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Talk:Para-alpine skiing classification/GA1

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 21:04, 8 October 2012 (UTC)

I'll review this but the review likely won't start for at least another 48 hours.♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:04, 8 October 2012 (UTC)

;Lead

  • {{tq|i=y|" Some classification systems are governed by bodies other than International Paralympic Committee Alpine Skiing for systems not used in international competition." }}Such as?
  • Special Olympics. added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
  • {{tq|i=y|"intellectual disabilities"}} Mental disabilities?
  • No, it is always referred to as "intellectual disabilities"."mentally retarded" has been deprecated for a generation. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

:::Political correctness eh?♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:47, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

  • {{tq|i=y|"The first classification systems for para-alpine skiing were developed in Scandinavia,"}} Do we have a year/period for this?
  • 1960s. Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
  • Link Sit skiers and mono-ski
  • The two point to the same article, which duly informs the reader that they are not quite the same thing. Added a link to mono-ski. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

;Definition

  • Do LW1, LW2, LW3, LW4, LW5/7, LW6/8, and LW9 have articles? And the C and B class ones? Link them?
  • Linked. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
  • What does Locomotor Winter mean?
  • It's just an English word. Linked to the Wiktionary article. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
  • Remove excessive links to Amputation, Paraplegia and Visual acuity, just once will do.
  • Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

;Governance

  • International Paralympic Committee Alpine Skiing. Link?
  • Linked. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
  • {{tq|i=y|" ISMWSF In 2003, ISMWSF merged with ISOD, and changed its name to the International Wheelchair and Amputee Sports Federation (IWAS) in 2004."}} Beginning of the sentence doesn't make sense.
  • Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
  • All issues addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:19, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Article seems to provide a pretty decent overview of this. However, several photographs might help liven it up a little, only if relevant of course.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:47, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Issues addressed, so article passes. Wizardman 04:13, 17 November 2012 (UTC)