Talk:Mink Nutcharut/GA1

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Nominator: {{User|BennyOnTheLoose}} 22:46, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 07:18, 4 January 2025 (UTC)

:@BennyOnTheLoose all my points have been made. please address them and the GA shall be yours brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 10:48, 13 January 2025 (UTC)

::Also, the tables have headers in the middle, breaking MOS:COLHEAD brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 11:15, 13 January 2025 (UTC)

:::These tables get a lot of discussion at WP:SNOOKER. I've changed the format. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:16, 13 January 2025 (UTC)

hi! brachy08, professional minecraft youtuber and GA reviewer here. can’t think of a good intro so... here you go~!

• A lot of formatting issues here and there, which kinda deters me from passing the article.

Violation unlikely (26.5%)

• FN 7: Does not support {{Tq|defeating Siripaporn 5–2 in the final}} I'd suggest re-writing it to {{Tq|She later won it in 2016}}. Aged 16 could be redundant.

:I've corrected the score and added a ref. I think retaining her age is relevant as she would have been competing against players up to several years older, in an Under-21 championship. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:30, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

• FN 8 is redundant in {{Tq|and retained the title at the next two annual tournaments}}

:*Removed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:30, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

• Can you explain {{Tq|contested by players who did not reach the quarter-finals of the main event}}?

:*It means it was was only open to players who did not reach the quarter-finals of the main event, but as I couldn't find any coverage of that apart from results that didn't explain this restriction, I've removed it. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:30, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

• FN 14 is a bit... formatted incorrectly (I could see some wikitext)
• FN 22 does not support {{Tq|registering wins over Kimberly Cullen 3–0, Carlie Tait 3–0 and Jaique Ip 4–0 to reach the final, against Ng. Nutcharut won the final 4–2, gaining her first ranking tournament win}}
• FN 26 does not support {{Tq|She defeated Rebecca Kenna 5–1 in the semi-finals before facing Wendy Jans in the final.}}
• {{Tq|Jans missed the black into the yellow pocket, leaving it over the middle, allowing Nutcharutto clinch her first women's world title.}} You accidentally merged "Nutcharut" and "to".
• Victory is misspelled as "victorty".
• Can you explain the {{Tq|In 2023–24, Nutcharut won two of the season's eight ranking tournaments, and was runner-up at three.}}?

:*Amended, but I'm not sure whether it addresses your point. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:16, 13 January 2025 (UTC)

• {{Tq|She finished the season in top place in the rankings.}} seems a bit redundant, as it could refer to Ng, going a bit out of topic.

• There is one citation needed tag not addressed yet.
• {{Tq|first century}} and {{Tq|top ranked}} are missing a hyphen.

:*first century doesn't need one in "first century break"; it was her first, not a first-century one.

• {{Tq|Added}} is missing a comma
• {{Tq|she defeated 96th seed Adam Duffy 6‍–‍3, but then lost to 65th seed Michael White in a deciding frame in the second round.}} Seed numbers are trivial.
• FN 32 does not support Nutcharut being {{Tq|top-ranked player}}

:*The ref number may have shifted, but the sources have "fellow Asian stars Mink Nutcharut and Ng On Yee showed their dominance by securing five ranking event titles between them as the Thai player finished top of the world rankings" and "For world number one Nutcharut there was the consolation of having done enough during the tournament to secure the world number one ranking at the end of the season"

• All images seem to be licensed under CC-0 or CC BY-SA 4.0, but I do have my own suspicions though. (im assuming good faith)

These stuff aren't mandatory for the GA review, but would help in the long run. Take this with a grain of salt though, I don't have much experience with FAs

• {{Tq|She won the 2022 World Women's Snooker Championship, defeating Wendy Jans 6–5 on the final black to become the tournament's first Thai winner. She lost the 2024 final in the deciding frame against Bai Yulu.}} can be written in a different way to make it a bit more interesting and hook-ish.
• It can do serious copy-editing to make the article a good read.

:*Typically I send an article to WP:GOCE before nominating it as a FAC, but in this case I think that while there's enough depth for a GA, there just aren't the right sources available to bring it up to FA standards. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:32, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

:Fair enough. brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 00:36, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

::Thanks, {{u|Brachy0008}}. I've acted on your comments, except where noted in replies above. Please let me know about anything else required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:24, 13 January 2025 (UTC)

:::very well, it’s a pass. brachy08 _{(chat here lol)} 00:12, 14 January 2025 (UTC)

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