Talk:Suffer in Peace/GA1

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Suffer in Peace/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:53, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

• The producers should be mentioned with a source
• No source for the label or release date
• Say that is a coutnry album in the body of the article
• No source to state when it was recorded

:When did GANs require a reference to be put in the infobox? DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

::Since you don't add it in the body of the article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

:As everything was move to the body of the article, doesn't need sources here. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:58, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• at numbers 2 and 4 → at numbers two and four
• charts respectively → charts, respectively.
• and spawned three singles: → It spawned three singles,
• State a little regardging the performance of the singles
• Do the same regarding the music and lyric content
• You can mention the producers of the album
• Other promoton of the album? NBC and nother concert
• This needs to go more in depth

:How's it looking? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

::Great. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:31, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Redneck Crazy → release date of the album in between brackets
• title track and "Whiskey in My Water" → title track, released on... and "Whiskey in My Water" (DATE)
• "A Guy Walks Into a Bar" → same as previous

:Is this right? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

::I should have been more specific, the year is just fine. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:29, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• swampy banjo groove → swampy groove (as the source states)
• bar joke → old joke
• writers' round → people are not familiar with this concept
• Jason Aldean → wikilink
• while reminding himself of his religious upbringing → not on given source
• "Better in Boots" is a bro-country song → same as previous
• wanting to get a chance with an uptown girl → "getting the girl at the end of the day" (quite diferent)
• wanted it to have class and not be overly patriotic. → wanted it to show "gratitude and respect and to honor the troops"

:How's the change-up from the "writers' round" wording? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

::You need to explain the concept, the rest is fine. What do they do at those gaterings? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:17, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

:::How is it? DepressedPer (talk) 14:45, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

:Outstanding. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:00, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• to build up hype for the album → byas and doesn't come with the source
• certified Gold → remove wikilik + gold not on capital letter
• A music video directed by Jeff Venable was created for the singl → Its music video was directed by Jeff Venable
• numbers 47 and 52 on both the Billboard Hot Country Songs and Country Airplay charts respectively → numbers 47 and 52 on both the Billboard Hot Country Songs and Country Airplay charts, respectively
• A music video directed by Eric Welch was made for the single and premiered on June 15, 2015 → The single's music video was directed by Eric Welch and premiered on June 15, 2015
• instead push → change
• he will headline → he would headline
• All these charts need to be wikilinked only once

:{{Done}} DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• Suffer in Peace received mixed reviews from music critics divided over the production and lyrical content. → Suffer in Peace received mixed reviews from music critics. (The other sentence can and shoud be used in the lead)
• Jamie Parmenter of Renowned for Sound praised → Jamie Parmenter of Renowned for Sound commended
• pacing a bit slow → doesn't sound good
• despite praising → however, he lauded
• mixed reviews from music critics → The more mixed is Spin, where are the mixed reviews and the negative ones? There are a lot more reviews online. One Country.

:Added another Billboard article in there as well. DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• Missing total length

:{{Done}} DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• Use {{tlx|spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel.
• AllMusic is not a good source for album credits, unless it is a really old album. Use another one

:{{Done}} DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• Move it to the critical reception and rename the section as "Reception"
• Billboard 200 → wikilink
• 4 → four (numbers between 1 and 10 have to be spelled out)
• 2 → same as preivous
• selling 36,300 copies for the week, 41,629 units in total album activity (including streaming and TEA)→ selling 36,300 copies in tradional album sales and 41,629 units, including streaming and track equivalent album sales
• Move the above sources to the end of the sentence
• On the Billboard 200, it dropped to number 26 the week after and went to number 46 the week of May 30.[36][37] On the week of June 6, it fell to number 71,[38] another spot to 72 the next week,[39] and left the top 100 by dropping down to number 121 for the week of June 20 → I get the point; just say "It left the top 100 on the week of June 2, 2015 (?), spending (insert number of weeks) on the chart."
• ,before leaving the next week. → remove (don't need to make the same point twice)

:{{Done}} DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• Fine

• Remove → Songs have their own articles you mention peak positions

:{{Done}} DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• Same as previous, add the promo single release on the article

:I couldn't find the exact release date of the title track. DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

::Can you find a realiable source saying it was a promo single? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 02:39, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

:::The only reliable source of a promo single I can find is for "Poor Boy"/"Damn Good Friends" on Ebay UK. No source for the title track. DepressedPer (talk) 14:05, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Don't add it then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:07, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• The Spin source seems to be dead, archive it.
• Radio.com, Radio & Records, Youtube, Country Music Television, AllMusic, auspOp → not work
• Entertainment Weekly, Billboard and Roughstock are missing publisher. You have two option here, you either remove the publisher from all of the sources or add it here.
• Don't SHOUT in references

:Do you mean that Radio.com, YouTube, Country Music Television, AllMusic and auspOp shouldn't be recognized under "|website=" and Radio & Records shouldn't fall under "|magazine=" and just replace them with "|publisher="? DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

::Yes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:02, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

• {{ping|DepressedPer}} Do a release history secton in the end of the article. I made some minor changes, for example, including the producers on the backgroud section see if you are fie with them. I did everything section by section so it would be easier to spot.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

:{{ping|MarioSoulTruthFan}} I've added the release history section. DepressedPer (talk) 14:45, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

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