User talk:GyroMagician
Clarification in SINAD Article
Could you please review the talk page for SINAD and help clarify which receiver sensitivity would be more sensitive? Is a 0.35 µV receiver more or less sensitive than a 0.25 µV receiver? Thanks! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.146.166.85 (talk) 15:25, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
Unsolved problems in medical imaging
Hi! if you can help make unsolved problems in medical imaging more clear or write more please keep it in your todo list, thanks for your help! NerdyNSK (talk) 09:23, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
realtime fMRI
Hi; I wanted to let you know that for the moment I'm removing the "realtime" section from the fMRI article -- I'm informing you because you moved it there, from a separate article, on Sept 11. Reasons for removing it are that the sources are weak (a conference talk and a news article), and I believe the passage gives a misleading impression: I know enough about the time delays and signal-to-noise issues in fMRI to know that the only way you could play table tennis using it is at subglacial speed, and even that would be a tour de force. If you think the passage should stay, I'm open to discussion. Regards, Looie496 (talk) 17:07, 5 December 2008 (UTC)
: Hi Looie496, thanks for your input. I added the RT-fMRI section, using infomation from a separate page which has since been deleted. I don't know a lot about RT-fMRI, but do know that performing the required processing fast enough is challenging. I didn't check the references too closely, but I thought a couple of respectable groups were trying to do RT-fMRI - I don't know if a journal paperabout the topic exists? It is certainly a minority interest, so maybe it does not deserve a section. But if enough people would like to see it returned, it would be great if you would write a paragraph about why it is diffiuclt. GyroMagician (talk) 09:25, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
Punctuation and inline citations
I've left you a note at User talk:Hertz1888#Punctuation, references and Coax cable. Gail (talk) 20:43, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
[[MRI]]
Hi GyroMagician: Thank you for correcting my errors about writing tesla unit with the first letter in uppercase. Also I thought that there were few links to tesla (unit) in that big article. I have now corrected a Gauss to gauss unit and added a link to it, wasn't any in the MRI article :)
I would like to serious contribute to the MRI article, but I really don't know much about it, hopeful in the future.
Cordially --KDesk (talk) 03:13, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
:Thanks for the edit. I think part of the problem with the MRI article is that it gets a bit technical sometimes, so it is useful to have 'non-experts' reading over it. I work in the field so I don't always notice. Either edit the article directly, or put questions on the talk page. As always, the page should be readable by anyone, so pointing or fixing bits where we haven't done that is important. I look forward to your contributions ;-) GyroMagician (talk) 19:05, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
Malvern merging
Hi GyroMagician, I've left a suggestion on the Malvern article's talk page at Talk:Malvern,_Worcestershire.
Kudpung (talk) 04:32, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
I've also added a list of civil parishes to the Malvern District article. I don't know if this is a godd idea, but if you have time please see the comments here: Talk:Malvern_Hills_(district)
--Kudpung (talk) 10:49, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
::I've now made a template of malvern District Civil parishes to show on all the malvern District parish stubs.--Kudpung (talk) 02:21, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
:::Ah, found it. That's neat - I like the role-up - it keeps the page uncluttered, but all the info is there for those that want it. GyroMagician (talk) 08:41, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
Worcestershire
You did such a good job on editing my transport stuff in Malvern, I wonder if you could take a look at the inclusion (by another contributor) of the mammoth article on commercial radio in Worcestershire. It completely dominates the Worcs article, is long without any subsections, and in my opinion 99% of it belongs either in an article of its own or as a sub-page of radio in Britain or something similar.--Kudpung (talk) 02:21, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
:Yikes, that's a big section! I agree it's completely out of place. I'll have a look at it and see what I can do. And thanks - I'm glad you liked the transport edit, and didn't mind me cutting down what you had written. GyroMagician (talk) 08:38, 25 May
::Thanks Giro, no worries at all with the cuts to transport. Thanks also for your work on radio, I'll bet it wasn't easy. I've slightly copyedited what you left. Could you please take a moment to check my latest edits to the Malvern, Worcstershire intro that is now modified to take into account the new sestion on suburbs (see also expanded rollup - areas). Now that I have got all my Malvern Civil parish stubs created, I'll be looking around the county for other stuff that needs cleaning up. Perhaps we should create a Worcestershire Project and get some templates on the talk pages - maybe talk Iccaldwell could help too. --Kudpung (talk) 04:44, 27 May 2009 (UTC) 2009 (UTC)
:::I've added a comment on the Malvern, Worcestershire about the introduction (I think we should try to keep discussion there as much as possible, to include other potential editors - although it's a bit difficult when we both keep skipping around different pages!). I like the way you've put the National Anthem note back in; you're right, it should be there. I'd like to concentrate on the Malvern pages, rather than spearding to the rest of Worcs just yet. Oh, and the radio section on Worcestershire looks better now, I think that section is finished now. GyroMagician (talk) 14:03, 28 May 2009 (UTC)
Project Worcestershire (pre-proposal)
Several English counties have started projects in order to clean up and apply a code of practice for layout and content of all the subs and articles about the towns and villages in their county, and to invite more contributors to complete the infoboxes, extend the information, and to add images and formal references.
According to Wiki guidelines, before a proposal for the creation of a WikiProject is made, the proposing editor should gather a minimum of 5 registered Wiki users who are in favour of the idea. The WP suggests doing this in the in a dedicated section of his/her user pages. You only need to be in favour - you do not need to be an active Wki editor/contributor. The place to add your name is: User:Kudpung/project Worcestershire.
