Talk:Shang-Chi and the Legend of the Ten Rings/GA1

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Reviewer: BigLordFlash (talk · contribs) 16:29, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I'm gonna take this one. If you have any questions, just talk with me! BigLordFlash^talk 16:29, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

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Plot:

• {{tq|This allows some of the Dweller's soul eaters to escape, and the Ten Rings join forces with the villagers to fight them.}} - Why the Ten Rings joined forces with the villagers to fight the Dweller's soul eaters?

:{{comment}} In order to jointly deal with the threat of the soul eaters, I did some CE around the area to provide what I believe was additional context. Feel free to ping me back if unresolved. -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Cast:

• {{tq|Liu was knowledgeable in taekwondo, gymnastics, and Wing Chun, and learned and trained in tai chi, wushu, Muay Thai, silat, Krav Maga, jiu-jitsu, boxing, and street fighting for the film.}} - Excessive use of the word "and".

:{{done}} -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Development:

• {{tq|(...) and began looking at Asian and Asian-American filmmakers to potentially direct the film. The studios' goal was to explore Asian and Asian-American themes presented by Asian and Asian-American filmmakers,(...)}} Excessive use of the expression "Asian and Asian-American".

:{{fixed}} -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Choreography:

• {{tq|(...) rising and rising to almost ridiculous levels".}} - It doesn't look good.
• {{fixed}} - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Visual effects:

• {{tq|40 to 50 of its 168 shots were mostly digital, with the environment requiring digital pieces for the bus, buildings, and people.}} - It doesn't look good starting a sentence with a number.

:{{done}} -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Theatrical:

• {{tq|in over 4,200 theaters, with 400 IMAX, over 850 in premium large format, 1,500 3D, and 275 in specialty D-Box, 4DX, and ScreenX.}} - I think the way it's written is strange (400 IMAX, 1500 3D, etc.).

:{{done}} -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Critical response:

• {{tq|decision to give the "second-tier" Shang-Chi the same "over-the-top treatment" as major Marvel heores had broadened Marvel Studios'}} - It's "heroes".
• {{fixed}} - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

Important topics:

• Streaming viewership information should be in "Reception" section.
• Per MOS:FILM#Home media, that info should be in that section. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
• WP:DUPLINK all over the article (mostly in "Accolades" section).
• I've removed the DUPLINKS as highlighted by the script. The repetition within the Accolades table is acceptable. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

BigLordFlash^talk 18:17, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

• I've responded to a few of the notes above. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:00, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
• {{ping|BigLordFlash}} Hey there! I've also (hopefully) resolved some of the issues above. Let me know if there's any outstanding issues. :) -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2024 (UTC)

I think I'm going to pass this one. You really did a great job! Congratulations! :D BigLordFlash^talk 13:16, 3 January 2024 (UTC)

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