Talk:SMS Mücke/GA1
GA review
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Nominator: {{User|Parsecboy}} 15:48, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:42, 23 June 2025 (UTC)
Will review soon. Jaguar (talk) 15:42, 23 June 2025 (UTC)
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- "...which included plans to build at least eight vessels, to as many as eighteen armored warships" - try condensing to {{xt|ranging from plans to build eight to as many as eighteen armored warships.}}
- "as designed and 1,163 t (1,145 long tons) at full load" - I assume it increases at full load? Maybe {{xt|as designed, increasing to 1,163 t (1,145 long tons) at full load}}
- " and in that time, she was refitted with an additional 8.7 cm (3.4 in)" - {{xt|during which she was refitted}}
- " Mücke again served as the flagship for the unit, which also included Viper, Salamander, and their sister Camaeleon." - can be shortened to {{xt| with Mücke once again serving as flagship alongside Viper, Salamander, and their sister Camaeleon.}}
Another well-written article, nothing much from me this time other than those nitpicks. I see no reason to put it on hold, and will promote outright given it's comprehensiveness. Well done. {{icon|GA}} Jaguar (talk) 20:53, 24 June 2025 (UTC)