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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk ยท contribs) 05:15, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Might review this within one week IDK. ใƒ„ LunaEatsTuna (๐Ÿ’ฌ)โ€” 05:15, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

:Nice work on the changes! Pass. ใƒ„ LunaEatsTuna (๐Ÿ’ฌ)โ€” 22:36, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

= Copyvio check =

Earwig is happy.

= File(s) =

Both files are relevant and copyright-free.

= Prose =

  • In the lead, remove "(SSA)" as it is never used again.
  • In the first sentence of ยง Early years: Super TV, wikilink Baltimore.
  • In the second sentence, is said company really that unimportant that it not be named?
  • Is it possible to mention when (if known) Peter and John Fellowship announced their bid, for consistency.
  • I would wikilink newsmagazine (IDK if I am dumb but I have never heard of that term until now).
  • Wikilink cable TV.
  • "general-entertainment independent" โ€“ wikilink independent to independent station.
  • I know the second point is informatively sufficient but "economic factors" itself is a bit vague IMO.
  • Just curious, why does it say Salditch was "preparing for life" instead of something like preparing for the future of WNUV?
  • Wikilink NBC.
  • For one sentence there are a lot of commas. How about "The FCC approved of their purchase by way of ABRY Communications in March 1989, and" to improve the flow?
  • "antennas as an STV station" โ€“ recommend wikilinking and writing out satellite television.
  • That's S for subscription and it's introduced earlier
  • I know this is hardly relevant but is it possible to provide a short, few word explanation on why WBAL-TV declined to carry the show?
  • I don't think that'd be relevant to this article.
  • Wikilink Milwaukee.
  • "attempt to put up roadblocks" โ€“ recommend "set up" for improved formality (I am a pedant).
  • "low-power UHF station" โ€“ also write out and wikilink ultra high frequency with the abbreviation in parentheses.
  • On what grounds did UPN contest?
  • "became a front page issue" is informal โ€“ recommend rephrasing.
  • "was late to sign an agreement with The CW" โ€“ hmm, how about "with the network" or "with it" etc. since The CW was just mentioned?
  • "to start airing digital simulcasts" โ€“ I would wikilink simulcast.
  • Wikilink OFDM.
  • Wikilink ultra-HD.

Other items linked or revised. Sammi Brie (she/her โ€ขย t โ€ข c) 06:09, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

= Refs =

Passes spotcheck on refs 1, 6, 19, 25, 38, 42 and 64.

= Others =

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