Talk:Trapper Nelson/GA2

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Reviewer: Roh^G ??· 16:59, 17 August 2011 (UTC)

Nominator:Quadell

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valign="top" | | 1. {{Wikipedia:Good article criteria/GAC|1}}: | {{GATable/item|1a|+| Yes!the lead is good }} {{GATable/item|1b|+| Yes!It follows MoS }}

valign="top" | | 2. {{Wikipedia:Good article criteria/GAC|2}}: | {{GATable/item|2a|+| Yes! }} {{GATable/item|2b|+|Quiet good. }} {{GATable/item|2c|+|Not at all. }}

valign="top" | | 3. {{Wikipedia:Good article criteria/GAC|3}}: | {{GATable/item|3a|+| yes. }} {{GATable/item|3b|+| Well Focused and not controversial. }} {{GATable/item|4|+| Yes }} {{GATable/item|5|+|It doesn't have at-least 60 edits from its creation and not more than 30 since 2010 }}

valign="top" | | 6. {{Wikipedia:Good article criteria/GAC|6}}: | {{GATable/item|6a|+| }} {{GATable/item|6b|+| }} {{GATable/item|7|+| Done! }}

• "Tarzan of the Loxahatchee". citation?
• The lede doesn't have footnotes, per WP:LEAD. But the same quote is cited to footnote #7 down in the "Settlement on the Loxahatchee" section. – Quadell ^(talk) 21:41, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

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• The reference which is used as "Jupiter Kids History: Trapper Nelson". was dead.
• Oops, you're right. I've fixed that. – Quadell ^(talk) 21:41, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

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• as per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement.240 pounds->240 pounds.
• Good point. I've fixed that now. – Quadell ^(talk) 21:45, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

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