BTW: user iccaldwell found it already while I was re editing the page :)
:Excellent idea, it will be useful to focus the discussion somewhere we can all find it. Three of us editing is already a good start. Where should we sign-up? I've signed both your project page and the Worcestershire talk page GyroMagician (talk) 09:18, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
:: We got sufficient support already to make the formal proposal which is now here: WikiProject Worcestershire
While I was posting the invite template on many article and editor talk pages, I was amazed at the mess some of those other articles are (e.g. Redditch, Evesham, Bromsgrove, Kidderminster, etc.). We can be proud of what we have achieved already for the Malvern pages.--Kudpung (talk) 23:21, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
[[Malvern Water]]
I recently split off the Malvern Water from Malvern and created its own expanded article, leaving a shorter mention in Malvern. It's been tagged for POV and weasel words by an editor who appears only to have read only the first sentence. He did not leave the required explanation for his action. As I'm generally extremely careful what I write, I can't see what he is complaining about. I wonder if I could impose on you to review the article, make any suggestions you think fit, and/or come out in support of it on its talk page. It certainly doesn't lack any notability, and it's well referenced. Many thanks. --Kudpung (talk) and other members are recommending reporting the matter. 02:55, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
::At my request, the editor has now left a comment. please take a look if you find time. Thanks.--Kudpung (talk) 04:42, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
:::I've left a comment left, totally unnecessary tagging. It's turning into a nice article btw, well done! GyroMagician (talk) 11:22, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
::Unfortunately where we once thought the matter closed, it is now escalating. However, other members of the budding Worcs project have rallied in our support. On User_talk:Headbomb#Malvern_Water I've left a warning and a sharp note. --Kudpung (talk) 05:20, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
::: I've added my thoughts. Let's try not to get too involved, it takes effort better spent in writing pages, I'm sure he'll go away. If he doesn't, then we can escalate. What did you think of my edits? I've suggested a bit more in the way of structural changes (see the talk page). I like what you've written about the water cure, I think it looks really good. All we need now are a few pictures now. GyroMagician (talk) 08:03, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
:::I think the edits are great. I've done a couple more tiny addition, and put the Queens at the end of the article. The best picture would beto buy a bottle and make a photo of it. I also think pictres of the Rose Garrard statues and some of the spouts would make nice additions. I"d make them myself to escape the copyright fuss but I won't be in Europe until end August. I've removed the silly banner and given him a piece of my mind on his talk page. I think the language he used was most inappropriate for an article talk page.--Kudpung (talk) 19:16, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
Headbomb has escalated, see my comments at: User_talk:Headbomb#Malvern_Water and the recent additions at talk:Malvern Water. We may need a consensus before taking any further action or posting any more messages on the issue.--Kudpung (talk) 01:44, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
WikiProject Worcestershire
Hi Giromagician. We now have a draft project page for the official Worcestershire project. Please review it and feel free to make any changes you like without further ado or discussion.--Kudpung (talk) 19:16, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
Worcestershire articles
You may be interested in this.. User:Jenuk1985/Worcestershire watchlist. It is a list of every single Worcestershire related article, scraped from the Worcestershire category. I have put it in a format that can be copied and pasted into your raw watchlist. I figured it would be useful to you :) Jenuk1985 | Talk 19:42, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
: Hi Jen, and sorry for not getting back to you sooner. After the 'help' from our friend I decided to leave the Worcs project alone for a while, but I'm back now. The Worcs project has grown in my absence. Your list is certainly useful, I'll pull a few pages from it to add to my list. Thanks! GyroMagician (talk) 14:30, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
:: Err, YIKES!, it's huge. I had no idea there were so many pages within the WORCS category. GyroMagician (talk) 14:31, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
Malvern
Hi Giro! I've done all I can to the Malvern, Worcestershire article. I think there's a fair chance that together the regular contributors could get it nominated for GA. If you have time, please see Talk:Malvern, Worcestershire#Summary of recent edits, check out the article if you can, and leave any comments and suggestions there. If you see any obvious blunders, do go ahead and fix them. Thanks.--Kudpung (talk) 10:58, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
:Hello Kudpung! I decided it's about time to come back to the Worcs project, having let the dust settle a bit. The Malvern page is looking really good. I've had a bit of a chop at it, and will try to do some more this w/e, but it's certainly much better than when I left. I don't think it's ready for GA yet, but it is well on the way. GyroMagician (talk) 14:28, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
::Hi Gyro, your edits are excellent and have done much to improve my sloppy work. In the meantime there are some other issues that need your help:
Since the recent creation of the Worcestershire project, several editors are making an concentrated effort to improve the articles and the overall coverage of the county. Many of us are learning as we go and since some of these issues regard Wikipedia and/or parent project policy and how we should interpret them, it may be a good idea to discuss them with a view to obtaining a consensus before we do things that may be wasting our time, or undoing the work of others. Please refer to these discussion items in particular:
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Worcestershire#DELETION - places with names...
- Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Worcestershire#Parish list template navboxes
- Wikipedia talk:Navigation templates#What should be the purpose of a navigation template? (users Brian Kenedig, Pavel Vozenilek)
and join in the debate on the Worcestershire project talk page.Thanks --Kudpung (talk) 05:48, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
:::Hi Gyro, it's been suggested again (see Talk:Malvern, Worcestershire) that the Malvern, Worcestershire page be renamed Great Malvern and/or merged, and I admit to being hasty in in suggesting it in the first place months ago before I significantly developed the article. After all research I have done, and the rationle I have contributed both in the article and on the talk page, I strongly oppose this. Great Malvern has no official status as a place since it was merged with the former independent Malvern Link Urban District Council in 1900. Moreover, the area of Gt Malvern is cut in two by two parish wards. All official government references and sources are to either Malvern, or to Malvern Town Council. In my opinion, this leaves Gt Malvern today as just one of the many neighbourhoods with a name - just like Malvern Link or Poolbrook, for example, and as the place that just happens to include the historical town centre. I therefore strongly oppose any merging, or renaming of the Malvern, Worcestershire article, Your opinion is urgently needed, but I will of course have to abide by any consensus. Provided everything is referenced and verified, there is no case for original research, but it is an article that has been mainly created academically by contributors with first hand local knowledge, and who know where to find the information.--Kudpung (talk) 12:56, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
::::Commented. Sometimes it seems attractive to try to put things in neat boxes, even when they don't quite fit ;-) I try to think of the first thing I would type into Wikipedia to find the page, and use that as the title. Glad you've come around to my way of thinking! GyroMagician (talk) 16:24, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
:::::I came round to your way of thinking a long time ago :) , I regret that I was a tad hasty months ago in suggesting a merge of any kind. That merge however, was to incorporate Gt Malvern into Malvern, (and not the other way round) but you see the size the Malvern article has grown to - so it's a good thing there are separate articles for Gt Malvern, the Link, and Barnards Green, etc..--Kudpung (talk) 21:19, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
Pershore College
25px Hi {{PAGENAME}}! An article within the scope of the WikiProject Worcestershire has been proposed for merging. Please see the discussion at Talk:Pershore College#Merge proposal, and leave your comments there. Thanks.--Kudpung (talk) 10:54, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Powick Hosp
Hi Gyro. Sorry about that edit conflict - I was just uploading a new version while you were copyediting the previous one.--Kudpung (talk) 15:06, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
:No problem - it's getting busy out here! I've made a few more tweaks to the page. It's a very interesting story. GyroMagician (talk) 18:40, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Evesham technology
25px Hi {{PAGENAME}}! It is suggested that a pre PROD, pre AfD, or pre Speedy discussion should take place before opening a deletion process for Evesham Technology. Please visit the article if you can, and leave your comments and suggestions at Talk:Evesham Technology--Kudpung (talk) 09:43, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
::Hi Gyro. Please don't be offended, but I have modified some of your recent edits to the intro to comply with Wikipedia:Lead_section and Wikipedia:Lead_section#Introductory_text and because they had caused a new 'noref' banner to be added by a bot. I don't think this article needs much more valuable time spending on it. It was never a priority, but as it stood, some trigger-happy would have AfD'd it sooner or later, and I thought it would be a good idea to keep it, esp. for Worcestershire, before that happened. I think that with the collaborative effort, it was a mission accomplished. I feel rather sorry for Evesham Tech (or at least for the employees) because this was a company that collapsed generally from no fault of its own, except perhaps for too rapid expansion. The same almost happened to a company I once owned when the French government just decided they couldn't afford to continue on a programme that was taking up 85% of our capacity. Fortunately, I was able to sell off all the branches as stand-alone franchises.--Kudpung (talk) 07:35, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
:::No offence taken - it reads much better. Never hesitate to edit my edits, I am always changing yours. And no, I didn't expect the bot with the banner! It's a shame Evesham went, they made decent machines and provided very good support. They did seem to expand very rapidly for a while, I'm sure that didn't help when the Government closed the scheme. GyroMagician (talk) 08:20, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Worcestershire meeting?
