Wikipedia:Featured article review/Trapped in the Closet (South Park)/archive1

:Notified: WikiProject Animation/South Park task force, WikiProject Television, Szmenderowiecki

Nominating for FAR per [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Trapped_in_the_Closet_(South_Park)&oldid=1186070010 notes on the talk page], primarily comprehensiveness and organization; minor issues are with referencing and images. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ^talk 00:34, 4 January 2024 (UTC)

: The most obvious issues to me are:

:* Lead is too long, especially the second paragraph

:* Plot summary exceeds 400 words (MOS:TVPLOT)

:* Excessively long quotes

:* Legacy section is mostly sourced to primary sources and could be cut (aside from Emmys part)

: Basically all stuff that was already noted. I'll try to shorten the lead and plot section but the controversies probably need a more thorough pruning. RunningTiger123 (talk) 02:28, 4 January 2024 (UTC)

:I reviewed the images. I amended the rationale for the infobox, and I believe that the second image (the ad in Variety) is salvageable under WP:NFC#CS, because there is sourced commentary about the image (note the text says it was interpreted as a sneaky allusion to Mel Gibson, instead of being the congratulations that Variety intended that ad to be.

:I agree that the third image isn't worthy of inclusion because it's simply illustrative, so I removed it.

:I cannot comment on proper organisation or comprehensiveness because I'm not too familiar with the subject of the article. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 12:41, 4 January 2024 (UTC)

• Move to FARC. While some progress was made shortly after it was nominated, the concerns about the balance and reception sections have not had enough attention. Z1720 (talk) 19:48, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
• Move to FARC per above. Hog Farm _Talk 13:55, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

:Issues raised in the review section include comprehensiveness and structure. Nikkimaria (talk) 05:06, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

• Delist no progress to address concerns. Z1720 (talk) 21:21, 8 February 2024 (UTC)
• Delist definitely below FA quality. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:28, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
• Delist per above, further work needed. Hog Farm _Talk 04:28, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

{{FARClosed|delisted}} Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 07:12, 15 February 2024 (UTC)

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