Talk:Phyllis Edness/GA1

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Nominator: {{User|Arconning}} 06:16, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 17:12, 21 June 2025 (UTC)

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Hi @Arconning, thanks for reviewing my FL nom. I'll review this to say thanks!

I think this article needs a bit more detail to meet broadness requirements. Searching [https://bnl.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/search/searchterm/Phyllis%20Edness/field/all/mode/exact/conn/and] gives loads more sourcing. I found the following information in the first 15 or 45 results from that search:

• [https://bnl.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/collection/BermudaNP02/id/139947/rec/3]: Some sourcing on her beating the Bermudan record and running faster than the Olympic qualifying standard
• [https://bnl.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/collection/BermudaNP02/id/139542/rec/6]: Original announcement the would participate in the Games
• [https://bnl.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/collection/BermudaNP02/id/141476/rec/8]: Improved personal best
• [https://bnl.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/collection/BermudaNP02/id/142336/rec/12]: Apparently she struggled with the climate
• [https://bnl.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/collection/BermudaNP02/id/142368/rec/14]: A description of how she performed in the race
• [https://bnl.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/collection/BermudaNP02/id/141482/rec/15]: Information about her 200 m performance

I think once all the sourcing found by that search has been incorporated, I think this will be sufficiently broad.

• {{ping|It is a wonderful world}}, I've done this! Arconning (talk) 03:53, 22 June 2025 (UTC)

:@It is a wonderful world Checking in again. Arconning (talk) 11:54, 25 June 2025 (UTC)