Talk:War Machine/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:55, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check\|hold}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check\|y}} It is factually accurate and verifiable. :a (references): {{GAList/check\|y}} b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check\|y}} c (OR): {{GAList/check\|y}} d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check\|y}} It is broad in its coverage. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check\|y}} b (focused): {{GAList/check\|y}} It follows the neutral point of view policy. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check\|y}} It is stable. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check\|y}} It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check\|y}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check\|y}}
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Pretty good-looking, if hard to spot-check in its entirety given the source mix. Ping me when ready. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:44, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

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=Copy changes=

Your copy is superbly clean. Not much to fix.

==Lead==

"Stand alone" should be one word

==Publication history==

{{!xt|Rhodes was first portrayed using Iron Man armor in Iron Man #169 (1983) when he had to fight a villain in the stead of a drunk and defeated Tony Stark.}} Add a comma after (1983)
{{!xt|This series also featured Deathlok and Cable, and it ran for twenty-five issues across two years.}}Something is missing as a causal link. Maybe {{xt|This series, also featuring Deathlok and Cable, ran for twenty-five issues across two years.}}
{{!xt|writer Christos Gage wrote issues #33–35 of Iron Man: Director of S.H.I.E.L.D. in which War Machine replaced Iron Man as the main character}} add a comma after S.H.I.E.L.D.

==Characterization==

{{!xt|He believes that the role of superheroes goes beyond fighting supervillains, and that they should also take action against global problems such as world hunger and oppressive governments.}} That's a WP:CINS comma that should go.

==Supporting characters==

{{!xt|Danvers' return}} MOS:'S should be "Danvers's"

=Sourcing and spot checks=

Harv error: Zehr 2011 does not have a citation to point to.

Spot checking is tough with this one because some of the most-used refs (Chambliss) are not easily available. Chambliss is really frequently called, so this is a bit frustrating. I had to settle for half of the spot checks I'd normally make... I don't have any qualms with what I've found, though.

29: {{tq|War Machine steps in for the fallen Iron Man}} ... {{tq|In the past, Rhodey's always been the guy who goes into battle himself-sure, he's led men into combat, but he's never been the kind of man to sit behind the lines making the big decisions.}} This checks out. {{tick}}
43: Wizard review checks out.
54: Lists Cheadle's appearances. {{tick}}

=Images=

A cover with NFUR is supplied and justified. Encouragement: Add alt text.

:{{u|Sammi Brie}}, I've addressed the issues you listed. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 04:53, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

:And Zehr checks out now that it's inserted. Everything looks good. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:08, 9 March 2024 (UTC)