Talk:Standing asanas/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:21, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
:: Many thanks as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:29, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
=Criteria=
1. Prose {{Pass}}
2. Verifiability {{Pass}}
3. Depth of Coverage {{Pass}}
4. Neutral {{Pass}}
5. Stable {{Pass}}
6. Illustrations {{Pass}}
7. Miscellaneous {{Pass}}
=Comments=
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- " Gheranda Samhita" should probably be italicized in all instances, as it's the name of a book. Also, the use of diacritic marks should be consistent
:: Done.
- "Gheranda Samhita II.27" - Sometimes you use Arabic numerals to represent this such as 2.36, while other times, you use the Roman numerals. If this is the same section, it should be consistent
:: Good catch. Sorted.
- B. K. S. Iyengar is a duplink
:: Fixed.
- Krishnamacharya is a duplink, both in the shortened form and in his full name later.
:: Fixed.
- Vinyasas is a duplink
:: Fixed.
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- Can citation(s) be added to the table, especially for the English names, described by, and dates?
:: Added.
- "It is described in the 17th century hatha yoga text Gheraṇḍa Saṃhitā 2.36." - Doesn't seem to be in the citation, although I may have missed it
:: What you've quoted is the citation... I've repeated the ref to the online version for you.
- Refs 16-19 need accessdate
:: Done.
- I went ahead and fixed the dashes
:: Many thanks.
- If locations are known for the books, that would be nice to add, but not a big deal
:: Rather not, thanks.
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