Wikipedia talk:Did you know/Archive 184#ALT image text in Prep/Queues
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swap image hooks for Q6 and Q7?
Would anyone object to swapping these two? I'd originally said Dec 31 or Jan 1 because the article is about both, but (I know, duh) the hook itself is actually a New Year's Eve hook. —valereee (talk) 19:54, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:No objections from my side. Good call to run it on NYE. Good luck. Ktin (talk) 20:46, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:both non-u.s. non-bios, so no prep set balance problems with a swap. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:49, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{@DYK admins}} anyone wanna execute this? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 05:37, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{@DYK admins}} the New Year's Eve queue goes live in five hours, can someone please do this swap before then? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 19:14, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{done}}. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:57, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::(: thank ya thank ya theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:03, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::Thanks, Cwm! —valereee (talk) 20:17, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
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Queue 5
=Cikobia-i-Ra=
The Cikobia-i-Ra hook as approved says: {{tq|... that on the island of Cikobia-i-Ra, women donate 10 percent of their earnings to combat climate change?}} What it says in the article is as follows: {{tq|The island has been affected by the climate crisis, including an increase in the number of natural disasters. In response, women from the island established the Cikobia Island Development Committee, which enables women to start businesses based on natural resources available to them. This then enables the women to return 10% of their earnings to sustainability projects on the island.}} So it appears that it is self-employed women who donate part of their earnings, whilst the hook implies that all women do so (which would only be true if all women were self-employed). Any suggestions for improvement? Schwede66 19:59, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
:Perhaps women → some women or → a group of women. TSventon (talk) 20:13, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
::I suppose I should ping User:Lajmmoore and User:Storye book. Schwede66 20:37, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
::: I have added a quote from the source (ref.5 in the article: Cikobia's women agents of change) into the articole to confirm the hook. Storye book (talk) 21:27, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
::::Storye book, the hook suggests that all the island women donate 10%, the reference says "From the 42 participants at that workshop, 15 now have fulltime businesses", so it seems the wording of the hook is misleading. Schwede66 do you think the hook is ambiguous, but acceptable for DYK, or inaccurate and not acceptable. TSventon (talk) 22:48, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::{{u|TSventon}}, the hook needs changing. Schwede66 05:46, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::: I am happy with "some women" or "a group of women", as suggested above. It could also be "self-employed women", I suppose, since the number 15 may have changed since the source was written. Storye book (talk) 10:28, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
Changed to:
- ... that a group of self-employed women on the island of Cikobia-i-Ra donate 10 percent of their earnings to combat climate change? Gatoclass (talk) 14:27, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
=Argentine seabass=
The Argentine seabass hook as approved says: {{tq|... that while bottom trawling is a viable method of commercial fishing for Argentine seabass, it rarely occurs in areas where trawling is possible?}} I cannot see in the sources where it says that "bottom trawling is a viable method of commercial fishing for Argentine seabass". Ping to User:Ryan shell User:Gwennie-nyan as nominator and reviewer; they might be able to help. Schwede66 20:11, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
:{{u|Schwede66}} I clicked on the reference which leads to [https://www.iucnredlist.org/species/154987/4683767 this]. I can only find one mention of trawling there which says "It is not found in areas in which trawling occurs (Heemstra pers. comm.)." That contradicts the hook. SL93 (talk) 15:37, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
:Sources that I have found with a Google search showed that the trawling happened a long time ago with the [https://www.researchgate.net/publication/273739189_Early_life_history_of_the_Argentine_sea_bass_Acanthistius_patachonicus_Pisces_Serranidae first time] being in 1978. The link in the IUCN article references "Nakamura, I. 1986. Important fishes trawled off Patagonia. Japan Marine Fishery Resource Research Center, Tokyo." We would need proof that bottom trawling is still used for Argentine seabass. SL93 (talk) 15:47, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{u|SL93}} What I remember from the sourcing was one said that currently bottom trawling doesn't occur, as you pointed out, however it seems the other source on the FAO which, if I remember correctly, listed the fact that trawling used to occur. I know the IUCN mentions that they're likely in marine protected areas now. I interpreted the former use of the method as indication it was viable, however yes, as you and sources stated, it doesn't happen anymore. ~Gwennie🐈⦅💬 📋⦆ 20:18, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Ah found it. The FAO source has the wrong link. The correct one is https://www.fao.org/fishery/en/aqspecies/3081 which lists {{tq|{{sic|Caugth}} with bottom trawl . The total catch reported for this species to FAO for 1999 was 5 914 t.}} ~Gwennie🐈⦅💬 📋⦆ 20:22, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
::::I thought that the hook was referring to something that is currently happening when I first read it. Maybe it was viable then, but there is no verification on it being viable now. SL93 (talk) 04:34, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
::::{{u|Schwede66}} Maybe the hook should be pulled for now. The nominator last edited on November 30. SL93 (talk) 15:21, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
::::What about changing the tense to "bottom trawling was a viable method of commercial fishing for Argentine seabass" based on the references discussed? TSventon (talk) 15:38, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
Am I missing something? Because the hook makes no sense to me. Bottom trawling rarely occurs in areas where trawling is possible? So it mainly occurs in areas where trawling isn't possible? How does that make sense? Gatoclass (talk) 08:00, 27 December 2021 (UTC)
:It makes no sense on top of bottom trawling not even happening with the species currently. I think this should be pulled. SL93 (talk) 22:50, 27 December 2021 (UTC)
Suggested alt:
- ... that the current population trend of the Argentine seabass, a rare species, is unknown? [https://www.iucnredlist.org/species/154987/4683767 source]. Gatoclass (talk) 03:51, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
: I have substituted the above suggested alt in the queue to ensure the original hook doesn't slip through to the main page given that there is not much oversight at this time of year, but it could still use independent approval. {{@DYK admins}}? Gatoclass (talk) 04:03, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::16px i have to imagine the IUCN list would turn up "data deficient" on many a rare species (looks like just over 20,000), but the hook is hooky and cited, if not unusual. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 04:15, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::: Indeed it does, but I'm afraid I could find nothing else in that article that could be described as "hooky" at all, but anyone else is welcome to try. Anyhow, thanks for the tick :) Gatoclass (talk) 05:10, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
- ... that the species name for the Argentine seabass says it comes from Brazil? JennyOz (talk) 05:29, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
- ... that name of the Argentine seabass points to its Brazilian origin?
