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DMySon (talk) 11:51, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

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– robertsky (talk) 22:52, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=A reliable source, please, for such assertions as {{Olive|the resulting paintings lend a new understanding and beauty to the commonplace}} and {{Olive|Wilf has gone on to become one of Saskatchewan's most highly regarded visual artists}} and for each of {{Olive|Wilf Perreault's paintings are in the collections of: Mackenzie Art Gallery, Regina; Pemberton Houston, Willoughby; Bank of Montreal; The Mercantile Bank; Goldman Sachs and Co., New York; Osler Hoskins, Toronto; Ernst & Young; Touche Ross & Co.; [...] Saskatchewan Arts Board; Petro-Canada Inc.; Potash Corporation of Saskatchewan; Dunlop Art Gallery, Regina; Remai Art Gallery, Saskatoon; and the Edmonton Art Gallery, Alberta}} (if possession by a company is worth mentioning).}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Hoary (talk) 01:03, 13 February 2023 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=This is still referenced far too heavily to primary sources that are not proper support for notability. For instance, you do not establish an artist's notability by sourcing his gallery shows to the self-published websites of the galleries that held the shows as evidence that the shows happened; you establish an artist's notability by sourcing his gallery shows to media coverage about the shows (reviews by art critics, etc.) as evidence that the shows garnered third party attention. The Queen's Golden and Diamond Jubilee Medals are also not notability-building awards at all; they were presented to 46,000 (golden) and 60,000 (diamond) Canadians respectively, and are not in and of themselves WP:ANYBIO-clinching awards.
Some of the sourcing here is proper third party media coverage, which is obviously a step in the right direction, but the stuff that isn't third party media coverage still has to go away.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Bearcat (talk) 02:53, 4 June 2023 (UTC)

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{{divbox|blue|3="Wilf Perreault has wandered up and down back alleys recording a thousand fleeting impressions in a thousand memorable images." how is this encyclopaedic tone?}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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GraziePrego (talk) 05:19, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

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Toadette^Edit! 16:52, 27 April 2024 (UTC)

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Paul W (talk) 17:12, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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