Wikipedia:Deletion review/Log/2013 April 21
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:{{DRV links|File:Yehuda Amichai.jpg|xfd_page=File:Yehuda Amichai.jpg|article=Yehuda Amichai}} file deleted as "(F7: Violates non-free use policy)"; however, commercial photographer, not " from a commercial source (e.g., Associated Press, Getty)"; previously published at non-profit website; small resolution; one use in infobox. Slowking4Farmbrough's revenge⇔ †@1₭ 17:42, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
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:{{DRV links|Civilization Jihad|xfd_page=Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/User:GroundRisk/sandbox|article=}} This article was wrongly flagged for speedy deletion on the grounds it was an attack page. This page should not be deleted because the subject in question has been written about in the US by a variety of scholarly sources. I have made appropriate edits to the current article in my sandbox, added more reliable sources, and got rid of areas of concern. The page still needs improvement but again, should not be flagged for speedy deletion. --GroundRisk (talk • contribs) 17:04, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
::Oh sorry, I didn't know! Thanks! GroundRisk (talk) 15:53, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
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:{{DRV links|Beautiful Store|xfd_page=None - was speedy deleted|article=}} {{admin|Deb}} speedy deleted the article Beautiful Store (see original version in sandbox at User:GaHee Park/sandbox, disregard some junk at the top) under "G11: Unambiguous advertising or promotion". G11 states: "Pages that are exclusively promotional, and would need to be fundamentally rewritten to become encyclopedic". I think it is clear it does not fall under G11 (it is not "Unambiguous advertising or promotion", but at best, a poor grammar article about a notable organization with promotional tone). While quite possibly the article in question is a valid target for being tagged with {{tl|Advert}} (and {{tl|Cleanup-english}} or {{tl|Grammar}}), neither of those make it a valid target for speedy deletion. Let's also take a look at {{tl|Template:Db-g11}}. It states that the target article in its "current form serves only to promote an entity, person or product". Well, this article was doing more then just promoting it, it was informing about it (for example the first lead sentence is quite clear and non-promotional "Beautiful Store(아름다운 가게) was launched in 2002 as an example to the Oxfam shop, is a not-for-profit organizations and social enterprises."). Ev To quote further from G11 template: "Nor does this criterion apply where substantial encyclopedic content would remain after removing the promotional material; in this case please remove the promotional material yourself, or add the {{tl|advert}} tag to alert others to do so.". And again, this article has many parts that are clearly non-promotional, and would remain a valid stub/start class article even after removing problematic sentences. (Even if only the quoted sentence was all that remained, it would be a valid stub, but I think that most if not all of the article is valid, as well - again, suffering primarily from poor grammar, not promotional tone). I ask that this article is restored, with no prejudice to being tagged with the templates mentioned above (I will likely do so myself when it is restored and they are not there the next time I review it). PS. Disclaimer: the user who created the article is a student in a course I am an instructor/ambassador for. {{tl|Advert}} and :Category:Articles with a promotional tone are not candidates for speedy. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:06, 21 April 2013 (UTC) ::I was about to say that my comments on my own talk page adequately represented my point of view on this, but, reading what Piotrus has written here, I see a more fundamental issue. For Piotrus to say that "the first lead sentence is quite clear and non-promotional" about a sentence that reads almost as nonsense suggests that his threshold for identifying "poor English" is well below my own. As I said in my discussion with him, it is hardly surprising that we disagree about whether the content is promotional if the meaning is not clear - but apparently Piotrus understands what that first sentence means. As it stands, I freely admit that I don't.Deb (talk) 12:12, 21 April 2013 (UTC) Also see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Administrators%27_noticeboard/Incidents#User:LittleBenW_edit-warring_over_diacritics_again. this] AN thread for background. :*Wrong link, I believe, I think what was meant was [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Administrators%27_noticeboard#Improper_use_of_speedy_deletion.2C_asking_for_article_restoration_and_review_of_admin.27s_use_of_deletion_tools this]. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:06, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
