Talk:Roxen (singer)/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Am going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.
2. :a (prose): {{GAList/check|y}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
3. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
4. :a (reference section): {{GAList/check|y}} b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}} c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
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6. It is broad in its coverage.
7. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}} b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
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9. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
10. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
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12. It is stable.
13. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
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15. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
16. :a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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18. Overall:
19. :Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}
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• "Born in Cluj-Napoca on 5 January 2000 as Larisa Roxana Giurgiu," - more grammatically correct; {{Xt|Born Larisa Roxana Giurgiu on 5 January 2000 in Cluj-Napoca,}}
• "was released in the November of the same year" - {{xt|released later that year in November}}
• "In an interview," - please state who conducted the interview
• "she was revealed as the Romanian representative." - {{xt|revealed by TVR}}
• "were released on 21 February 2020." - I don't think the year is necessary here since it is already mentioned earlier in the paragraph
• ""Alcohol You" emerged as the winner of the national final." - please state the date for clarity
• Delink China per MOS:OVERLINK
• "Although TVR had considered sending "Alcohol You" to participate in the Eurovision Song Contest 2021," - {{xt|retaining "Alcohol You" as a song for

• Reference 2 is missing the author of the story
• Reference 7 should mention that it is written in Romanian

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:23, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

:{{ping|MWright96}} Thank you for the review, I have addressed all your points. Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:34, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

:*{{reply|Cartoon network freak}} Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 15 April 2020 (UTC)