Talk:Voyager program/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: {{User|The Herald}} 09:16, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Z1720 (talk · contribs) 01:48, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

Unfortunately, I am going to have to quick-fail this article, due to a number of concerns that I have:

  • There are numerous uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. This is especially evident in the "Computers and data processing" and "Scientific instruments" sections. Also, the "Spacecraft design" talks about the diagram, but this information needs to be cited with inline citations, instead of referring to the image.
  • There are many one-sentence paragraphs, which are not recommended for articles, as too many of them are difficult to read. Instead, merge this information with other paragraphs.
  • I suggest using the sources listed in "Further reading", or remove them altogether.

If you have any questions, please feel free to ping me or message me on my talk page. I will run the bot to fail this GAN momentarily. Z1720 (talk) 01:48, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

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