-02 |title=Puerto Rican 'Drag Race' Alumni Talk Show's Impact on the Island Ahead of Benefit Concert |url=https://www.billboard.com/culture/pride/puerto-rico-benefit-rupauls-drag-race-queens-8022331/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20211229145413/https://www.billboard.com/culture/pride/puerto-rico-benefit-rupauls-drag-race-queens-8022331/ |archive-date=2021-12-29 |access-date=2023-12-01 |magazine=Billboard |publisher=Eldridge Industries |language=en-US |issn=0006-2510}}
- I would remove this from the Twitch sentence, but as it's covered by the other source, its still an overall pass {{y}}
- {{Cite magazine |last=Stransky |first=Tanner |date=2012-02-07 |title='RuPaul's Drag Race' week 2 query: Was 'WTF' one of the most outrageous challenges ever? |url=https://ew.com/article/2012/02/07/rupauls-drag-race-season-4-episode-2/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20211010013305/https://ew.com/article/2012/02/07/rupauls-drag-race-season-4-episode-2/ |archive-date=2021-10-10 |access-date=2023-12-01 |magazine=Entertainment Weekly |language=en}}
- Looks good {{y}}
- {{Cite web |last=Hurley |first=Sam |date=2022-02-23 |title=RuPaul's Drag Race: Drag Mothers and Daughters Who Have Competed for the Crown |url=https://screenrant.com/rupauls-drag-race-drag-mothers-daughters-competed-crown/ |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20231029174948/https://screenrant.com/rupauls-drag-race-drag-mothers-daughters-competed-crown/ |archive-date=2023-10-29 |access-date=2023-12-01 |website=Screen Rant |language=en}}
- Looks good {{y}}
- {{Cite web |last=Tormoen |first=Erik |date=2017-11-04 |title=Drag Queens Fill First Ave for Puerto Rico |url=https://www.minnesotamonthly.com/travel-recreation/drag-queens-fill-first-ave-for-puerto-rico/ |access-date=2023-12-01 |website=Minnesota Monthly |publisher=Greenspring Media |language=en-US |archive-date=2022-11-27 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20221127154911/https://www.minnesotamonthly.com/travel-recreation/drag-queens-fill-first-ave-for-puerto-rico/ |url-status=live }}
- Looks good {{y}}
- {{Cite web |last=Gohl |first=Cody |date=2012-05-06 |title=12 "Drag Race" Drag Mothers And Their Drag Daughters |url=https://www.logotv.com/news/4qqty9/drag-race-drag-mothers-daughters |url-status=live |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20220929142412/https://www.logotv.com/news/4qqty9/drag-race-drag-mothers-daughters |archive-date=2022-09-29 |access-date=2023-12-11 |website= |publisher=Logo TV |language=en}}
- Looks good {{y}}
=Broad in its coverage=
A short article, but the sources are often brief, so it does a nice job pulling them together.
- To cover all bases, perhaps a sentence about her music ventures? I couldn't find anything other than the Queerty source, but using it, perhaps: "She has also produced mixes for fashion shows, pageants, and talent shows."
- If there were more sourcing about music, I'd agree, but in this case I don't think it's a defining thing to add about her because of limited coverage. ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:09, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
- I think that's reasonable Averageuntitleduser (talk) 19:20, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
=Neutral=
Looks good on this front.
- {{Like}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 18:59, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
=Stable=
No recent content disputes or edit wars.
- {{Like}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 18:59, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
=Illustrated=
Images are correctly labeled as creative commons. They are both relevant to the topic.
- {{Like}} ---Another Believer (Talk) 18:59, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
=Summary=
This article is so charming, it's something you really only see in short GANs. Just the variety, the images, the GoDaddy website. I love it! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 18:41, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
:@Averageuntitleduser Thank you for reviewing! I believe I've addressed your concerns so far. I'll see if you add any other concerns based on the spot-check, or otherwise. I've got 6 or so similar bios for drag performers at GAN, if you're interested, otherwise thanks again for taking time to review! ---Another Believer (Talk) 19:11, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
:: {{ping|Another Believer}} Just that one Twitch sentence, and I think that's it! And I've got my eyes on those other bios, I'd be happy to give them a spin as well. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 19:55, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
:::@Averageuntitleduser {{Done}} Thanks again! ---Another Believer (Talk) 20:31, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
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