Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/PJ Haarsma/1

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: {{al|PJ Haarsma|noname=yes}} • [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment/PJ_Haarsma/1&action=watch Watch article reassessment page] • Most recent review

: {{#ifeq:{{PAGENAME}}|Good article reassessment/PJ Haarsma/1|Category:GAR/84}} Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:56, 27 March 2025 (UTC)

There is lots of unencyclopedic language throughout the article. The "School visits" section seems quite promotional and unencyclopedic: perhaps it can be removed. There is uncited text throughout the article, and not much information about his more recent work: he won an Emmy in 2021 for "Journey" but the article doesn't have much information about this. Z1720 (talk) 13:14, 28 February 2025 (UTC)

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