- That's pretty clever! I tweaked it a little, left it below, but I'd be happy to run with that. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 05:35, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
- :Gatoclass? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 05:36, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::: Neither of those hooks work for me, though the underlying idea isn't too bad. How about something like:
:::*ALT4: ... that the specific and common names of the Argentine seabass refer to different countries? Gatoclass (talk) 14:09, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::: While waiting for a response, I have substituted ALT4 into the set. Gatoclass (talk) 14:37, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::::{{yo|Gatoclass}} hmm, not sure what your objection is—ALT4 seems a little too clinical to me. what about adding "specific name" to the previous hook? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:23, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::: "Specific name" would eliminate the chief objection I had to that hook, which is that it was just plain confusing stating that a name mentioning Argentina somehow signifies Brazil. However, the phrase "points to its Brazilian origin" seems inaccurate or misleading since the fish doesn't have a "Brazilian origin", it's just the first place it was found. Gatoclass (talk) 03:01, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::{{yo|Gatoclass}} Ah, i see. How about:
::::::* ... that the specific name of the Argentine seabass points to its place of discovery in Brazil?
::::::does that work? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:07, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::: Well, it's more accurate, yes, but when put like that, it's pretty ho-hum IMO. ALT4 does a better job of highlighting the naming anomaly. Gatoclass (talk) 03:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::hmm... I'm betting that most people won't know offhand that "specific name" doesn't mean "Argentine seabass", which will make them feel like they stumbled onto the confusion instead of us spelling it out for them. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:19, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::: I've already outlined my objections to ALT3 and shouldn't need to repeat myself. But I have better things to do than waste any more time on this nomination. If ALT4 isn't acceptable, the hook will have to be pulled because I'm done trying to find something better. Gatoclass (talk) 03:33, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::yeah, one would have to figure we were never going to get out of that one. I don't like ALT4 very much, but you're the one who can edit the queues and it's at least better than the unknown trend hook. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:36, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::: Meanwhile, I changed "relate" to "refer" in ALT4 as I agree that "relate" was a bit obtuse. Gatoclass (talk) 03:07, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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[[Template:Did you know nominations/Midnight Sun Mosque]]
I have a slightly technical question about Midnight Sun Mosque's eligibility for DYK. I reviewed this version. I had three main concerns:
- A substantial portion of the text was sourced to Google Maps and "accompanying photos" included with the article (in fact, there is just one photo: :File:Midnight Sun mosque and photographer's shadow in the midnight sun, Inuvik, NT.jpg).
- As the article was started with text copied from Islam in the Arctic, I didn't know whether Midnight Sun Mosque satisfied WP:DYKCRIT 1(a)–(b), which requires text to be new, not copied from other articles.
- I was not sure whether some of the sources were reliable.
{{u|Daniel Case}} has responded to concerns (1) and (2). His view is that (1) is not an issue because Google Maps and original images can be used responsibly per WP:PRIMARY and that (2) is not an issue because the prose was expanded more than 5x between the original version (copied from Islam in the Arctic) and the current version. This is correct: the original version had 2338 bytes of prose; the current version has over 12000 bytes of prose, which puts this slightly over a 5x expansion.
My question is this. Does any kind of prose expansion, including an expansion from primary sources such as Google Maps, count towards the 5x requirement? Analogous situations might include nominating an existing article on a novel or movie after expanding the prose 5x solely with a primary-sourced description of the plot. I am uncomfortable passing an article that contains so much prose based on Google Maps and other primary documents. If our default rule is that articles should be based on reliable, published sources independent of the article's subject (see WP:RS and WP:V), I think the 5x expansion rule should be interpreted accordingly. Of course, it's generally hard to determine what sources an article's content is based on, so I don't think I favour changing the wording of WP:DYKCRIT to make this explicit.
In practical terms, I may need someone else to review Template:Did you know nominations/Midnight Sun Mosque, if anyone else is available. I don't know how to proceed at this point. AleatoryPonderings (???) (!!!) 19:10, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:{{yo|AleatoryPonderings}} my hunch would be that the prose expansion is valid, but the article would fail the sourcing requirement. Google maps is a primary source, and shouldn't be used to support this kind of text. If there's no secondary sourcing for the stuff, it likely doesn't qualify for inclusion in the article (and doing so could be construed as WP:OR). On the narrow question of 5x expansion, this would pass, but getting the article through the nom process would require either cutting out parts (falling below 5x) or strengthening the sourcing. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:53, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{Ping|Theleekycauldron}} I agree with you that Google Maps (specifically Street View) is a primary source, but I commend your attention to the passage at WP:PRIMARY that says primary sources may be used to "make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge." IMO, and I don't really see how there can reasonably be any other opinion, descriptive, non-interpretative text about the publicly visible architectural features of a building and its surrounding neighborhood based on pictures anyone can go look at online is well within both these parameters and pretty much the same thing as the WP:TRANSCRIPTION provision under WP:NOTOR. As I told AP, I have done this in quite a few articles with minimal objection (save for the guy at Chaonei No. 81 who didn't think it was OK for me to use pictures I myself had taken.
We do not seem to have reached a consensus on this, although IMO we should, in order to prevent the kind of rulemaking by assumption that has led, for years, to overbroad applications of plainly worded policies such as people thinking that no links to YouTube whatever were allowed, when in fact WP:YT is pretty clear that only third-party copyrighted content is not allowed to be linked to per the DMCA. In a discussion 14 years old about a similar use of Google Earth as a source, one participant [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:No_original_research&diff=prev&oldid=183880554 said]: "It would probably be OK to say that a satellite photo accessed through Google Earth showed X number of aircraft on the field, as that would be a descriptive statement easily verified without specialist knowledge. But drawing a conclusion that the airfield was active or inactive from that observation would be both questionable, and OR." I firmly believe my descriptions of the exterior of the building fall under the former.
