Talk:SMS Fuchs/GA1
GA Review
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| result = Passed. Hog Farm Talk 20:35, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: {{User|Parsecboy}} 12:17, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:44, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this one later this week. Hog Farm Talk 02:44, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Do you think it would be useful to have a link for the rifled terminology?
- Good idea
- "During this period, she joined her the gunboats Camäleon" - something has gone wrong here
- Fixed
- "Fuchs then served as a tender in Wilhelmshaven while the defensive mine barriers protecting the approaches to the Jade" - I don't think this is grammatical
- Probably something that got rewritten one too many times ;)
- "Her sailing rig was removed and a simple pole mast was fitted for signaling purposes." - is it known when the sailing rig had been re-installed after it was removed during the original period of inactivity?
- No, unfortunately
I'll do the source checks once this is complete; I still have the Groner source scan in my email. Hog Farm Talk 00:57, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
:Thanks again, HF! Parsecboy (talk) 19:17, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- "She was then struck from the naval register on 14 November." - source check is accurate
- "Fuchs was 41.2 meters (135 ft 2 in) long overall, with a beam of 6.69 m (21 ft 11 in) and a draft of 2.2 m (7 ft 3 in)." - source check is accurate
- "The ship was armed with a battery of one rifled 24-pounder muzzle-loading gun and two rifled 12-pounder muzzle-loading guns" - source check is accurate
No issues with the above; promoting. Hog Farm Talk 20:35, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
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