Referencing, reply, and the power of Wikibizzo
Hi GyroMagician (talk). A slightly belated thanks is in order for your help and contribution both on the Malvern Water article and its talk page. Your attitude and help have been nothing less than excellent. I have already utilised the template you created for the new ref structure, in three articles (Water cure (torture), Hydrotherapy, & James Currie} which is easier and more efficient than opening up an editing page of an article with the style, and copying the relevant bits, one at at time, into the article being worked on.
Thanks too for your feedback on the Hansard template. I guess it's Parliamentary privilege of a sort - it gets it's own template. And I see you swiftly tamed the recalcitrant Hansard ref with the power of Wikibizzo, ("the all-new wonder-fix!"). I agree there's some quite neat stuff in this Wikibizzo. One might be tempted to add to the two-line poem, which I guess we could call The Wikibizzo Compliance poem, or perhaps just The Hansard (with apologies to Edgar Allan Whatsisname).
:Once upon a midnight dreary, while I edited, weak and weary,
:Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,
:While I plodded, keyboard tapping, Hansard caught me, nearly napping
:As with energy still sapping, applying Wikibizzo cure.
:"'Tis but text", so I muttered, "Comply with Wikibizzo sure?"
:Quoth the Hansard "Nevermore"
:But setting forth with no more to show,
:GyroMagician tried Wikibizzo.
:Hansard verily complied.
:And all recalcitrance, it died.
:Need more Wikibizzo-cure?
:Quoth the Hansard "Nevermore" —Preceding unsigned comment added by Wotnow (talk • contribs) 07:48, 3 December 2009 (UTC)
Malvern Water
Hi Gyro, thanks for all your recent input on the Malvern Water article. I was given a personal VIP tour of the bottilng plant in Colwall while I was in the UK in September and took a lot of photos, but since returning to Thailand I have been so busy I haven't had time to update the article.--Kudpung (talk) 11:26, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
:Hi Kudpung, Long-time-no-see! Hope you enjoyed being back in Blighty. Yes, the Malvern Water article is developing nicely. I guess you saw the exchange between me and Jeremy on the talk page. I completely misunderstood the meaning of the 'advertising' tag, as I think I did when Headbomb first tagged the page. Having realised the tag was about the tone of the article, rather than about Schweppes, I took a knife to it and reworded. I'm planning to try to expand the history section a little, but the rest is pretty complete. Your tour of the bottling plant sounds like fun! Did you find any extra info while you were there? I'm currently chasing the early history - I've seen a first-bottling date of 1622, but don't have a reliable ref yet. GyroMagician (talk) 17:38, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
MRI Hardware
Hi,
I saw that you had worked on a MRI hardware article in your user page. It looks good. I would be interested in working on it.. so if you give me permission I will try to finish it up? (or was it a personal project, in that case would you be ok with me copying it?) Thanks --The.Filsouf (talk) 18:00, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
:Hi Filsouf, well spotted. You can see by the edit date I haven't touched it for a while! My original plan was to split out a hardware page from the current MRI article, which is already a bit long. I have most of the text in my PhD thesis (http://etheses.nottingham.ac.uk/740/1/magill_thesis.pdf), but it needs some fairly heavy reshaping to be better suited to a wikipedia page. Please use what I have - it would be far better to get it into the main wikipedia page than gathering dust here. I'm not sure how best to proceed - either copy the page to your own space, or fit it straight into a main wiki page, or edit it here - whichever you prefer. If you start developing the page I'll try to join in, although I'm usually a bit short on time. I look forward to seeing what you write :-) GyroMagician (talk) 17:28, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
::I forgot to say explicitly - you have my permission to copy anything you want from my thesis for the wikipedia page - if it's useful ;-) GyroMagician (talk) 17:54, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
Renaming of [[SINAD]]
Hello GyroMagician. I left a message on Talk:Signal, noise and distortion in response to the renaming. I don't agree that "No abbrevations" applies here. Please take a look at my note there and let me know what you think. Thanks! Me Three (talk to me) 15:03, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
Malvern
Hi Gyro, this is just to let you know that I have nominated Malvern, Worcestershire for reviewing for GA, and thanks for your recent vigilance against vandalism. --Kudpung (talk) 17:39, 14 December 2009 (UTC)
:Hi KP, yes I noticed it had been nominated. Have you had any feedback yet? I've started trying to tidy up the references a bit - this was something Jeremy highlighted on the Malvern Water page, so it would probably come up here as well. Re: the recent vandalism - at least it was a bit more creative than the usual ;-) GyroMagician (talk) 20:17, 16 December 2009 (UTC)
Re: Oatcakes
No, I took it straight off the walkers box. It was meant as a quote, though I doubt that it is still formatted that way. Image:Icons-flag-scotland.png Canæn Image:Icons-flag-scotland.png 11:38, 17 December 2009 (UTC)
:Fair enough - and thanks for the quick reply! It's funny how this "many eyes" thing works. GyroMagician (talk) 12:12, 17 December 2009 (UTC)
Malvern, GA nomination
Hi Gyro ! We now have a first review for GA. On the whole it doesn't look too bad. As you know, like you, I am a local resident in absentia, and as a published author, a 'prose artist', but anything you can do to improve the language or address some of the more technical points as quickly as possible would be much appreciated. Any work on the new referencing system does not affect the overall quality and scope of the article for GA but you may be able to put some of the wrong referencing things right and offer some suggestions on the other points made by the reviewer. It would be great for the Worcs project (and great for us Malvernians) to have a GA of this envergure in its repertoire. See Talk:Malvern, Worcestershire#GA Review - and Happy New Year!--Kudpung (talk) 05:51, 2 January 2010 (UTC)
:Hi Kudpung, and Happy New Year to you too! You've been busy - I see you've already made most of the suggested changes. I'll have a look over the article tomorrow and see what I can do. I started today, but was rather distracted by the Theatre of Small Convenience instead - such is Wikipedia. The referencing is still an ongoing project, but we're getting closer. I thought the comments were very helpful - with this kind of help I think we should get to GA fairly quickly. GyroMagician (talk) 17:13, 2 January 2010 (UTC)
::Hi Gyro. I do not doubt that the new referencing system will be of benefit to readers of the encyclopedia. However, I'm a bit thrown by the use of templates - I always found it easier to insert inline references manually. I therefore can't figure out what to do with the five (!) references for one of the items. I know which ones to keep, but don't knowhow to delete the others. Generally, we have seven days to address a reviewer's points before the GA nomination is failed. Ah, the Theatre of Small Conveniece - I must have walked past it a dozen times in Edith Walk when I was in the UK in August!--Kudpung (talk) 04:17, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
:::Hi, we've all had a go at the recommended improvements for GA. Would someone care to have a final proof read please? See comments on Talk:Malvern, Worcestershire/GA1
Malvern references
Hi Gyro, while the work you guys are doing on the references is excellent, I would just like to point out the following:
How to format citations: While you should try to format a citation correctly, what matters is that you add your source; provide enough information to identify the source, and others will improve the formatting if needed.
