Talk:Sammy Powers/GA1

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| result = Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:51, 26 February 2025 (UTC)

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Nominator: {{User|BeanieFan11}} 02:47, 26 February 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:33, 26 February 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:33, 26 February 2025 (UTC)

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  • {{tq|and appeared in a total of four APFA games}} --> {{tq|appearing in four APFA games}}
  • Done.
  • In the Early life section, you quote the "Marinette Eagle-Star" in the text, but the source is "Marinette Menominee EagleHerald"
  • The first quote is from the Eagle-Star (whose quote was mentioned in the EagleHerald), while the second comes from the Eagle-Herald. Thoughts?
  • Now I understand. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:50, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
  • {{tq|be the team's only "outsider" that year}} the quote for just one word isn't necessary. You could just say "non-local"
  • Changed.
  • Did he not play in 1920?
  • He did. I changed the one sentence to {{tq|He continued playing for the Packers in 1920.}} (I had accidentally put 1921 before)
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  • Spot checks: #1, #4, #7, #12 look good

That's all I got {{U|BeanieFan11}}. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:52, 26 February 2025 (UTC)

  • {{ping|Gonzo fan2007}} BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:32, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:50, 26 February 2025 (UTC)

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