Talk:SMS Odin/GA1

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 12:19, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

I'll get on to this one shortly. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 12:19, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

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Comments

• "amidships" is a duplicate link
• no alt text for image (not required)
• did she have a name when she was a merchant ship?
• "where she served in the squadron"
• " 240 mm (9.4 in) thick amidships"
• what are "Marine type boilers" and should they be linked to an article?
• "The lengthened hull, which improved her hydrodynamic shape, and the improved boilers increased her speed by a full knot..."
• this might be an Americanism, but should "through the end of the war" be "through to the end of the war"?
• the "Fate" field in the infobox is formatted weirdly.

Short but sharp, given the lack of wartime action, but a pleasure to review. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 08:19, 2 May 2013 (UTC)

• Should all be addressed, and per comments at the Ägir review. Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 18:38, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
• No worries, promoting. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 02:13, 6 May 2013 (UTC)