How to present citations: Each article should use the same method throughout. If an article already has citations, adopt the method in use or seek consensus before changing it.
This means that the high number of refs must be consistent - quite a mammoth task! I have added lots of new refs in the last day or two, but I don't know how to use your system (yet), as I am more concerned with supplying refs that are required by the GA reviewer.--Kudpung (talk) 05:48, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
::I think we have now addressed all the points that the reviewer has raised. I've hacked some stuff out that Peterkingiron pointed out, but IHMO the effort now is to pass GA and not to find more fault. if you could just do a rapid proof read and do some fixes to the reference templates that you and Wotnow are doing, that would be great.--Kudpung (talk) 17:01, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
:::Housing: It will probably be difficult to find a reference for the Ministry housing estates although they physically exist so a reference may not be necessary. By 1952-3 the ministry estates accounted for over half the public housing stock, particularly the Cockshot Rd-Davenham Close-Sling Lane-Clerkenwell Crescent development, the houses along Pickersleigh Rd, those ones around North Site, and isolated pockets such as Werstan Close. I spent my early childhood in one - but that's original research !--Kudpung (talk) 18:31, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
::::Funny you should say that, I grew up in Werstan! Agreed it will be difficult to find a ref (not sure who tagged it), but given the proportion of Ministry housing in Malvern, there must be something. There is quite a lot of repetition of the TRE part in the article - I count three entries (lede, housing, industry) - it seems a bit overdone, but I'm not sure how to reduce it. For the citations, I think I now agree with WotNow that the Malvern Water style referencing a better choice, mainly because it is simple to use (Do you have any thoughts?). We'll keep working on it. In the mean time, please carry on adding refs however is easiest for you, and we'll work out the details. Once we settle on a style, I will add a note at the top of the talk page describing how to do it. GyroMagician (talk) 19:28, 3 January 2010 (UTC)
{{talkback|Wotnow}}
:::::Don't worry about the perceived duplication - readers often scvan and go straight to a section they need. malvern is quite a long article.--Kudpung (talk) 00:37, 4 January 2010 (UTC)
::::::Hi. I think we have reached the point where all the reviewer's original pints have been addressed. Apart from proof reading and correcting any glaring errors, let's try to achiev GA with the article as is. See the revierwers latest comment at Talk:Malvern,_Worcestershire/GA1#Next_set_of_comments. Thanks. --Kudpung (talk) 07:39, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
:::::::Hi KP. We need to finish putting all refs into cite format, with publisher, as per DBs comment. It's nearly done - I should be able to finish it tonight, if WotNow doesn't get there first. Apart from that I'll stop editing. GyroMagician (talk) 08:36, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
::::::::Thanks Gyro :)--Kudpung (talk) 09:12, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
:::::::::I've now added yet another a bunch of new references. It's taken me all day to find them, but it would be great if you could put them into your special system. I was right about Hembry, simply because I read the book. ;).
::::::::::I've removed a bunch of superfluous refs, but now there are a lot of red warnings shown on the page. I sure don't know how to fix that - usually when I remove an inline ref, it's gone. Can somebody do a quick fix please.--Kudpung (talk) 19:21, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
:::A splendid effort all round. And ya gotta love those editing conflicts when two editors are trying to save at the same time! I re-added the Hembry, Cowie & Cowie (HCC) ref for the Malvern Link merge, as it's central to the sentence, as a reader who checks it can readily see. The Hansard ref is useful and complimentary, so I'd leave it. I concur one can overdo ref clusters. But occasional complimentary clusters can also add to an article, as I think in this case. Moreover, we can never know who'll check and find themselves a whole new information world to check out and contribute back to Wikipedia from. I've had many such serendipitous finds.
:::I also see GyroMagician that you added the url from the duplicate HCC ref. I realised that I was formatting a duplicate ref, but by then I was jaded and the resolution wasn't readily evident so I left it, as it wouldn't hurt a GA. But with a fresh perspective I've sorted it. That by the way, is one advantage of listing the references in one place. One can far more readily spot duplications and errors, whether or not you're looking for them. Even if you look at the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=William_Shakespeare&diff=332793757&oldid=331612713 Shakespeare article] you'll see the exercise enabled me to spot an error (McMichael & Glenn - line 199) which I was neither aware of or looking for. I was simply trying an experiment to combine two styles while creating a benefit to the article I was experimenting in.
:::Of course I see Kudpung's point, as I'm sure you do Gyro. That is, there is a trade-off between the gain from ever-more complex uses of Wikibizzos, and losses entailed therein. Our experiment with the Shakespeare-style highlighted that, and I think we've hit on just about as good a compromise as one can get. After all, it will list a reference regardless of whether it is in placed in the body of the article in simple or template format, or grouped in the reference section. So it's as useful as necessary, but robust to different styles.Wotnow (talk) 22:34, 5 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
::::Hey Wotnow. Yes, I see Kudpung's point. I must admit it made me smile, because I often have the same reaction, when somebody changes something that I know perfectly well how to use, so I have to learn something new. But I'm sure he and other editors will come around to it. I'm sold already - it makes spotting duplicates so much easier, and I think makes the whole article more maintainable. And yes, the Shakespeare-style refs was an education in over-doing things. I must admit I thought there were more refs to different pages of the same book in the article - but I couldn't really see, because the refs were mixed in with the main text.
::::The ref pruning has also gone well, I think. We had all got a bit carried away. There were (and still are) some fantastic sources used in the article, but I like to try to keep focussed. Often, where lots of refs are given, it turns out that only one or two actually say what the ref implies, the others just feel kind-of relevant. But the HCC ref seems to make sense (although I do wonder about the Hansard). Anyway, I think it's time to hand-off to Dana boomer and see what she thinks. No doubt we have a few more fixing cycles to go though before we're done. Oh yes, I nearly forgot - those edit conflicts - never fail to make me cry out Nnnggggg! Funny how the simple edits never conflict... GyroMagician (talk) 22:58, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
Malvern water
I was going to go to bed, but because of all the talk about the referencing on the Malvern water page, I thought I'd have a quick peak to see if I could understand more about the system. I have to chime in here after a long absence from this article that I split off and created from the Malvern, Worcestershire article, to wonder why it attracts some much flak and arrogance from across the Atlantic. First, one self appointed unofficial admin buts in after admitting he didn't even read the article before tagging it, then tries to explain his action with much stumbling and blurb, and even going disingenuously to ANI to cover his blundering, and now we seem to have new, rather disagreable comments again from those who, it would appear, claim to know more about the UK's culture, history, and products than the natives. Rather than offering constructive help and encouragement, they are filling the article talk pages with the kind of comments that will utterly prevent the article from ever getting past a GA reviewer's keyboard. Furthermore, there are a lot of mature, experienced, and very highly qualified contributors to the encyclopedia, who have already given up editing because of such action by wannabe admins. It's a disaster, because these are the editors the Wikipedia really wants. Who asked for this article to be so rudely pulled apart in the first place? I took the trouble to check out several of Jeremy's references to MOS, etc., and find that some of his comments, tagging, and edits are clearly based on his own arbitrary interpretations on how the encyclopedia should be written. Let us not be intimidated by such action and launch ourselves into unnecessary work. My suggestion is that if one doesn't have any knowledge of a country, it's culture, or its products, or worse, no knowledge of the subject matter, and worse still, little understanding of the MOS, then one should have the courtesy to leave the article alone.