At the end of another discussion of about the same vintage about Street View specifically, another editor [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:No_original_research/Noticeboard&diff=prev&oldid=230650082 says]: " OR policy makes clear that a photograph from a reliable source can be a primary source. GSV is a reliable source. OR policy also makes clear that if the primary source unambiguously backs up the passage written in the article — to any reader, inarguably, and without specialized knowledge — then it is acceptable for use as a source." Again, I completely concur with that interpretation. Daniel Case (talk) 22:03, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Essentially, my content concern re Google Maps is: what is the encyclopedic value of summarizing, at length, the contents of photographs online that are not discussed in depth by secondary sources? If secondary sources do not comment on what is on Street View, etc, I don't see why we ought to be doing so either. The concern is not OR exactly, more like a concern analogous to WP:UNDUE: it seems unencyclopedic to emphasize details such as those captured in Street View if secondary sources are not flagging them for our attention.
:::This is a broader concern than DYK eligibility and if DYK experts concur with leeky that the article is eligible as a 5x expansion, I would pass it as such and take this convo to WT:OR as necessary. If this particular OR question hasn't been discussed in detail in over a decade, presumably opinions will differ. AleatoryPonderings (???) (!!!) 22:12, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{yo|Daniel Case}} The policy also says to {{tq|not base an entire article on primary sources, and [to] be cautious about basing large passages on them.}} By my count, 3,200 prose characters (or over a quarter) of this article is based solely on these kinds of primary sources, and it goes into a lot of detail that I frankly don't see the purpose for without secondary sources signaling its importance. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:39, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::: I think I have to agree with Ponderings and leeky on this - the building just doesn't warrant this level of detailed description, because its details are not at all important to its notability, as evidenced by the secondary sources. To put it another way, this is not a notable building as a piece of architecture. The section in question does look very overdone, and if it was used to get to the x5 expansion, that would qualify in my book as padding. If Daniel wants perhaps to cut back on the detail and submit what remains to GAN, the article in modified form could still be promoted at DYK of course. Gatoclass (talk) 23:00, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::: {{replyto|Gatoclass}} I will let you know when I have pruned it and submitted it to GA so you can promote it then. Daniel Case (talk) 02:50, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
= On a similar note: [[Template:Did you know nominations/The Alignment Problem|The Alignment Problem]] =
Does an article about a book need 1500 characters of non-synopsis text to pass the length requirement, or does plot/summary count for length as well? I'd rather the article be able to show it wouldn't be a stub without plot summary, otherwise it seems like an unfair way of bypassing the "this needs to have the sourcing heft to write a substantial and secondarily-sourced article" requirement. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 07:01, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:I've never seen anyone exclude synopsis text from DYK consideration, and I've nominated, reviewed, and promoted books all in substantial measure. (That said, most of those books haven't been ones where this question would apply.) Vaticidalprophet 07:08, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
: While the idea of excluding plot synopses from the character count has some merit, I'm not persuaded it is necessary. The cited nomination, for example, doesn't read to me as deficient or lacking in substance. Gatoclass (talk) 16:00, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::aighty, thanks to both of y'all—I'll continue with the review. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 16:54, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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Help with a new DYK editor
Hi, just a request for an experienced DYKer or two to keep an eye on Template:Did you know nominations/Uranium mining in the Bancroft area and help if needed, it's a new DYK proposer who needs some help going through the process, and I'm new at providing such help here. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 17:20, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
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Hook referenced to primary source
I was going to promote Template:Did you know nominations/40 Foot Telescope, but the hook "... that the 40 Foot Telescope (pictured) at Green Bank Observatory was the first fully automated telescope?" is referenced to Green Bank Observatory's website. It seems like we would need a reliable third party source for such a claim. The fifth reference says, "As far as we know, it was the first completely automated telescope." Pinging nominator {{u|Mike Peel}} and reviewer {{u|Mindmatrix}}. SL93 (talk) 22:41, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
:I added a second source to the article and the hook: {{cite web |title=World's First Automated Radio Telescope |url=https://public.nrao.edu/gallery/worlds-first-automated-radio-telescope/ |website=National Radio Astronomy Observatory}}. I hope this is workable. — Maile (talk) 22:59, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
::Also, if there's a catch that the second source doesn't use the word "fully", then just eliminate that one word and go with the hook. — Maile (talk) 23:04, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Thank you. I promoted the article. SL93 (talk) 23:40, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
::::{{ping|SL93}} See the discussion on the nomination page for my perspective. Note that NRAO isn't a completely independent source either, since Green Bank used to be part of NRAO. But these are by reliable scientific organisations anyway, so I'm fairly sure they can be trusted (or, if someone comes along to point out an even earlier telescope, expect a new Wikipedia article shortly afterwards. ;-) ). Please ping me if you reply, as I'm not following this page. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 09:56, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::{{ping|Mike Peel}} I will take your word for it. There will be the promoting admin and this discussion is here for anyone who disagrees to chime in. SL93 (talk) 15:20, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::: OK, thank you. I'll also ask around the astronomy community as an extra check. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 16:48, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::: {{ping|SL93}} Just to close this, I checked with the professional astronomers group on Facebook, and got several replies, including from scientists who have been using the 40ft, and those that have worked on other automated telescopes. No-one could find an earlier example, the closest was an optical telescope in the late 1960s, which I've now mentioned in the article. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 19:35, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::::Thanks for checking up on it more. SL93 (talk) 19:40, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
U.S. hooks limit
by my count, we're currently at 21 approved U.S. hooks versus 84 approved hooks overall; that's exactly a quarter, or two out of eight in a prep set, so we should probably keep sets to 2 U.S. hooks or below. Pinging {{yo|BlueMoonset|SL93|Kavyansh.Singh|p=}} as recently active prep builders and bluemoonset theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 07:39, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
: I'm still following this. Let us know when to get back to 4 or less. {{endash}} Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:09, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{yo|Kavyansh.Singh|SL93}} i think we're able to go back to normal now :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:44, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
::try not to use any more non-u.s. non-bios than you have to, though, we're running a shortage of those theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:45, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
[[Template:Did you know nominations/Sangatsu no Phantasia]]
- ... that some of Sangatsu no Phantasia's songs were based on novels written by its vocalist Mia?
- ... that Mia, the vocalist of the anime music unit Sangatsu no Phantasia, is also a published novelist?
