Talk:Michaela Tabb/GA1

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 16:35, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.
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3. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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6. It is broad in its coverage.
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9. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
10. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
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12. It is stable.
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15. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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18. Overall: Pass
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• {{tq|Tabb established significant milestones for women officials in professional cue sports}} seems incomplete to me. Maybe add {{tq|when she began refereeing professionally on the pool circuit in 1997}}
• Reworded Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

• Could this be moved above "Playing career"? Just timeline wise, I feel it makes sense to mention her youth before her playing career
• Moved Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
• It is also odd that her birthday is mentioned under playing career but nothing else
• Moved birthdate to personal life Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

• Ref 13 needs author (Hector Nunns)
• Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 14 doesn't mention {{tq|On 20 January 2008, she refereed her first Triple Crown final at the 2008 Masters}} or the final score of the Welsh Open
• Whoops, the citation is in the wrong place. Fixed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for looking at this {{u|HickoryOughtShirt?4}}. I've covered the above Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)