There are dozens of articles about brands of bottled mineral water, that according to Jeremy's criteria would far closer to 'blatant advertising' and AfD than our Malvern water article. I suggest we decategorise this article from food and drink, and remove the food and drink project banner from it.--Kudpung (talk) 21:28, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
:Maybe this is the wrong time to make the observation, but assessment is always somewhat arbitrary, flavoured with a personal bias. The key for me was realising that the advertising tag was being applied as a comment on style, rather than accusing us of advertising a product. Once I worked that out, and Jeremy and I stopped butting heads, he made some useful suggestions. I think the article is better for it. Maybe the interaction with Headbomb would have gone differently if I had understood the tagging earlier - although in that case he seemed to want to apply all tags and just shout and stamp about a bit. But yes, I don't understand why MW attracts so much negative attention. There are many bad water articles out there - but I think ours is looking rather good. GyroMagician (talk) 22:03, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
=The Malvern Water cure=
For what it's worth, I concur that the Malvern Water article benefitted from the exercise. To me, the best indicator that (User:Jerem43 was acting in good faith on 12 November 2009, with the Talk:Malvern Water#Advertising tag was that it was Jerem43 who removed it following Gyro's efforts. I came to that article late, so wasn't caught up in the earlier argy-bargy (so to speak). But I see that since the efforts surrounding that period, both the article and its discussion page have settled down completely.
There certainly was quite a bit of reference to the Malvern Water article in our discussions. Mostly this was to contrast two referencing styles and layouts. One 'exemplified' by Malvern Water, and one 'exemplified' by Shakespeare. Mind you, the William Penn article might benefit from the latter style (but not necessarily). I counted 74 individual page citations for Hans Fantel's 1974 book - nearly double that of Schoenbaum (1987) in Shakespeare.
The above discussions highlight another thing which the Malvern Water article exemplifies. How one can sometimes find the solution in the problem. The problem being the criticism, and the solution in this case being to take it in good faith, and see what transpires - in this case an improvement. Of course, this might not always be the outcome. But assuming criticism as being in good faith generally raises the chances of a favourable outcome. Not everyone knows how to constructively criticise - we typically learn that through experience, if we're lucky (in my own life, I'd have handled many past situations differently in light of what I now know). And by acting as if the criticism or editing changes are in good faith, if perchance they are maliciously based, that will become so self-evident that it's impossible for any reasonable person to miss. Even then, what may have started out as malicious may resolve favourably if the other editor gets a kind response. A funny old world indeed, what with that and the irony that the Malvern Water cure still seems to be working its magic! Wotnow (talk) 01:26, 6 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
Reference templates for the Chienlit innovation
Hi GyroMagician. For ease of reference, here is my reply to (Kudpung) regarding the question of a link to referencing templates for the style we've been implementing.
The only templates that I am currently aware of are those created by GyroMagician at GyroMagician's neat trick on Malvern Water discussion page, and more recently [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Malvern,_Worcestershire/Archive_1#Referencing_Howto GyroMagician's 'Howto' on Malvern discussion page], both of which have been copied by me at User:Wotnow. You'll see from my own userpage, and my comments on Malvern Water discussion page and elsewhere, that I credit my awareness of this referencing style to User:Chienlit's implementation in the Vincent Priessnitz article on 15 November 2009, after which I tried it myself. Whether Chienlit picked up elsewhere or worked it out I don't know. I see the earliest contribution from Chienlit using the
But I see the
=Some hopefully helpful information=
Hi GyroMagician. I have added a section to my user page, in which I provide what I hope are Illustrative examples of co-existing referencing styles in the process of editorial problem-solving. I hope it is of some help. As always, it was at least a useful learning exercise for me, as is usually the case when trying to formalise one's own learning into a way that hopefully makes some sense to others. (This is going to look like I have a stutter) Wotnow (talk) 01:18, 8 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow Wotnow (talk) 01:20, 8 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
:Useful. You're right, it's worth emphasising that all ref styles work together happily. It's also helpful to see all three next to each other. I'm (trying to) hold back from converting more articles, until I see the two we now have in the Worcs project working - I'm hoping to see someone who isn't you or me add a new ref in the new style. Then I'll go ahead and start changing them all! I'll put the kettle on ;-) GyroMagician (talk) 08:02, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
::Cheers. At the risk of overdoing it, I've elaborated further and created a section where I can list some representative examples of the different styles. In my search at the time, I didn't find any article using Harvard templates exclusively, although I'm sure they're there. You'll see that I added a Featured Article in the list of 'embedded freehand' referencing styles. That was deliberate. It acknowledges that an article can do very well without more sophisticated referencing templates (the 'simple freehand' still having template spans after all), and is an important counterpoint on a page that might otherwise seem like ideological proselytising (which is not intended - it's intended as a cogent, illustrative argument and that's all).
::I doubt there will be a major uptake anytime soon. And I don't know that it matters if there isn't. I think the main thing is that the information is there for people if they can capitalise on it. And that if other editors don't themselves feel inclined to use it, they at least don't feel the need to over-react if another editor in uses it for their own additions in the same article, the Wiki markup being behind the scenes after all, like the hidden text I see in some articles used as proxy chat-rooms. And I'm not taking an indirect shot at anyone in the Malvern project by the way. That whole process involved healthy skepticism and constructive progress all the way. An exercise in teamwork as Kudpung noted, and a healthy one at that.
::So with the Chienlit innovation, I think that if one or two individuals implement it in an article, then:
::*(a) other editors should not feel compelled to use it, as
::*(b) it will sit easily with their own style, but
::*(c) it's a tool for them to use if it benefits them, and
::*(d) there is information on the innovation for them to consider if they want, so
::*(e) they should at the very least not feel threatened by others using it, nor
::*(f) compelled to prevent or sanction others from utilising it given that
::*(g) it will do no harm and
::*(h) contains a potential good that can be capitalised upon at any time in the future.
::And if that outcome is the best we can do, that's okay. The people who will utilise on it are likely to be people not even on our radar screen, like us from Chienlit's quiet implementation. Where you and I have pioneered Gyro, is in trying to get our heads around it and formalise our thoughts for us and others. And that can be good enough in itself. Wotnow (talk) 05:04, 10 January 2010 (UTC)Wotnow
=Origin of List-defined references=
Hi GyroMagician. You may like to know that having fleshed out the issues as best I could on my user page, I then took the next logical step, of acknowledging Chienlit and awaiting a response regarding any earlier history that I hadn't found. It turns out that Chienlit picked up the idea from User:Maedin, who was also kind enough to provide further information. It transpires that its implementation was advertised on 21 September 2009, in the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wikipedia_Signpost/2009-09-21/News_and_notes Wikipedia Signpost]. The Signpost links show the innovation traces back to July 2009, when there was [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Citing_sources/Archive_26#Improving_.3Cref.3E extensive discussion and a straw poll], resulting in strong support for the innovation, and subsequent implementation by User:Dragons flight. There is also a Help page explaining List-defined references.