Looks like we're at a bit of a brick wall on this one. the first hook doesn't check out, there's no sourcing that says that the songs were based on the novels, just that they were released together, and I don't find the second to be quite interesting enough. We could always go with the "featured in television shows" angle—anyone want to take a crack at fixing this? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:57, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
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Older nominations needing DYK reviewers
The previous list was archived less than two hours ago, so I’ve created a new list that includes all 32 nominations that need reviewing in the Older nominations section of the Nominations page, covering everything through December 13. We currently have a total of 201 nominations, of which 87 have been approved, a gap of 114, up 13 over the past eight days. Thanks to everyone who reviews these.
Over one month old:
November 4: Template:Did you know nominations/Maw Htun Aung (reviewer needed to check ALT3)November 14: Template:Did you know nominations/Liverpool Women's Hospital bombing (reviewed needed to check ALT3)November 27: Template:Did you know nominations/Francis Bourgeois (trainspotter)
Other old nominations:
November 30: Template:Did you know nominations/Hardwick and Woodbury Railroad (two articles)November 30: Template:Did you know nominations/Mike GapesNovember 30: Template:Did you know nominations/2022 Challenge Cup (reviewer needed to check ALT1)December 1: Template:Did you know nominations/Democratic Society Party closure caseDecember 4: Template:Did you know nominations/USS Hoggatt BayDecember 5: Template:Did you know nominations/The Alignment Problem (nomination was nine days late; reviewer will have to decide whether AGF is appropriate for first-time nominator)December 7: Template:Did you know nominations/Agathe RousselleDecember 10: Template:Did you know nominations/Hutch BMXDecember 11: Template:Did you know nominations/Makoto SoejimaDecember 12: Template:Did you know nominations/The Concept of Active Defence in China's Military StrategyDecember 13: Template:Did you know nominations/Our Hindu RashtraDecember 14: Template:Did you know nominations/Eldorado ElectrodataDecember 15: Template:Did you know nominations/Vivienne RohnerDecember 15: Template:Did you know nominations/Soluble NSF attachment proteinDecember 17: Template:Did you know nominations/Arnold OehlrichDecember 18: Template:Did you know nominations/Catherine OmanyoDecember 18: Template:Did you know nominations/Ladoga Skerries National ParkDecember 18: Template:Did you know nominations/Greyhound ElectronicsDecember 19: Template:Did you know nominations/Wedding of Princess Beatrix of the Netherlands and Claus van AmsbergDecember 19: Template:Did you know nominations/John Giordano (martial artist)December 19: Template:Did you know nominations/Natural gas in TurkeyDecember 20: Template:Did you know nominations/Lation ScottDecember 20: Template:Did you know nominations/Providence and Worcester RailroadDecember 20: Template:Did you know nominations/Beate UlbrichtDecember 20: Template:Did you know nominations/Julius MorganDecember 20: Template:Did you know nominations/The Hatchling (two articles)December 20: Template:Did you know nominations/Stanton CatlinDecember 21: Template:Did you know nominations/To Kill a DemocracyDecember 21: Template:Did you know nominations/Ken Johannson
Please remember to cross off entries as you finish reviewing them (unless you're asking for further review), even if the review was not an approval. Please do not remove them entirely. Many thanks! BlueMoonset (talk) 03:40, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
[[Template:Did you know nominations/Woody plant encroachment]]
last one of these for a while, I promise.
- ... that in Sub-Saharan Africa, woody vegetation cover has increased by 8% during the past three decades, mainly through woody plant encroachment (example pictured)?
- ALT1: ... that woody plant encroachment increases the risk of tick-borne pathogens?
- ALT2: ... that goats are a natural inhibitor of woody plant encroachment?
- ALT2a: ... that goats slow down woody plant encroachment?
The nominator proposed the first hook, and I proposed the ALTs. i don't feel super comfortable going ahead with the original (on interestingness grounds), and the nominator doesn't want to use the ALTs because they're not what's most important about the article. could some people weigh in on the nomination? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 21:00, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
[[Wikipedia:Recent_additions]] - the archive lists
This has got out of whack somehow, I presume when the recent switch from 2 to 1 sets happened. Certainly wrong for the 25, 26 & now. Johnbod (talk) 03:19, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:{{yo|Johnbod}} hmm, I'm not seeing an issue with the timestamps—keep in mind that sets are archived by the date and time by which they're taken off the main page, not the time at which they are added. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:25, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
::Ok, thanks - that's confusing though. Johnbod (talk) 03:30, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::It really is, but I imagine it's easier for the bot programmatically. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:32, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::: It's been like that from the outset and yes, it really ought to be fixed, but the issue has been brought up several times in the past and nobody ever seems interested in doing it. By coincidence though, I was just thinking over the past couple of weeks about bringing the matter up again, and now that it's been done, perhaps it's time to have another discussion about it. Gatoclass (talk) 05:23, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::I'd like to see both start and end time, honestly. Something like:
:::::* 00:00, 27 December 2021 – 00:00, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::That way, my script doesn't have to go fishing around in other stats pages just to figure out how long a hook has been on the main page. Right now, if I want to know how long it took for a hook on the first of the month to run, I have to compare the timestamps on two separate pages, which is just kinda annoying. If we were to switch it to the time it was put on the main page, I'd have the same problem, just with the last day of a month. I'd be happy to do the legwork in writing a script to update past pages, if DYKUpdateBot were to change the manner it which it archives future sets. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 05:27, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::: Sorry, but I don't think we should be changing the format just for one user's convenience. It would be redundant to add both dates to each entry given that the second date will always appear above the next set anyway. Gatoclass (talk) 14:50, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::Then we should probably stick with archiving by the off-time—otherwise, you don't know how long a hook set has been on the main page until the next one is archived. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:37, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::sorry, forgot to ping Gatoclass theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:42, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::: otherwise, you don't know how long a hook set has been on the main page until the next one is archived
:::::::: So what? Nobody cares, but if they did, the archive is the last place you'd go to check a detail like that. Gatoclass (talk) 23:13, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::{{yo|Gatoclass}} as far as I know, the archive is pretty much the only place you can go to check a detail like that—it doesn't appear on the nompage, the article's talk page, the pageviews, or the stats page. The only other way you could work it out is to take the DYK date from the article's talk page and cross-reference with the revision history at User:DYKUpdateBot/Time Between Updates. As for who cares—the fact that I'm pretty much the only one who updates the dykstats page at the moment doesn't mean the stats page should only concern me. Waiting until the next set is archived to figure out the full time it took for a hook to run unnecessarily delays the time it takes to count and process pageview stats by twelve hours or a day, without good reason. I don't see the upside in going through all the hoops to programmatically edit the timestamps thousands of archived sets if it comes with the downside of omitting important information, without which the archives are perennially incomplete. Anyways, count me opposed to removing the off-timestamp from the archived sets. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 23:26, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
{{od}} I am really struggling to follow your logic, but if you want to know how long a set has been on the main page, all you need to do is look at the timestamp of the bot diff on the archive page because as you yourself noted above, the bot archives when the set comes off the main page. Gatoclass (talk) 23:46, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
{{Clear}}
Third Day of Christmas
Herrscher des Himmels, erhöre das Lallen, BWV 248 III, was compsed for the 3rd day of Christmas which was 27 December, day of the premiere. It was nominated for that day, and in prep pictured with a new image, uploaded recently, of Bach's manuscript which is a precious thing to present (pun intended). Until we switched to one set per day. - In the nomination, I said that it could be used for Christmas Day in case we had too few hooks for that day. This is not so. Now, it's in Queue 6, which - if my math is right - for 24 December: please not! (... and if there's really no other way, drop "for the Third Day of Christmas" or we'll get ERRORS for sure, - this goes for all placements which are not that day.) Bach composed it for 27 December, and I see no reason now not to have it then, and best pictured. We have already music by me for 24, and more, "Morgenlicht", on 26 which would be better on 25.
