Talk:Sarah Cooper/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

• Infobox looks good.
• Birthdate needs a source.
• Here and in other sections, add a comma after "Sheets".

:*Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:59, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

• Here and in other sections, change "lip syncing" and "lip synced" to "lip-syncing" and "lip-synced".

:*Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:59, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

• In the first reference, the Wayback Machine template isn't necessary or ideal to use since other references don't have it. May I suggest using "{{cite web|url=|title=|date=|first=|last=|website=|archive-url=|archive-date=|url-status=live|access-date=}}" this instead?
• Add a comma after "College Park".

:*Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:54, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "comedy in Atlanta".
• "of self-help book" {{right arrow}} "of a self-help book"
• Remove the commas after "performing on TikTok" and "economical political satire".
• The Princess Bride should link to The Princess Bride (film).

:*All done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:51, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

• This section looks good.

• This section looks good.

• This section looks good.

• PEOPLE.com {{right arrow}} People
• streamys.org {{right arrow}} Streamy Awards
• Mark references from The New Yorker with "|url-access=registration".
• Mark references from Adweek with "|url-access=subscription".
• Mark references from Financial Times with "|url-access=subscription".
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Time with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The Atlantic with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Vogue with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
• The two references after "the 2020 Democratic National Convention" are missing websites.
• The reference after the "Associated Press" should link to [https://apnews.com/article/donald-trump-finneas-coronavirus-pandemic-yahya-abdul-mateen-ii-helen-mirren-51b74aca9e28b94f7f58ede716101bf8 the source].

:*Hopefully now all done, but let me know about any outstanding issues with these. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:52, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

:::{{re|BennyOnTheLoose}} Everything else looks good but her specific birthdate still needs a source. c (talk) 15:14, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

::::Thanks for your constructive review, {{u|Some Dude From North Carolina}}. I've reached out to the co-nominator about the date of birth, as they may be able to resolve this more quickly than I can. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:23, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

:::::{{u|Some Dude From North Carolina}} - In the absence of a reliable source for Cooper's full date of birth being available, the article now just states her year of birth. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 22:59, 20 March 2021 (UTC)