Talk:Talking to Yourself/GA1

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Reviewer: Unlimitedlead (talk · contribs) 00:05, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

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{{ping|MaranoFan}} It is a pleasure to work with you once again. I will take on this GA review; please bear with me. Unlimitedlead (talk) 00:05, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

:Thrilled that you are reviewing this, Unlimitedlead!! The pleasure is most definitely mutual :) --NØ 04:53, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.
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                 (Criteria marked 14px are unassessed)

                 Lead

                 • "Jepsen wrote it with songwriter Simon Wilcox, and Benjamin Berger and Ryan Rabin from its production team Captain Cuts": What are you referring to when you say "its"? Are Berger and Rabin not humans?
                 • I would introduce Schoolboy Records and Interscope Records as record labels.

                 Background and release

                 • "Jepsen announced that the album, titled The Loneliest Time, will be released on October 21, 2022": As you are talking about a past event, "will be" should be "would be".
                 • "Jepsen wrote "Talking to Yourself" alongside songwriter Simon Wilcox, and Benjamin Berger and Ryan Rabin from its production team Captain Cuts": See point above about the "its".
                 • "School Boy and Interscope Records released...": See point above about introducing them.
                 • "...along with a music video, as the album's third single, three days later": What are all these commas for?

                 Composition and lyrics

                 • "...Eli Heisler, Berger and Wilcox programmed it...": Shouldn't this comma be a semicolon?
                 • "pulsating, beat-driven": Why are there quotation marks? Is this someone speaking (if so, source the statement), or just scare quotes?

                 Critical reception

                 • "Consequence picked the track as...": Consequence should be in italics.

                 Images

                 Can you add {{cc-by-2.0}}

                 {{FlickreviewR|status=passed|author=Raph_PH|sourceurl=https://flickr.com/photos/69880995@N04/48986111926|archive=|reviewdate=2020-03-15 14:26:33|reviewlicense=cc-by-2.0|reviewer=FlickreviewR 2}} to File:Carly Rae Jepsen Primavera19 -146 (48986111926) (cropped).jpg?

                 :Unfortunately, my attempt to add this to the file page was thwarted by a message saying "You do not have the permission to review images, this edit was therefore disabled". Everything else addressed upto here!--NØ 04:53, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

                 ::How strange; it did not let me to so either. Oh well. In any case, I will pass this GA nomination. It was wonderful working with you again on a quality article, and I hope to see more from you soon. Unlimitedlead (talk) 12:17, 3 June 2023 (UTC)