In a nutshell: please move BWV 248 III from 24 Dec to 27 December, best pictured. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:52, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
:It could be replaced with Template:Did you know nominations/Glee: The Music, The Christmas Album, which is now approved after GA review. eviolite (talk) 17:01, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
:* {{done}}. Gatoclass (talk) 17:56, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
:*: Thank you Gatoclass. Next wish: as you can read a bit above, I made a hook for Stefan Keil fulfilling the wish for more Christmas topics. Mentioning Christmas market, it could go to 24 December. If that (or 25 the latest) is not possible, I'll look for a different hook, - no Christmas market in January ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:00, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
:*::that puts 3 u.s. hooks next to each other—i don't mind that, we're running a bit of a hodgepodge, but we should probably switch out It's Christmas, Eve with Josef Rheinberger so that it's two u.s. hooks next to each other instead of three. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 18:16, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
::::: {{done}}, thanks, Gatoclass (talk) 18:23, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
:::: Too tired to do any more tonight - I will take a look at it tomorrow if nobody else has - but we already have two full sets for Christmas Eve/Christmas Day, so it might have to go somewhere else. Gatoclass (talk) 18:16, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
::::: Some possibilities:
:::::* get it into 23, but that is soon - advantage: no other hook by me in the set, only one swap
:::::* squeeze it into 25 as a ninth hook, - some of the hooks there are short
:::::* have it replace Morgenlicht in 25, which could replace Rühle in 26 (who is also in prep1 which needs some solution reardless of the other)
:::::* say the efforts to make it Christmassy were for nothing, and I'll think about a different hook
::::: Thank you, and sorry about too much cheer ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:17, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::took ruhle out of prep 1, not sure how that happened theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 21:30, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
Kingsif may have some extra Christmas hooks, too—I'd put them both in the boxing day sets theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 19:41, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
:{{re|Theleekycauldron}} Once the sets were full I didn't bother, then I figured "we don't know the origins of Christmas" would probably be good enough for AFD, so welcome the nom :Template:Did you know nominations/Christmas (surname). Just thought I'd tell you what happened to them. Kingsif (talk) 02:30, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
::Leeky - Armenians around the world celebrate Christmas on January 6, as do Anabaptists. Oriental Orthodox celebrate on January 7. Some religions even celebrate it January 19. Take your pick - there's faiths out there celebrating on different days. — Maile (talk) 02:52, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{re|Kingsif}} Christmas hooks can also be used on Jan. 7, which is Christmas on the Julian calendar. Z1720 (talk) 02:39, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
new day: could an admin please pipe "the oratorio" to Christmas Oratorio in the 27 Dec hook for BWV 248 III, or spell it out? - yes, it's linked the previous day, but that's probably not enough ;) (see thread "my bad" on tlc) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:10, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- {{done}}. I've piped "the oratorio" as spelling the article out would introduce the word "Christmas" a second time in that hook. Schwede66 08:39, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
::Looking at possibles for a third Christmas set on 6 or 7 January. The following might be appropriate - Dumelow (talk) 16:46, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
:::all four have been moved to prep 7, they'll air on jan. 7 theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 19:46, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Template:Did you know nominations/Christmas (surname) (though note nominator's request for April Fool's Day)
- Template:Did you know nominations/When Harry Met Santa (awaiting review)
- Template:Did you know nominations/Stefan Keil (approved)
- Template:Did you know nominations/Edward M. Kirby (approved, ALT0 only)
{{Clear}}
Current preps - hookiness
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Third circle of hell|Third circle of hell]] ==
The "rather than the sin of gluttony" in the image slot kind of relies on people knowing it should be what is depicted, it also feels like an afterthought. I'm not sure it's necessary, but would suggest moving it to the front of the hook to make it feel more natural — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Re'quan Boyette|Re'quan Boyette]] ==
It seems like the hooky part of the Re'quan Boyette hook is the "second Duke player" part, but this is also left to the end; the AFCA Good Works Team may not be common, but as a simple award for his field it is something that anyone in his field could achieve and not very hooky alone. I don't even think the year needs to be included, just that Boyette was the second Duke player to... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: Suggested ALT: ... that Re'quan Boyette was the second Duke player named to the American Football Coaches Association Good Works Team? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:52, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:{{ping|PCN02WPS|SL93}} to above. Kingsif (talk) 22:43, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{yo|Kingsif}} not much use, Q5 comes off the main page in an hour and 45 minutes or so :l theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:46, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::I didn't notice. Been busy, then went to bed early, and now back home from work. Although I was fine with how the original hook was phrased. SL93 (talk) 22:49, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Chninkel|Chninkel]] ==
The Chninkel hook is half PLOT, and the other half is saying it has been translated into other languages (without even saying how many). I assume most non-English comics get translated? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: The thing about this one was that there was no record of an english translation, but saying there was no english translation would be WP:OR since there was never a mention of it at all. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:04, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Ingeborg Beugel|Ingeborg Beugel]] ==
I'm not quite sure what it is, but the Ingeborg Beugel hook scans more as a news story than a hook. Could it be condensed, perhaps? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