I have of course updated my user page to reflect all this, and to provide all the relevant links to the topic in one place. The exercise leading up to this, by myself and you, was far from fruitless. We independently arrived at the same conclusions as those whose efforts led to the implementation, and our elaborations are a good supplement. Of course, some of the reservations that Kudpung expressed are to be found in the July discussion. But the overall conclusion was the same. It is optional for indidual editors, and works with other styles, so doesn't interfere anyway. But of course, that is no longer just the conclusion of you and me (I never thought it was anyway, it just seemed we were elaborating the unelaborated). A number of others got there first. Wotnow (talk) 00:03, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
Worcs project
Hi Gyro. After having spent hours (days) creating all those project pages, I must admit that keeping them up to date is something I tend to forget. I had always hoped that other project members would help out there. If you see anything that has been done, dont hesitate to put a
:I kind of forgot about the Worcs page - somehow I forgot to 'watch' it. It's on my list now, and I'll try to participate a bit more. GyroMagician (talk) 17:53, 7 January 2010 (UTC)
Malvern
Hi, I've tried to change some refs and ended up with those horrible red warnings again - can't locate the real refs to delete...--Kudpung (talk) 14:43, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
:Okay, I've fixed them. When you see a red warning message saying something like:
::
:it means there is a reference in the list at the bottom of the page that isn't used in the article body. To make the error go away you need to edit the reference list, find the reference named "Organbuilding" (the one that starts
Malvern Hills
You're right about the article needing a lot more work. I've added a list of possible sources to the talk page at Talk:Malvern Hills from my personal notes for working on Malvern related articles, but I haven't got a lot of time at the moment to do much with them - I have to make up for the time I lost at work while we were trying to get Malvern to GA. --Kudpung (talk) 05:08, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
:Um, wow, that's a lot of references! There's some good stuff in there too, thanks. I'll see what I can do with the Hills article - it will be a lot slower than Malvern, but I'll add bits and pieces as I find time.
:I've tried to have a last hack at Malvern. I've stared at the article so much I can't really see it any more (I guess you have the same problem). I think we've addressed all but two of Dana boomer's points, so we're nearly there. I've left a note on the talk page about the opening paragraph - I'm interested to know what you think. GyroMagician (talk) 18:21, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
::Hi Gyro. Thanks for all your further edits to Malvern, particularly the ref that states that QinetiQ is the largest employer! Some of the content of the Malvern article, especially the intro, were deliberately written as a workaround to avoid a heated argument, to the rather strong comments of just one user who asserted that Malvern is neither a place nor a civil parish, nor a town, at all, and the beginnings of an edit war were brewing. It's no pleasure to me to get involved in heated argumentsand/or edit wars in this encyclopedia, and that particuar contributor, although extremely competent in the use of editing tools, has an extraordinary history of conflict, often bordering on WP:CIVIL. Because of totally unjustified run-ins with some people, particularly those wannabe admins who do fly-past tagging, I have come very close last year to retiring completely from Wikipedia in spite of all the work I put into creating the Worcs project, stimulating participation, and micromanaging it.
Maybe we can satisfy everyone's expectations and give ourselves a pat on the back if we get GA for Malvern. The bigger an article is, the more difficult it is to pass all the requirements (I know of articles that are little longer than stub size that have got GA).
What we need to do now is to stop all editing to Malvern as requested by the reviewer, to give her a chance to complete her mission. IMHO, at this stage we should be looking at reasons to help it pass rather than introduce more possible grounds for failure, or more work that this not required for GA, but that will have to comply if changes are made now. According to her most recent statement today, the article is now very, very close to passing.
If the Malvern article passes, we will have a benchmark for work on other major articles in the Worcestershire project such as (Worcestershire, Worcester, Redditch, Bromsgrove, Evesham, Kidderminster, Pershore, etc.) some of which are really in a catastrophic state and desperately need attention.
The Malvern Hills article is actually not in bad shape, but could certainly do with a lot of expansion.
I will be in the UK in my home town of Malvern again in April (I live in Asia) and I will be using much of the time to scour the county for archives, records, and photos,for other Worcs articles as I did for Malvern last September. In this context, if you would like to make a 'shopping list' I would be happy to drive round the county, get meetings again with mayors, town clerks, councillors, and local historians, and check out the libraries and the WRO.--Kudpung (talk) 01:15, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
Chance glass
Hi Gyro, there was not really any need to delete the mention of pioneering glasswork at Malvern because In 1948 the Malvern plant produced the world's first interchangeable syringe.They also continued developing TV tube manufacturiing solutions from the Malvern plant, that they licenced to the mass producers in the television industry. New technologies for radio tubes (valves) was also constantly in demand from nearby RRE. There is a lot more to the story too, but when, the official biographer of Chance and I got together to polish up this article, we felt that less is more, and rather than plagiarise his own book and leave ourselves open to COI and POV, we left most of the really interesting stuff out.--Kudpung (talk) 11:27, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
:Ah, now that's new to me, I only found out about the earlier Smethwick work. It sounds like we need a ref to the biography - I didn't find much detail on the Chance website. I deleted pioneering because it wasn't really backed up by that ref. The Chance Brothers website could also do with that ref. (I'm sure the biographer won't mind the publicity!) GyroMagician (talk) 11:43, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
::I don't think the GA reviewer actually queried it anyway. IO think we(d best leave the article alone now until she's finished with it. Another reviewer has since chimed in because of the kafruffle and we might risk losing the pass mark by messing about with it much more, and we were so close this morning.--Kudpung (talk) 12:43, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
:::But it was incorrect, query or not. I was trying to address the Especially as this article is already rather long comment. I think we could still manage a little more there. How long does the GA review stay open? I understood from Dana boomers 'Final Comments' that the review was over - I think I've misunderstood. GyroMagician (talk) 12:56, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
::::If the review was over, she would have published her verdict. I think Dona has given up with us and passed it on to another reviewer who has now chimed in, possibly because we kept interfering by changing things she wasn't worried about and had already asked us a couple of times to stop editing while she finished. She asked us to change two specific points which I then did, and I had already addressed the article length issue this morning. I would really suggest now to leave things alone and see what happens, because we were so close a couple of times, and no successful GA reviews usually drag out this long. I mean, if you're concerned about the length, you could cut the whole article down to two paragraphs like THIS and get GA for it. At the moment, it looks as if we are trying to rehash things we thrashed out eight months ago and were satisified with. The point I made on the review page this moring (last night to you) was that it's not that the article is too long and needs slimming down at all cost, but rather that there is still a heck of lot that could have ben included, but was deliberately left out so that the article doesn't get any longer. Thing is, h and very strict, but she may not understand how important Malvern is, and why so much effort has gone into it. I guess I'd be the same if I were to review article about some small town in the US I'd never heard of. I would be ashamed to be doing what some editors are doing by getting their pals to review their articles for them.--Kudpung (talk) 13:46, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
:::::Okay, you've talked me round. I think between us we've addressed the highlighted issues. I'll stop editing until we hear back from the review. I still think we could cut some - obviously not cutting out large paragraphs, but trimming here and there - but I guess there are more pressing things to do elsewhere in Worcs. Let's see what comes back. GyroMagician (talk) 15:31, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
Malvern GA, failing...
