Talk:Young Girls/GA1
GA Review
{{Discussion top|Closing and collapsing an abandoned Good Article review. Safiel (talk) 19:20, 19 June 2016 (UTC)}}
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:47, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Hi there! Review of this coming soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:47, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
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- by Bruno Mars, Philip Lawrence and Ari Levine, Jeff Bhasker, and Emile Haynie -> by The Smeezingtons and Emile Haynie
- and reminiscent of the song "It Will Rain" and Lana Del Rey's work -> It is reminiscent of his previous song, "It Will Rain" and was noted by critics for its similarities to Lana Del Rey's works.
- Its music is largely -> Its instrumentation is mainly
- to Contemporary hit radio -> to contemporary hit radio
- complex instrumental -> complex instrumentation
- record -> recording; record is generally used for album releases
- Its lyrics, detail the fact of the singer being unable to resist to his attraction to young girls were met with criticism; with reviewers calling it a "recognizing sin" and "impassioned shame" -> Its lyrics, portraying the singer's attraction to young girls, were met with criticism...
- in some -> in few
- the released -> the release
- Korea where it succeed by peaking a the top position -> Korea, where it reached number one
- as the second single -> as the second single release for Unorthodox Jukebox
- at 62 and 23 -> at number 63 and number 23
- the position of 19 -> the top twenty
- and 32 -> and number 32
- certified gold -> certified Gold
- the US -> that territory
- The track was performed live sometimes -> The track was performed several times live, including
:The song was only performed three times live, that doesn't account for several...maybe other word? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:24, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
;Background and writing
- Link MTV to its own article
- interview Mars -> interview, Mars
More to come... Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:04, 16 June 2016 (UTC)
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