:{{ping|GGT|Theleekycauldron}} How about, "that Ingeborg Beugel was accused of being a “pro-Turkish” agent following her press conference questions to the prime minister of Greece?" — Maile (talk) 02:01, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::Hi {{u|Maile66}}, I'm not really comfortable with having a BLP on the main page associated with a one-sided accusation. I know that the current hook is somewhat clunky but I still think it's an interesting story, at least, and it's within the character limit. Open to any further suggestions. --GGT (talk) 02:07, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{re|GGT|Maile66}} Hmm, maybe it's another hook that needs front-loading? Would "... that Ingeborg Beugel left Greece following death threats and reported attacks after she questioned the prime minister about pushbacks?" work Kingsif (talk) 02:17, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::Yes! That sounds an awful lot better, thanks. --GGT (talk) 02:21, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::I've requested this at WP:ERRORS. Kingsif (talk) 02:32, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Michael Smith (diplomat)|Michael Smith (diplomat)]] ==
The quirky hook about Michael Smith uses wikivoice to say something that sounds like an opinion. It might get a pass as a quirky hook, but I don't think that an "X said" takes away from the quirkiness in this case. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: I'm not sure what you mean—it's what the sign on the office door says, of course it'd be from him. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:24, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::Yeah that seems more logical than my original assumption of hate mail/other not-him message stuck on his door. Maybe "that Smith summarized his negotiating style by putting a sign reading "This is not Burger King" on his office door" would help, but I think my reading of the hook won't be so common. Kingsif (talk) 02:32, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Teodor Boldur-Lățescu|Teodor Boldur-Lățescu]] ==
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Tokio (software)|Tokio (software)]] ==
{{tq|... that the asynchronous Tokio runtime for the Rust programming language uses a work stealing scheduler?}} is basically nonsense to someone who doesn't know programming. There's wanting to get people to click, and then there's needing them to read a technical manual to understand once they have. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
:I tried to get the nominator to slim it down, this was as far as I got—pinging Legoktm. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:18, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::This is in no way hooky; imo, it should be pulled. Espresso Addict (talk) 03:13, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Actually, I think this is alright and I think this in keeping with other hooks where the (un)stated objective seems to be to pique one's curiosity to click the link into the article. It immediately interested my curiosity and had me looking for links to click on. Yes, as a computer science article it might attract an audience that is reasonably interested in the subject, but, well, that is true about sonatas], concerts and symphonies amongst other topics. Ktin (talk) 03:33, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::Seeing something one doesn't know piques interest for one to read the rest of the hook and then hopefully click links, but there's a point at which "I don't know about this" becomes "I don't know what any of these words mean together" or "I don't understand this", and that makes it become uninteresting again because the knowledge gap seems too insurmountable (so what's the point) and/or there's no context for what you might be finding out (the hook hasn't hit interest, it's caused confusion; wanting to learn more will get people clicking because it doesn't require reading the whole thing and they will happily waste time on something they already found interesting, while wanting to resolve confusion I don't think will get clicks because it is more like an unnecessary chore). Kingsif (talk) 04:04, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::Well, I think we should acknowledge that not all of us are cut from the same proverbial cloth. The text that you have described above is exactly what goes through my mind when I read a hook about sonatas, symphonies, the ninth major and the eighth minor and what not. That insurmountable knowledge gap is what causes me to skip the hook and move onto the next one. But, I do not find myself making the case that the hook should be reworded to pique my interest (or worse still, pull the hook). It is perfectly alright. This hook might get less clicks as compared to other hooks and that is perfectly alright. Ktin (talk) 04:12, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::It is a requirement that hooks are interesting, I'm not going to mention the "average reader", but if a hook is actively off-putting you, that isn't perfectly alright. Some have argued that filtering hooks until they touch on things that are in general consciousness is death to obscure subjects, and that it is nearly impossible to achieve this and be interesting, but with some group effort DYK has almost always managed to find something universally-relatable and interesting. When not, there truly hasn't been anything remarkable to say about a subject that isn't for the 1%, which is fine. I don't nominate half the articles I work on that could qualify for DYK because there's nothing I'd support as a hook. Quality over quantity before DYK becomes known as benign fact corner... Kingsif (talk) 04:25, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::I am no longer following this one. I am saying that I am actually finding this hook interesting. I have no clue how you are computing "average" or 1%. Ktin (talk) 04:29, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
: {{ec}} I agree with {{u|Ktin}} - the hook is fine. It won't appeal to everybody, and that's fine too. We are not a tabloid we are an educational project, and the hook gives users an opportunity to get acquainted with several encyclopedic topics, including "work stealing" which is surely a hooky term. Gatoclass (talk) 04:34, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:: The hook still could use some improvement for clarity, but i agree that it's hooky enough to a broad audience. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 05:31, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::I totally understand that for people with a non technical/software background, parts or all of this hook don't make sense. I believe all of the jargony terms ("asynchronous", "runtime", "work stealing") are either wikilinked immediately in the article or in the hook itself, so by reading the rest of the articles, it should at least begin to make some sense. And, "work stealing" was the thing that actually got me to look into Tokio more in the first place (I had never heard of work stealing before), so I think it's a good fit for the hook.
:::I showed it to my sister, who's not as technical as me, she got tripped up by Tokio splitting "asynchronous runtime", and suggested adjusting it like "...that Tokio, an asynchronous runtime for the Rust programming language, uses a work stealing scheduler?" - Would that make things clearer? Or are the issues elsewhere? Legoktm (talk) 07:28, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::During some IRC discussion, I had the idea that we could say "platform" instead of "runtime", and perhaps also drop "asynchronous" (being a rather hefty word, and IMO used here in a different sense than its everyday meaning). Lego agrees with the former suggestion. Enterprisey (talk!) 07:42, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::{{re|Enterprisey|Legoktm}} Could one or both of you provide a proposed alt if you think these changes don't take away from the hook? Kingsif (talk) 21:19, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::ALT3: ... that the asynchronous Tokio platform for the Rust programming language uses a work stealing scheduler?