Hi Gyro,I know you guys have gone to a lot of trouble over this new referencing system, but it probably came at the wrong moment after the article had already been submitted for GA. It's now created a bit of a muddle and is seriously interfering with the reviewer's efforts to get the article GA'd before the time limit runs out and has to be failed. It would be great if you could do everything possible to sort these multiple issues out as quickly as possible - I'm afraid that I am completely useless and unable to help with it. See: Talk:Malvern,_Worcestershire/GA1#Final comments. Thanks. --Kudpung (talk) 03:33, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
:Hi Gyro. You may have seen my comments elsewhere, but as a courtesy, I add this bit.
When fixing the last lot of refs (#90, 91, 92), I recalled how it came about that we had templates with "citation", and "cite xyz". When trying to implement templates for the Harvard style, I found that when placing citations in the bibliography section, those with "cite xyz" didn't work. I looked at a couple of articles utilising the Harvard-style templates, and saw that they used "citation". On the offchance that this would fix the problem, I changed the recalcitrant refs, and they worked (see e.g. [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Malvern,_Worcestershire&oldid=332489193 this version at beginning of changeover], and [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Malvern,_Worcestershire&oldid=335711655 this version just prior to reversion from Harvard to Malvern Water style].
:When we reverted back to the previous referencing layout, having given the Harvard layout a good shot to see how it would fare, those citation changes didn't cause any ill effects, so remained. I think I see something of where you are coming from. There wasn't any history of edit warring etc, and the article was stable and looked ready to roll, but then she notices these changes going on. If I were her, I'd feel remiss not to comment, and I acknowledge that.
:I guess the crux of the point I would try to make is that we initially went down a 'wrong road', recognised it just in time, and despite it all, we seemed to pull it off, with the refs reading as refs should, bar ordinary bits to fix, like missing publishers. I'd have spotted that, along with the double up of the Tony Freer-Minshull (2007) listing in 'Further reading', which is now fixed. But perhaps all is not lost yet. Regards Wotnow (talk) 06:58, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
::Okay, let's clear this up. There were TWO major changes made to the referencing style. The first was to convert to the
::The second change was to move the refs to the end of the article, and cite them using
::Now, let's get a hold of ourselves. There is no serious problem. Dana's comments were addressed in a couple of edits. If we pass or fail on the basis of a couple of citation/cite discrepancies, it would be an odd review. However, I do not see how complaining about this in the GA review comments is helpful. It begins to looks like an edit war. GyroMagician (talk) 10:07, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
Worcestershierre, Warwickshierre, Yorkshierre, and Everyshierre
Hello {{PAGENAME}}! A non-British user seems to be attempting to suggest that the Brits are not pronouncing their own British place names correctly, and appears to believe that it is a policy of Wikipedia to instruct the Brits, through the use of the IPA, how British English should be pronounced. He/she also seems to be of the opinion that it is Wikipedia policy to regard British English by default as a rhotic language, which it is not. Some British Wikipedians are trying to avoid an edit conflict and have requested my support. I have added my comments to the debate the non-British user has has started in defence of his/her multiple, WP:BOLD? changes to IPA pronunciations of British place names. As a professional linguist I accord every version of English its own particular merits and my position here strictly concerns the way in which the IPA is interpreted and applied in the Wikipedia, and how the current policy may need to be changed through a truly representative consensus. If you would like to help resolve this issue, please see User talk:Kudpung#IPA, RP, etc. and User talk:Lfh#Warwickshire to get the background. Maybe you could then chime in with your views on the subject at Wikipedia talk:IPA for English#Rhoticity in place names. Thanks. --Kudpung (talk) 17:55, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
:I think you're far more qualified than I to clear this one up (and I see you're doing a solid job of it!) but I've stuck my ore in anyway. It does seem strange to argue that IPA is not phonetically accurate! If you win this one, which clearly you should, we'll have to go through a lot of English place names, the standard appear to include the unfortunate "r" GyroMagician (talk) 21:28, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
CONGRATULATIONS!
You are now the proud owner of this badge - wear it with pride :) --Kudpung (talk) 22:59, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
:You thought we'd never get there for a moment ;-) Well done - as our unofficial leader you should celebrate the Worcestershire project getting its first GA! GyroMagician (talk) 23:11, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
::I concur with both of you. It's been a privilege to be involved, and of course thanks goes to Dana for bearing with us, and a thanks all round to all who contributed. I particularly liked your "get a grip" comments Gyro. I can see a the makings of a screenplay here... Wotnow (talk) 01:01, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
:::So much damage can be done in the last minute rush at the end...But we didn't, and the hard work paid off. It's been good fun. I've just added an auto-box showing the current state of Worcs articles, so we can see a bit more clearly what needs doing (there is plenty). On another topic, the place name pronunciation discussion has opened a hornets nest! We've gone from a disagreement about one page to arguing Wikipedia policy. Which appears to need changing. Wotnow, I did like your the better we understand a phenomenon or problem, the more likely it is to be oversimplified commnet. I shall be quoting that to my students. GyroMagician (talk) 13:10, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
::::Ah yes, John D. Barrow's 'Groucho Marx effect'. I was put onto his book World Within a World by a physics lecturer (who also put me onto the papers I cite in Andrew Pickering), who organised an elective interdisciplinary philosophy of science course. Part of the objective of the course was to get students thinking about thinking. One guest lecturer, a "card carrying philosopher of science" has tried often over the years to point out the difference between "fill the bottle" forms of education, where scientists, and students in general, are essentially turned into fact-filled technicians rather than heuristic problem-solvers.
::::For my money, the crux of the latter boils down to something a tutor said years ago to a room full of students anxious about just how much they were expected to memorise from various references, one of them a massive tome. The tutor's comment: "you don't have to remember this stuff. You only have to know where to find it, and how to think about it when you find it". That's one of the single best pieces of advice I've ever had. Same theme as the "card carrying philosopher", from a different angle. Of course it helps to remember things, especially for things like exams. But being able to rattle off facts is not the same as being able to think with them, either as an individual or a discipline. In Nigel Barley's book The Innocent Anthropologist, he says "anthropology is not short of facts but simply anything intelligent to do with them". Of course, we're in trouble if our memory fails to allow us to work on a problem long enough to solve it, like Jimmie, the subject of Oliver Sacks' essay 'The Lost Mariner' in The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat. But with an otherwise good memory, a pertinent education foundation, and reasonably reliable heuristics, one can always work out something given useful facts.
=Sandra Boynton's Linguistic solutions for international chocolate searching=
If you'll forgive me dribbling on a bit, perhaps the last word on pronounciation should go to Sandra Boynton, from her book Chocolate: The Consuming Passion (pp.104-105). Here, she gives vital linguistic advice for travellers on "the quickest and most reliable way to find chocolate", via the phrase "Excuse me, where is the nearest chocolate?" For example:
- France, Belgium, Switzerland: "Excusez-moi, où est le chocolat le plus proche?".
