Talk:Mujhse Dosti Karoge!/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:30, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:30, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• Improve the non-free rationale for the poster with this template.

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:00, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Other than that, the infobox looks great.
• Add a comma after Rani Mukerji and "Pooja Sahani (Mukerji)".

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:00, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Pooja, Raj and Tina" {{Right arrow}} "Pooja, Raj, and Tina"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "attracted Tina" {{Right arrow}} "attracted to Tina"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "with via e-mail" {{Right arrow}} "with him via e-mail"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "her name".

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "despite of being" {{Right arrow}} "despite being"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "realises" {{Right arrow}} "realizes"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "apologise" {{Right arrow}} "apologize"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Plot is under 700 words, so they're no problems with WP:FILMPLOT.

• Instead of citing the same source for every character, might I suggest adding a simple "Credits adapted from Bollywood Hungama.{{dummy reference|2}}" to the top of the section?

:: {{not done}} Because there are source I cited from Rediff.com and Box Office India. The actor who plays young Tina does not mentioned on Bollywood Hungama, as well as Raja Vaid. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "on 1996" {{Right arrow}} "on the 1996"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Mukerji, Roshan".

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "stars in the film, because" {{Right arrow}} "star in the film because"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "looks was the" {{Right arrow}} "looks were the"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• The [https://web.archive.org/web/20140807072515/http://www.bollywoodhungama.com/moviemicro/cast/id/57071 reference] after "Yash Raj Films" doesn't say Aditya Chopra was a producer.

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• In the second paragraph, can you explain when the actors were cast?

:: No sources or links mentioned that. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "more ... about" {{Right arrow}} "more [...] about"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "described its soundtrack" {{Right arrow}} "described its soundtrack as"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "mixed response" {{Right arrow}} "mixed responses"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "across India".

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "total grossing" {{Right arrow}} "total gross"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "(US$4.7 million)".

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "It was opened" {{Right arrow}} "It opened"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• The last sentence should be moved to #Critical_reception, which should be retitled #Reception.

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "of the leads".

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• "part as a" {{Right arrow}} "part as"

:: Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:38, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

• Try archiving all sources (either manually or with [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotsingle this tool]).