::::::ALT4: ... that the Tokio platform for the Rust programming language uses a work stealing scheduler?
::::::I slightly prefer #3, but if others also think "asynchronous" is more jargony than helpful I'm fine with dropping it. Legoktm (talk) 21:57, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{re|Theleekycauldron}} I think the thing that trips it up is that the hooky part is "uses a work stealing scheduler" - we don't need to know what they means, but with the rest of the hook also being jargon, it gives no context as to why that is interesting. Maybe every asynchronous runtime software does... Anything where the "instead of" part doesn't go without saying needs some indicator. Kingsif (talk) 21:19, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::{{yo|Kingsif}} I think it's what I'm about to coin as "accessible jargon"—jargon where you know what all the individual words mean (and some jump out at you), but it's still jargon and you have no idea what it means, so you're interested to try and put it together. But I agree that we should minimize jargon, so I like ALT4. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:47, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::If we all think ALT4 is an improvement, am I allowed to swap it in myself or should I flag down another admin for it? Legoktm (talk) 23:07, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::{{@DYK admins}} please Kingsif (talk) 23:14, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::@Kingsif: IMO there is no obvious "instead of", there are too many types of scheduling (see all the sections on Scheduling (computing)). As the lead of Work stealing explains, I think it's likely that people who know about computers would contrast "work stealing" to "work sharing", but adding something like "rather than work sharing" would probably just add to the jargon rather than help clarify. Legoktm (talk) 23:01, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::{{re|Legoktm}} You're going to have to teach me! FWIW, I am also happy with alt4, though predicting that "work stealing" will probably get more clicks than Tokio. It is what it is, people will learn something. Kingsif (talk) 23:09, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::I'm going to switch in ALT4 -- it is fully sourced and more comprehensible. Best, KevinL (aka L235 · t · c) 23:56, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::Done: Special:Diff/1062869744 KevinL (aka L235 · t · c) 23:59, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Karolína Huvarová|Karolína Huvarová]] ==
{{tq|... that Karolína Huvarová quipped that she earned her position as men's hockey coach "in bed"?}} - I hope I don't need to explain how bad this comes across. It's quirky, I get it, but the joke is sexism... I don't know. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
:Pinging nominator {{u|GRuban}}. SL93 (talk) 01:43, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:I would totally agree with you, except she made the quip herself—i understood the double meaning as intentional on Huvarová's part. It threw me for a loop when I first saw it, too; I never would have ran this if someone else said it about her. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:18, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::I feel the same way. SL93 (talk) 02:21, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::: There is a noticeable difference between self-deprecation and deprecation of another. That said, I offered a choice of two hooks to the closer. --GRuban (talk) 12:44, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/New Year foods|New Year foods]] ==
{{main page image/DYK|image=12 lucky grapes (cropped to show underwear).jpg|caption=The twelve lucky grapes}}
I have honestly never heard of the underwear part of the uvas tradition, something I have taken part in, and the current structure seems like the (pictured) refers to the underwear. Maybe remove that part? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: Well, the underwear is also pictured, and if the sourcing checks out on the fact, I don't see the issue. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:28, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::ping {{re|Theleekycauldron|Ritchie333|Valereee}} We could interrogate the sourcing. There are two sources for the sentence: one doesn't mention underwear. Searching for "uvas ropa interior nochevieja" (grapes, underwear, NYE) gives multiple sources that say they are separate traditions: you eat grapes, you wear red underwear, there is nothing about both at once. [https://promise.es/llevar-ropa-interior-roja-en-nochevieja-de-donde-viene-esta-costumbre/], [https://www.eleconomista.es/status/noticias/10912826/11/20/El-origen-de-los-rituales-navidenos-Por-que-llevamos-ropa-interior-roja-o-comemos-12-uvas.html], [https://as.com/tikitakas/2020/12/31/portada/1609406192_714592.html]. [https://www.mundodeportivo.com/actualidad/20211229/1001730656/rituales-famosos-nochevieja-uvas-viaje-dinero-ropa-interior-tradicion-act-pau.html One] goes so far as to mention yellow underwear for money, red underwear for love, as different things. Kingsif (talk) 21:36, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::I've added another source for while wearing red underwear given to you as a gift by someone else. —valereee (talk) 21:47, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::Can't read the book, if you could quote from it {{re|Valereee}}, but the other new source (on web) says {{tq|Bonus points if you’re wearing special New Year’s Eve underwear while eating your grapes. A pair of red underwear can bring you a new year of love, while yellow may bring joy and fortune.}} - again saying that underwear is a NYE tradition, but a separate one, and there are different colors. Nothing about gifting in that. I would say that even if you can find more sources connecting them, there are enough sources which actually separate them that it would be cherrypicking to only use the ones that agree and we can't confirm it as fact when sources disagree. Kingsif (talk) 23:00, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::"For luck, wear red underwear bought for you by someone else." —valereee (talk) 23:05, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::So the bought-by-someone-else part checks out. Maybe just a little rewording, saying that Spanish NYE traditions include eating 12 grapes, wearing red underwear someone else gave to you, and putting gold rings in cava? The trifecta structure could work, and it doesn't get into the maybe business of if they traditionally all go together or just can. Kingsif (talk) 23:12, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::NPR says "the entire country gathers in front of television screens or in town squares, clutching a small bowl of green grapes and wearing red underwear". I think the hook is accurate. —valereee (talk) 23:48, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::And Spanish sources (multiple above) discussing grapes and underwear explicitly do not say that (as well as some saying it is for reasons other than luck and not all saying if the underwear have to be gifted), not that NPR's sentence actually tells us if the two things are connected or coincidental anyway, so I think the hook isn't accurate. Rather than having to use our own views on which sources are more correct (though hopefully you'd agree the Spanish know their traditions a bit better), we can avoid the problem. {{re|Theleekycauldron}} ? Kingsif (talk) 00:10, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::[https://promise.es/llevar-ropa-interior-roja-en-nochevieja-de-donde-viene-esta-costumbre/ Promise.es] appears to be a lingerie brand's blog? —valereee (talk) 00:45, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::::Then it knows about Spain and underwear more than NPR does... seriously, fine, discard one of four sources, it doesn't change matters. Kingsif (talk) 01:15, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::::So you're going to argue a lingerie brand blog is a more reliable source than NPR? —valereee (talk) 01:20, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::{{yo|Valereee|Kingsif}} does it harm the hook that much to change the "while" to an "and"? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:07, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::Good solution, although I question whether this was an actual problem that needed to be solved. I'm a nitpicker, but this just seems silly. Yeah, second thought, no. This is silly. The hook IMO is good. —valereee (talk) 01:19, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::{{re|Theleekycauldron}} Looking at the sources, there are still many that suggest red underwear is not for luck, and don't need to be given as a gift, on top of not being part of the same tradition. I don't know what's gotten into {{u|Valereee}} but they seem very tied to just believing the first thing they read, and they have demonstrated above they are unwilling to accept any sources (the good, actually Spanish ones) that disagree. And even though the NPR source doesn't actually support the hook as it is written. I suggest pull it completely if they refuse to accept even the smallest change, as it could be entirely inaccurate. Kingsif (talk) 01:32, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::::NPR says "the entire country gathers in front of television screens or in town squares, clutching a small bowl of green grapes and wearing red underwear". —valereee (talk) 01:38, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::::El País [https://elpais.com/elpais/2017/12/31/actualidad/1514674867_683586.html says] {{tq|Junto a las uvas del día 31, las carreras de San Silvestre también forman parte del acervo de esta jornada... Tampoco falta la superstición de llevar alguna prenda interior roja para atraer el amor}}: "As well as the grapes of the 31st, the races in San Silvestre are a tradition of this day... Also present is the superstition of wearing some red undergarment to attract love". Kingsif (talk) 01:52, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::::::And that means...?
