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Talk:Regine Velasquez/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aussie Article Writer (talk · contribs) 12:25, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

  1. Is it well written?
  2. :A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct: {{GAList/check|y}}
  3. :: Quite clear, to my mind very good, though I tend to get a bit lost as many of the musical and film career sections are just lists of her accomplishments, albums, songs and films — this is quite acceptable, by the way, but it can make reading a little less interesting than it could be. This doesn't preclude it from GA though, good work!
  4. :B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation: {{GAList/check|y}}
  5. :: Great work on the structure, I think it works well.
  6. Is it verifiable with no original research?
  7. :A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline: {{GAList/check|y}}
  8. ::
  9. :B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines: {{GAList/check|y}}
  10. :: I'm working through this - there are a lot so this is going to take some time! Going to do this section by section:
  11. :::: Thanks for initiating the review Aussie Article Writer, happy to address them as they come. Pseud 14 (talk) 21:11, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
  12. :::Early life - all references check out, I took the liberty of removing two which were only tangentially related.
  13. :::Music career
  14. ::::1986–1989: Career beginnings and Regine - all references check out
  15. ::::1990–1993: Nineteen 90 and Reason Enough - all references check out
  16. ::::1994–1998: Listen Without Prejudice and My Love Emotion - all references check out
  17. ::::1999–2003: R2K and Reigne
  18. ::::* "Velasquez headlined and directed the R2K Concert at the Araneta Coliseum in April 2000" - I can't see where the reference shows this...
  19. :::::: In the article, it is mentioned that she conceptualized and directed the concert herself. Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  20. ::::* "She performed "Cry" with Mandy Moore to promote the theatrical release of Moore's film A Walk to Remember." the article only says she did a duet with Mandy Moore
  21. :::::: Replaced with source that mentions them performing the song. Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  22. ::::2004–2007: Covers Vol. 1 and Vol. 2 - all references I can read check out (one is subscription only, the other is in Tagalog which I sadly don't read or speak)
  23. ::::: The article written in Tagalog I cited for her win (the headline of which is written in English which mentions her win), otherwise the first citation also supports the claim. I only used the subscription only source, as it is an archive of The Manila Bulletin. The full article can be found on the internet but is posted on a forum so I did not use that as a source Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  24. :::::: No probs, I only noted I couldn't read them, I assumed good faith they were correct. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 17:22, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  25. ::::2008–2012: Low Key and professional hiatus - all references check out
  26. ::::2013–2016: Silver Rewind and Hulog Ka Ng Langit - all references check out
  27. ::::2017–present: R3.0, The Clash and Idol Philippines - all references I can read check out (one was in Tagalog)
  28. ::::: The Tagalog article mentions her hosting the show to support the claim, but it was written in English network will also debut a new musical variety show titled "Full House Tonight" hosted by Regine Velasquez-Alcasid. Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  29. :::::: thanks - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 17:22, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  30. :::Acting career - all references I can read check out (some are in Tagalog)
  31. ::::: Ref 157, Ref 158, Ref 168, Ref 175, Ref 186: These Tagalog-written articles were used to source non-contentious information (e.g. referring to movie titles, actors she worked with or the roles she played), as I could not find a reliable substitute source that is written in English. Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  32. :::::: No probs, I only noted I couldn't read them, I assumed good faith they were correct. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 17:22, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  33. :::Artistry
  34. ::::Influences - all references I can read check out (one article is not in English)
  35. ::::: Ref 196 - Written in Cebuano and supports claim of the subject pointing out that Sharon Cuneta was her music idol and inspiration. Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  36. :::::: Thanks. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 17:22, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  37. ::::Musical style and themes - all references check out
  38. ::::Voice and timbre - all references I could access check out (I was unable to read "The Changing Face of the Filipino: A Salesian Tribute to the Youth of the Philippines")
  39. :::::: Quick search should direct you to the [https://www.google.ca/search?tbm=bks&hl=en&q=regine+velasquez+soprano excerpt] A painfully shy Regine Velasquez emerged from the shadows with a story attributing her soprano voice to singing lessons administered by her father. Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  40. ::::::: Ah, so it does! Great, checks out. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 17:22, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  41. :::Legacy and influence - all references check out
  42. :::Other activities
  43. ::::Philanthropy - all references check out
  44. ::::Product endorsements - all references check out
  45. :::Personal life - all articles I could read check out (one was in Tagalog)
  46. :::: Ref 248: Article mentions date that couple announced their engagement and plan to get married in the same year: announcement ni Ogie Alcasid bukas, August 8. Pseud 14 (talk) 07:20, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  47. :::::: Thanks. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 17:22, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  48. :::Awards and recognition - all articles check out
  49. :C. It contains no original research: {{GAList/check|y}}
  50. ::
  51. :D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism: {{GAList/check|y}}
  52. :: [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Regine+Velasquez&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 Earwig] shows one article that seems to have plagiarised from Wikipedia, seems fine to me.
  53. Is it broad in its coverage?
  54. :A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic: {{GAList/check|y}}
  55. ::
  56. :B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style): {{GAList/check|y}}
  57. ::
  58. Is it neutral?
  59. :It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each: {{GAList/check|y}}
  60. ::
  61. Is it stable?
  62. : It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute: {{GAList/check|y}}
  63. ::
  64. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
  65. :A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: {{GAList/check|y}}
  66. ::File:Regine Velasquez Silver Rewind 2013 (cropped).jpg - cc-by-sa-2.0
  67. ::File:Regine Velasquez Korea Launch 1996 (cropped).jpg - cc-by-sa-2.0
  68. ::File:Regine Velasquez R2K Concert 2000.jpg - cc-by-sa-2.0
  69. ::File:QueenRegine.jpg - public domain
  70. ::File:Regine Velasquez 2015 Family Values Awards (cropped).jpg - cc-by-sa-2.0
  71. ::File:Barbra Streisand 2 Allan Warren.jpg - cc-by-sa-2.0
  72. ::File:Regine Velasquez Fragrance Launch (cropped).jpg - cc-by-sa-2.0
  73. :B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: {{GAList/check|y}}
  74. :: all photos are appropriate and relevant to the article
  75. Overall:
  76. :Pass or Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}
  77. ::Sorry for the time this took, I checked all the references (hopefully I didn't miss any!). I have to say, this is a most meticulously references and detailed article about the singer, excellent work. If you took this to FA, I think you might want to make it less "list like", but given the scope of her work, fame and achievements I also think that this sort of thing goes with the territory! Great work, this passes GA status. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 04:33, 4 July 2021 (UTC)