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| result = Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:53, 24 February 2025 (UTC)

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Slick Lollar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: {{User|BeanieFan11}} 03:46, 21 February 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:31, 24 February 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:31, 24 February 2025 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written.

  1. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
  3. :a (references): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}}
    c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
    d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  4. It is broad in its coverage.
  5. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  6. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  7. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  8. It is stable.
  9. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
  10. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
  11. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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Overall:

Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}

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=Comments=

  • Consider linking to Back (American football) instead
  • {{tq|career, he worked}} comma isn't needed
  • {{tq|Lollar was born on October 4, 1905, in Alabama.[1] He grew up in Jasper, Alabama.[2]}} recommend combining these two sentences
  • {{tq|He was reported to have played "brilliantly" by The Birmingham News and in 1925, he also started playing punter.}} the two phrases in this sentence aren't connected to each other. Consider rewriting to split them up.
  • {{tq|Prior to coaching Howard's freshman football team, the "Bullpups", in 1927, he attended}} --> {{tq|In 1927, prior to coaching Howard's freshman football team (the "Bullpups"), he attended}}
  • {{tq|He was buried in his hometown of Jasper, Alabama.}}, you can drop "Alabama" since you mentioned this already
  • References: all are appropriate for what is being cited and are formatted consistently and appropriately
  • Spot checks: #3, 5, 7, 8, 11, 15 and 18 all look good.

Looks good {{U|BeanieFan11}}. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:09, 24 February 2025 (UTC)

  • {{ping|Gonzo fan2007}} Addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:26, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:53, 24 February 2025 (UTC)

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