Talk:Typhoon Warren/GA1

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use {{Done}}, {{Fixed}}, {{Added}}, {{Not Done}}, {{Doing}}, or {{Removed}}, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

• (Re)Move the citation in the lead ({{tq|during July 1988.[1]}}).
• {{Not Done}}, that's the only mention of the local name in the article though.
• I see. Could you move it to the end of {{tq|Typhoon Huaning,}} then? –♠Vami_IV†♠ 01:55, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
• {{Done}}, good call. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 02:09, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
• {{Tq|At 00:00 UTC on July 14, the JMA declared the system a tropical storm.[6] On the evening of July 14, the JTWC upgraded Warren to a typhoon.[2]}} Condense.
• {{Done}}. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
• Footnote [nb3] would be useful to have in the lead and/or infobox, too.
• {{Done}}, moved. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
• {{tq|one hundred-six [...] one hundred eighty-seven}} Why not replace these with numerals? You've done the same for other casualty figures in the article.
• {{Done}}. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
• {{tq|Across the Guangdong Province,}} Axe "the".
• {{Done}}. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Images are free/tagged and relevant. Article passes CopyVio detector. References are credible. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 00:32, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

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:Thanks for the review :D YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

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