Talk:Tyrese Haliburton/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:36, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Am happy to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 17:36, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.
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9. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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12. It is stable.
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• "and shot 18-of-18" - en dashes please

• "he committed to Iowa State on September 18, 2017." - {{xt|committed to playing college basketball for}}

• "He scored a career-high 16 points on November 26, in an 82–55 victory over Omaha." - {{Xt|He scored a career-high 16 points in a 82–55 victory against Omaha on November 26.}}
• "His 17 assists were the most by an Iowa State player in a game," - {{xt|any}}
• "Through 35 games in his freshman season, Haliburton averaged 6.8 points, 3.6 assists, and 1.5 steals per game." - repetition of "game"
• "On January 4, 2020, he recorded 22 points" - try {{xt|Haliburton}} for variety
• "He was subsequently named Big 12 Player of the Week for his second time." - {{xt|the}}
• "After fracturing his wrist on February 8" - ESPN states it was his left wrist that was fractured

• "shooting 8-of-9 from the field," - the hyphens should be replaced by en dashes

• Reference 4 is missing the author, which is locate at the bottom of the article
• Reference 21 title: "I owa State men's basketball: Tyrese Haliburton named Big 12 player of the week" - the space in the text in bold is unneeded

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:30, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

:{{re|MWright96}} All comments have been addressed Sportzeditz (talk) 18:59, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

::{{reply|Sportzeditz}} Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:15, 11 May 2020 (UTC)