Talk:Stan Gelbaugh/GA1

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 05:04, 18 July 2014 (UTC)

• I will have a look at this.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:04, 18 July 2014 (UTC)

• WP:LEAD clearly does not summarize the rest of the article. Each section of the article should be summarized.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:49, 20 July 2014 (UTC)

• Infobox highlights should each have a separate line.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:12, 20 July 2014 (UTC)

• The article is missing an early life section. Surely, he was a standout high school athlete. We need a paragraph saying who his parents are and where he is from. I would expect at least a brief description of his high school athletic career. The name of his high school is sort of required for this to be a GA quality bio. If you can find any stories about his recruitment, they should be added here.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:53, 20 July 2014 (UTC)

• IMO, links like Wake Forest should really attempt to point to 1983 Wake Forest Demon Deacons football team. Use {{tl|cfb link}} if necessary.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:01, 20 July 2014 (UTC)

• "Boomer Esiason in 1983 and Frank Reich in the 1984 season" would be less of an WP:EASTEREGG if it were something like "Boomer Esiason on the 1983 Terrapins and Frank Reich on the 1984 Terrapins"--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:15, 20 July 2014 (UTC)

• His wife is prominently mentioned in IC [2]. Her name should be in the article.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
• Mention any kids that they may have as well.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
• Does "Sam Wyche told him he thought Stan was good enough to play in the NFL" really support "Sam Wyche thought he was good enough to be a starter"?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)
• Can you provide the names of any of the "Nasty Boyz"?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:41, 25 July 2014 (UTC)

• I don't think I need to read this any further. There are way too may deficiencies. It fails WP:WIAGA.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:09, 25 July 2014 (UTC)