Talk:Yazdegerd I/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 15:25, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

I will do this one as well since I will have time. Noah^Talk 15:25, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• " was Sasanian King of Kings of Iran" was a Sasanian...

:::I've seen different opinions of this, such as Kavad I where the spelling was accepted, it's kinda weird. I've added "a" though. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:40, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• "he succeeded his brother Bahram IV (r. 388–399) after Bahram's assassination." could this be rephrased to avoid using Bahram twice in just a few words?

:::Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:42, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• For the Etymology, you can delete the first citation since both sentences are cited from the same source

:::Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:42, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• Some of the images are missing alt text

:::Fixed. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:51, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• Could you please vary the sides on which images are placed?

:::Erh, not sure there is enough space for that without making it look kinda weird. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:44, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• "when the priestly leaders agreement to cooperate with the court" agreed?

:::Yup, fixed. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:42, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

• "Yazdegerd I died in 420. According to 5th-century Armenian historian Movses Khorenatsi, Yazdegerd died of disease" Could these be combined?

:::Imho I don't think they should, I've changed it a little bit. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:52, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

That should be it. Another pretty good article! Noah^Talk 23:23, 2 April 2020 (UTC)