User talk:BruceThomson#top

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Theroadislong (talk) 08:19, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Fujisan Winery. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 12:05, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

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Devonian Wombat (talk) 01:12, 25 May 2022 (UTC)

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Fade258 (talk) 01:33, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Fujisan Winery. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 08:21, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

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331dot (talk) 10:55, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

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❯❯❯ Chunky aka Al Kashmiri (✍️) 01:56, 14 January 2023 (UTC)

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Hitro talk 08:58, 14 January 2023 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Ernest Singer. Thanks! Valereee (talk) 22:28, 7 February 2023 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Valereee (talk) 17:30, 11 February 2023 (UTC)

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Caleb Stanford (talk) 21:12, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

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Caleb Stanford (talk) 02:09, 5 June 2025 (UTC)