Talk:Riccardo Montolivo/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cloudz679 (talk · contribs) 12:40, 4 February 2014 (UTC)

I will review the article. C 679 12:40, 4 February 2014 (UTC)

Horrible prose, e.g. "Montolivo is a graduate of Atalanta", "Atalanta became fifth and promoted to Serie A by playoffs", "He was given number 18 jersey", "His good form earned his a spot", etc. Also contains "citation needed" tags, pov ("one of the best talents", "he was as one of the best", also grammatically incorrect), and incorrect grammatical tenses (e.g. "he expressed that the departure of Dainelli and Martin Jorgensen has weakened the team"). Jargon is over-present, e.g. brace, penned a contract (2x), opened his account). The article continues very much in the same vein and is not close to meeting the Good Article criteria at the moment. C 679 12:50, 4 February 2014 (UTC)