Talk:Silent Parade/GA3

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Nominator: {{User|Noleander}} 23:36, 4 April 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 18:58, 9 April 2025 (UTC)

:@OlifanofmrTennant - Hi. No pressure, but I wanted to make sure you haven't forgotten about this GA review. Noleander (talk) 02:50, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

• "president Woodrow Wilson" President should be capitalized

:: Done. Noleander (talk) 14:04, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

=== Background ===

• Under St. Louis massacre the second mention of "W. E. B. Du Bois" should be "Du Bois"

::Done. Noleander (talk) 22:25, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

• Ref 18 has a CS1 error

::Done. Noleander (talk) 22:25, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

• "New York City" should be "New York City, New York"

:: Done. Noleander (talk) 22:28, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

• Link "57th Street"

:: Done. Noleander (talk) 22:28, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

• Could more detail about the Emmett Till antilynching act be added?

:: Done. Noleander (talk) 14:04, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

• Several images are missing alt text

:: Done. Noleander (talk) 14:04, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

• I think World War 1 is abbreviated to "WWI" not "WW I"

:: Done. Noleander (talk) 14:04, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

• Linking source publishers is inconsistent

::Done ... I removed the few publisher links, so they are now all consistent.

• Several SFNs are missing page numbers

::For one cite (to a book) I added specific page numbers. Another cite to a book I removed entirely ... there was another cite there that was already sufficient. The remaining "sfn" cites that do not have page numbers are either web pages or small magazine articles under 4 pages. If there is a specific cite remaining that you feel needs a page number, let me know which one.

::: {{yo|OlifanofmrTennant}} I implemented all of the suggestions that were listed above. Noleander (talk) 14:04, 13 April 2025 (UTC)

::::{{yo|OlifanofmrTennant}} I implemented the two additional suggestions you made on 16 April. Let me know if any more work needs to be done to meet GA requirements. Noleander (talk) 18:31, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

:::::I made more than two notes Olliefant (she/her) 22:10, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

::::::@OlifanofmrTennant - I implemented all of the suggestions listed above. Noleander (talk) 22:28, 16 April 2025 (UTC)

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