::: It's already here in a sandbox (✉→BWilkins←✎) 12:18, 21 April 2013 (UTC) ::{{done}} Basalisk inspect damage⁄berate 12:16, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
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:{{DRV links|Captain Tsubasa 5: Hasha no Shōgō Campione|xfd_page=Wikipedia:Non-free_content_review/Archive_21#Animated_game_GIFs.3F|article=Captain Tsubasa 5: Hasha no Shōgō Campione}} Listing the discussion for review on the grounds of WP:DRVPURPOSE#1 - the closer didn't correctly interpret the discussions' consensus. Two animated gifs illustrating the "Cinematic Soccer" gameplay (:File:Captaintsubasa5.gif and :File:Captain tsubasa 5 cutscenes.gif) were deleted under the subjective criterion WP:NFCC#8, lack of contextual significance. User:B closed the talk as "general agreement that this is not appropriate fair use", which disregards the editors expressing the need to keep at least one of the images, and the various suggestions on how to improve both the article's text to provide more clear significance, and the images to reduce the amount of non-free content used. I contacted the closer here for a more thorough explanation, confirming that deletion was based exclusively on WP:NFCC#8's interpretation of context (although there were some concerns about minimal usage but also some arguments on how to fix it). Discussion was still ongoing; under these circumstances, the closing prevented the possibility to achieve a thorough consensus on how to best use the non-free content to improve the article. Wikipedia:Non-free content review instructs administrators to close as no consensus when there's no clear outcome, which B should have done in this case. Diego (talk) 07:49, 21 April 2013 (UTC) :Hi fellow Wikipedians. I'm the editor who created/edited the Captain Tsubasa 5 Wiki article. I can't comment using my main account because I was blocked for insulting a High-functioning autistic (and etc) Wikipedian. A Wikipedian who spent the last 7 years adding false/nonsense/fake/extremely silly info on Wikipedia. No one cared about it. I did care, and the result was: block :) Anyway, I just read everything about those two gifs and my opinion is: sometimes these so-called "administrators" can be amusing. They think they can do everything (deleting this and that) just because they have the "power". They don't care at all about other ppl's "work"/opinion. Sometimes (I said sometimes, I am not generalizing) they are like... the Hitler, Mao Tse Tung or Mussolini from Wikipedia. About the article, yes, it can be improved. But the reason I didn't add more text was because... I didn't want the article to look like a game guide or something like it. But in this particular case, removing one of those gif images would be reasonable, but removing the two gifs..?!? I'm not sure if the images can be restored, however I still have them (because I knew that sooner or later some random Wikipedian would make a complaint), so IF you want to re-add one of those images you can e-mail me: rickenn yahoo com . P.S. don't bother blocking this IP or something, I use hundreds of different IPs and have been editing Wikipedia anonymously, in different countries, so it's fine. Cheers everyone and keep up the good (or not so good) work. --89.214.149.123 (talk) 09:01, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
::You don't think cinematic soccer is relevant to the game? In any case, if you read the article you'll find that the image was not just to illustrate cinematic soccer, but how the game deviated from it to include a classic field view. This was also illustrated by the deleted images, and it's now not explained in the article in a way that can be understood. Though, deletion review is not to rehash the arguments justifying deletion, it's here to evaluate whether the closing admin followed proper procedure. Diego (talk) 20:41, 25 April 2013 (UTC) :::The purpose of the article is to describe the game, not to describe what 'cinematic soccer' is. Lengthy explanations about cinematic soccer are out of scope for that article. --Stefan2 (talk) 20:50, 25 April 2013 (UTC) ::::The game is in the cinematic soccer genre, so if you don't explain cinematic soccer you're not describing the game. And this is still unrelated to the purpose of this review. Do you think B's close accurately reflected the discussion consensus or not? And why? Diego (talk) 06:06, 26 April 2013 (UTC) |
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