:Pronounced: Ex-COOZ-ay-mwah, oo ay l'sho-cÕ-LAH l'ploo prÕsh?
- Germany, Austria, Switzerland: "Entschuldigen Sie bitte, wo ist die nächste Schokolade?"
:Pronounced: Ent-SHOOL-dee-gen 'zee BIT-tuh, vÕ ist dee NEX-tuh shÕ-cÕ-LAR-duh?
- United States: "Hey you, where can a guy get some chocolate around here"
:Pronounced: Hay-OO, oo-AYRR kin uh GAH-ee git sum CHOCK-lit uh-ROW-und HEE-err?
Pardon the Õ. I couldn't find how to produce an 'o' with a dash - on top, so I copied and pasted the nearest looking thing. Wotnow (talk) 05:00, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
IPA
I've just added another chunk to that IPA discussion at Wikipedia talk:IPA for English#Rhoticity in place names I think it's got totally out of hand with some people missing the point entirely, and chucking bits in just for the sake of having something to say. I've since had a look at what Wikipedia has to say about the IPA, and I must admit, it's not the way I would explain it or use it with my students. It certainly needs clarifying and it's easy to see how Lfh got mislead into thinking and doing what he did. --Kudpung (talk) 18:12, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
:I get the feeling the policy and description has been put together by people...less familiar with IPA. I also don't really know enough, but it would be good if you, and some other Wikipedians with similar expertise, could sort this out and lay down some sensible guidelines. Is there some sort of linguists message board where you could appeal for comment? GyroMagician (talk) 18:30, 13 January 2010 (UTC)
::Strangely enough, except for an article or two on electronic semantic searching, and language analysis software, I have rarely got involved with anything on WP that concerns my work. Most of what I write here is about Worcestershire, wine, and Thailand. I suppose it's because WP is a distraction from professional life, a kinda hobby. I have obviously spent a lot of time teaching the IPA, but I done't really want to lecture about it here, because of the polemic - as you have recocognised - it might engender, and there are a lot of wannabe academics and self-appointed admins (à la Headbomb) lurking in the sidelines. The problem with the IPA symbol chart shown on the WP, is that although it states that it 'covers' American, British, Australian English etc, there are no side notes in it to show which of those dialects the Roman script examples refer to. Which is quite absurd and unhelpful, and was obviously the catalyst to Lfm's dilemma. I'll see what I can do, but it won't be for now.--Kudpung (talk) 11:59, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
:::Wotnow said: In Nigel Barley's book The Innocent Anthropologist, he says "anthropology is not short of facts but simply anything intelligent to do with them". Of course, we're in trouble if our memory fails to allow us to work on a problem long enough to solve it,'' - and that is precisely where some of the many authors of the IPA articles have got their collective knickers in a twist. --Kudpung (talk) 05:22, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
GA reviews
Hi Gyro, I just though I'd let you know that we may have been submitted to a GA review that insisted on a quality that might actually have gone beyond the GA criteria. This for example from the GA guideline page: Well-written: (a) the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct; and (b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation. [1]^ Compliance with other aspects of the Manual of Style is not required for good articles.
There is definitely no insistence that the referencing system follows any pattern at all, and even ugly bare URLs are allowed, while retrieved dates, book citations, publishers, are not required. Not that I'm complaining because the experience has set the standard for my own work that was probably never far off the mark anyway. But it's food for thought if ever we review anyone's articles.--Kudpung (talk) 13:43, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
:You may find my subsequent comment of interest, not least for educational reasons. Regards Wotnow (talk) 00:29, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
::And my answer to it :) --Kudpung (talk) 01:43, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
News
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The WikiProject WORCESTERSHIRE Newsletter
No. 1 - January 2010
(Archived here.)
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Welcome to the first [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Worcestershire|WikiProject Worcestershire]] newsletter
If you are not yet a member of the The Worcestershire project, you are probably receiving this because you have significantly contributed to one of our pages. Now is the time to consider joining - it might help you get some assistance on a page you feel particularly attached to it.
Someone once asked on the project page if they could get a newsletter. The Worcestershire project only has a few members and they most probably have the project pages and major articles on their watchlists, but here goes anyway...
;Great news for 2010!
This year has got off to great start with the promotion of {{classicon|GA}}Malvern, Worcestershire{{classicon|GA}} to Good Article status. The GA review process was particularly strict and demanding, and a good thing too, because it sets a benchmark for the quality to be targeted for other articles in the project, even if we do not intend to reach GA with them. Furthermore, and probably most important, this particular review clearly demonstrated what can be achieved with teamwork, and it puts the page on a par with biggies such as Manchester, one of the Wikipedia's flagship English settlement articles. Anyone can go ahead and create an article, and some articles have a major contributor, but it would have been impossible for Malvern to have been promoted without the extraordinary collaborative effort of a dedicated few, spread across three continents in very different time zones, and sometimes tripping over each other at all times of the day and night to get the article up to snuff.
;Recently founded
Since the Worcs project was founded barely seven months ago on 8 June last year, in addition to the creation and maintenance of the project pages themselves. a lot of work has already been done by the Worcs project members, including the creation of stubs for most of the missing settlements in the county, creation and improvement work on Malvern Water, creation and expansion of articles on important schools and one or two biographies in the county, and general repetitive tasks such as keeping spam and vandalism at bay.
;Experts!
All the members of the project have their own specialised fields of interest of course, such as French wine, schools, Lancashire, the Malverns, cricket, Magnetic Resonance Imaging, busses, castles, waterways, or Spike Milligan. However, they all have a common denominator somewhere that brings them together in Worcestershire.
The Worcestershire project mainly concerns settlements. Perhaps after the success of Malvern, the immediate priority now is to improve the articles that really ought to be the flagships of the project, namely Worcester, and Worcestershire. These two are, sadly, some of the articles in the worst state. They have been created long ago and expanded over time by a great many shingle-edit authors and IPs.
;So wotnow? (pun)
A possible suggestion would be to take one of those rather shoddy pages, probably Worcester, the county seat, or the project's eponymous article Worcestershire and do a Malvern job on it. Such a concerted piece of teamwork might even earn the project another major GA - and we now know it can be done!
Meet up
An attempt at a meet up failed last year - mainly either because some of the most active members of the project live in other countries, or the timing wasn't quite right. We can have another attempt in April, when Kudpung will be back in Malvern for his dad's 90th birthday, and hopefully this will coincide with a home trip to the UK for GyroMagician.
Talk
The place to make your suggestions and dicscuss it all is HERE - be sure to have the page on your watchlist!
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Would you like to join the WP:WORCS?? Please enter yourself at WP:WORCS! - new editors are always welcome!
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Happy Wikying, all the best for 2010, and special thanks again all round for the efforts of the Malvern taskforce, and to everyone else who has contributed to our articles.
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{{classicon|GA}} Currently there are two featured articles in Worcestershire.