Talk:The Chronicles of Riddick: Escape from Butcher Bay/GA2

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Hi there, I'm MacMed and I am going to be handling this review. Let's get started :) Regards, MacMed^talk_stalk 23:13, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

The links are mostly good, there's just a few issues that I listed below. Regards, MacMed^talk_stalk 23:35, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

• The glitches link in the reception section is a redirect.

• The Vivendi Universal link in the first paragraph of Development is a redirect.

• The first Chronicles of Riddick' link in the same section is a redirect to the film article, though I think you meant to link it to an article about the video game franchise. Feel free to correct me if I am wrong about the target you want.

• The levels link in the Gameplay section is a redirect.

• The enhanced remake link in the lead is a redirect.

• Could you put something about the development in the lead? It summarizes every section but that.

:GA review (see here for criteria)

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Everything is good, just waiting on the lead fix.

1. It is reasonably well written.
2. :a (prose): {{GAList/check|aye}} b (MoS): {{GAList/check|aye}}

:* What do I have to fix? GamerPro64 (talk) 20:16, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

::I think I fixed the lead. GamerPro64 (talk) 23:26, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
2. :a (references): {{GAList/check|aye}} b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|aye}} c (OR): {{GAList/check|aye}}
3. :: I will do these tomorrow.
4. It is broad in its coverage.
5. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|aye}} b (focused): {{GAList/check|aye}}
6. ::
7. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
8. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|aye}}
9. ::
10. It is stable.
11. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|aye}}
12. ::
13. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
14. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|aye}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|aye}}
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16. Overall:
17. :Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|aye}}
18. :: Congrats.