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| result = Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:51, 18 February 2025 (UTC)

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Tommy Cronin/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: {{User|BeanieFan11}} 03:05, 16 February 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:37, 17 February 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:37, 17 February 2025 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written.

  1. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
  3. :a (references): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}}
    c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
    d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  4. It is broad in its coverage.
  5. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  6. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  7. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  8. It is stable.
  9. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
  10. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
  11. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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Overall:

Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}

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=Comments=

  • {{tq|Cronin was born on April 29, 1896, in Janesville, Wisconsin. He was of Irish descent.}} --> {{tq|Cronin, who was of Irsh descent, was born on April 29, 1896, in Janesville, Wisconsin.}}
  • Changed.
  • Link The Gazette (Janesville, Wisconsin)
  • Linked.
  • I wonder if {{tq|"wonderful little half,"}} would be better written as {{tq|"wonderful little [halfback],"}} so that clicking on the link isn't necessary to understand what is being said?
  • Changed.
  • "Gazete" is missing the second "t"
  • Fixed.
  • You could create a redirect for Ironwood High School (Ironwood, Michigan) that goes to Ironwood, Michigan#Education and link the redirect in the article and infobox
  • I'd expect a 100-year-old+ high school to probably pass GNG; I personally dislike making redirects when the subjects are likely notable and warrant articles.
  • No worries. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 18 February 2025 (UTC)
  • References: all appear appropriate for what is being cited and are formatted correctly
  • Ref 17: "Cal" is George Whitney Calhoun fyi
  • Linked.
  • Spot checks: #4, 6, 7, 10, 11, 15, 17, 20, and 21 all look good.

Nice work {{U|BeanieFan11}}. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:34, 18 February 2025 (UTC)

  • {{ping|Gonzo fan2007}} Responded. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:48, 18 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 18 February 2025 (UTC)

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