Talk:Reid Detmers/GA1

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Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 16:27, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.
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5. : b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
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8. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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    1. :: Citation 22 is missing an author although it is applicable
    2. ::: Fixed. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
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       5. : d. (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
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       8. It is broad in its coverage.
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              2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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              6. It is stable.
              7. : No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
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                 1. :: No edit wars, only 2 reverts, one by an ip vandal, the other was someone who undid their own edit
                 2. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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                 12. :: I have just a few suggestions that I am going to list here to improve the article
                 • In the early life section, the source provided doesn't give the name of Detmers' mother
                 • Added source with mother's name. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
                 • Could we get stats provided for the cape cod season
                 • Added stats. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
                 • Could we split the major leagues section in to each year with a level 2 heading (example): 2021: (something that happened), 2022: (something that happened), 2023: (something that happened) (without the parentheses)
                 • Added subheadings to major league section. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
                 • Needs to be updated for the 2023 season
                 • Updated prose to reflect 2023 season. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
                 • I believe way down at the bottom of the article, in the awards and achievements box, there should be one for pitcher of an immaculate inning, correct me if I'm wrong
                 • As far as I can tell, no such navbox protocol exists, only for no-hitter pitchers. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

                 (Criteria marked 14px are unassessed)

                 @{{u|Cherrell410}}, I've made the requested changes. Let me know if there are any other concerns. Sewageboy (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2023 (UTC)