Talk:Templario/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Will be conducting this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.
2. :a (prose): {{GAList/check|y}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
3. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
4. :a (reference section): {{GAList/check|y}} b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}} c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
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6. It is broad in its coverage.
7. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}} b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
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9. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
10. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
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12. It is stable.
13. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
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15. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
16. :a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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19. :Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}
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• Templario's nationality is missing from the lead
• "It is uncertain exactly when Templario made his professional wrestling career and if he has used a different ring name before adopting the "Templario" 'name" - repetition of the word "name"
• "around 2012/2013." - {{xt|around 2012 to 2013.}}
• Wikilink independent circuit

• Wikilink Calpulalpan and Pachuca
• "where he struck up a friendship with" - more concise; {{xt|where he began a friendship with}}

• Wikilink independent circuit
• "when CMLL does not require them for a show" - {{xt|does not require them to partake in a show}}
• "and Latigo and Trauma I in the semi-finals." - {{xt|semifinals}}
• "Templario was involved in a multi-man steel cage match where the loser of the match would be forced to unmask." - repetition of the word "match"
• "saw Templario escape the cage as the seventh man," - {{xt|the seventh man to do so}}?

• "but was the tenth man eliminated as he was pinned by Volador Jr" - {{xt|he was the tenth wrestler to be eliminated}}
• "Templario competed in the 2019 Reyes del Aire tournament, marking his participation in the annual tournament for the first time." - repetition of the word "tournament"
• "Templario started out by winning the 2020 Reyes del Aire lastly eliminating Star Jr." - think you want to add that this was the final of that tournament

• "on a show in Pittsburg, Pennsylvania" - typo; should be {{xt|Pittsburgh}} and wikilink the city and also the state of Pennysylvania
• "as part of ROH's Summer Supercard pay-per-view." - think there is something missing at the end of this sentence
• Wikilink Chicago and Illinois
• "on September 1, 2019, and defeating Jake Lander on their December 2019 show." - try not to repeat the year in the same sentence

• Note b: "No records of the tournament afinal have been found, it is uncertain if it was actually held." - typo; should be {{xt|final}}
• Furthermore, the same note is lacking a reliable source

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:22, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

• {{U|MWright96}} I have addressed all your comments, thank you for your input. MPJ-DK (talk) 16:40, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
• {{reply|MPJ-DK}} Very welcome :) Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:14, 11 April 2020 (UTC)