Talk:Standing asanas/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:21, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

:: Many thanks as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:29, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

=Criteria=

1. Prose {{Pass}}

2. Verifiability {{Pass}}

3. Depth of Coverage {{Pass}}

4. Neutral {{Pass}}

5. Stable {{Pass}}

6. Illustrations {{Pass}}

7. Miscellaneous {{Pass}}

=Comments=

1.

  • " Gheranda Samhita" should probably be italicized in all instances, as it's the name of a book. Also, the use of diacritic marks should be consistent

:: Done.

  • "Gheranda Samhita II.27" - Sometimes you use Arabic numerals to represent this such as 2.36, while other times, you use the Roman numerals. If this is the same section, it should be consistent

:: Good catch. Sorted.

  • B. K. S. Iyengar is a duplink

:: Fixed.

  • Krishnamacharya is a duplink, both in the shortened form and in his full name later.

:: Fixed.

  • Vinyasas is a duplink

:: Fixed.

2.

  • Can citation(s) be added to the table, especially for the English names, described by, and dates?

:: Added.

  • "It is described in the 17th century hatha yoga text Gheraṇḍa Saṃhitā 2.36." - Doesn't seem to be in the citation, although I may have missed it

:: What you've quoted is the citation... I've repeated the ref to the online version for you.

  • Refs 16-19 need accessdate

:: Done.

  • I went ahead and fixed the dashes

:: Many thanks.

  • If locations are known for the books, that would be nice to add, but not a big deal

:: Rather not, thanks.

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Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 16:22, 27 April 2020 (UTC)

:Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 01:15, 28 April 2020 (UTC)