Talk:SMS Brummer (1884)/GA1
GA Review
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Nominator: {{User|Parsecboy}} 11:34, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 16:57, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
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=Comments=
- "After a lengthy period in reserve, she joined the gunnery training school". 1. Is it known when this happened? 2, Could it be mentioned in the main article.
- Clarified in both places - this was in 1892
- The division leader image needs a US PD tag.
- Added
- Any chance you could email me a copy of Hildebrande et al Vol 2 page 147? Thanks.
- No problem at all.
- Except I don't think I have your email! If you email me, I'll send it over. Parsecboy (talk) 19:55, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::::Sent. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:04, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::::You should have it, let me know if it didn't go. Parsecboy (talk) 16:13, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- "a platform was built was installed aft"?
- Whoops!
=Checks=
- Passes Earwig.
- Sources look solid to me.
- Images are appropriately tagged.
- My German is rubbish, but several spot checks came up positive.
Gog the Mild (talk) 16:57, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Great stuff. That was easy. A nice little article. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:51, 25 November 2024 (UTC)