:::::::::::::You opened like two dozen hook queries at once all in the same post. I get it, the project isn't perfect. But this has been a pretty big time sink. Are you trying to make a point? —valereee (talk) 01:58, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::::::I think Kingsif is trying to say that they are two separate traditions that happen to be in the same timeframe. imo, that doesn't affect the wording of the hook too much. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:59, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::::Okay, fine, actually weighing in here. The washington post says (as an addition to the grapes tradition): {{tq|Bonus points if you’re wearing special New Year’s Eve underwear while eating your grapes. A pair of red underwear can bring you a new year of love, while yellow may bring joy and fortune.}} Kingsif, that's two RSP-greenlit sources corroborating the idea that 1. these two traditions have at the very least a tendency to be in conjunction (although I personally see the connection as stronger than that), and 2. there is an association of both with luck. I don't think this hook is innaccurate—both are considered lucky, and there is some evidence that the underwear has a tradition of being gifted. They don't need to be the same tradition, they're at the same time, you're obviously gonna be doing one while you're doing the other. We can hedge if we really have to, but I frankly don't see a need. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:57, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::::if you're both still dead-set on this, take it to WP:ERRORS, it's already on the mp. but as far as I understand the situation, I don't see a need for a change. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:59, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::::::{{re|Theleekycauldron}} Re. WaPo: "Bonus points" to me doesn't indicate that they go together, it's just a sleek way of mentioning the most interesting (underwear) of the many other NYE traditions after the most common one (grapes). And it doesn't say it brings luck, it says love. It says yellow underwear is luck - do you want to change the hook to yellow? Now, FWIW, I will take one Spanish RS about heritage over two American ones that are compiling lists of weird foreign customs. The country and purpose are things to consider in accurate reporting here. If El País is wrong about Spain, the BBC is wrong about Britain. It's going to ERRORS. Kingsif (talk) 02:06, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/KOBF|KOBF]] ==
I'd also make the KIVA-TV hook front-heavy (...that KIVA-TV got bomb threats...) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
:I would say received or something similar. "Got" isn't encyclopedic. SL93 (talk) 01:35, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:Full ALT: ... that New Mexico television station KIVA-TV received angry phone calls and a bomb threat after switching away from a tied football game? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:47, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{re|Sammi Brie|SounderBruce}} as nom and reviewer Kingsif (talk) 22:54, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::I approve of this wording. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 22:55, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::this one's a queue, we'll need one of the {{@DYK admins}} to do the swap. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:57, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Rudolf Pohl|Rudolf Pohl]] ==
{{tq|... that Rudolf Pohl, who was a member of the Aachener Domchor as a boy, led the choir that dates back to Charlemagne to international recognition?}} - is "the choir" referring back to Aachener Domcher? If so, just say "that Pohl led the AD, a choir that dates back to Charlemagne, to international recognition" for ease of understanding. If it isn't the same choir, why is that confusing sub clause there? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
:It's the tradition of a choir at the relevant cathedral that dates back to Charlemagne. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:30, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::I totally read it as "Aachen Cathedral Choir", is that not a fixed choir? Will it be too wordy to try and explain (because the definite article usage in the hook confuses); if so, can we remove something that isn't needed for the hook fact - if "dates back to Charlemagne" is the interesting part, perhaps the choir name can be removed? Or do we say "... that Pohl led the AD choir that dates back..." and let everyone safely assume that if he led it, he was indeed a member. Kingsif (talk) 06:55, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::is Aachener Domchor the same as Aachen Cathedral Choir? It says the tradition of a choir, so it may not be a fixed one... theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 07:00, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::From my middling German, that's the translation, and I just checked and our article says it is so. Our article also suggests it is a fixed choir (i.e. not just whatever choir sets up at Aachen Cathedral), of course with transient members as they grow and move. Pohl it seems was a member and then grew up to be its conductor; if "led" was supposed to indicate that it didn't. {{re|Theleekycauldron|Gerda Arendt}} - bringing a choir to renown is something I think most people will understand, and it is very interesting that the conductor used to be a singer in it. There's just a few words where confusion settled - the unclear "the choir", and then "led". I don't know if it's just me, but "led" gives the idea that he was the lead singer, as conductors are generally so little-known/given credit. Could this part be clearer? e.g. "...that conductor Rudolf Pohl brought the Aachener Domchor, a choir that dates back to Charlemagne and which he had sung with as a boy, to international recognition?" Kingsif (talk) 21:44, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::{{yo|Kingsif}} how about this for some punch: ... that conductor Rudolf Pohl, a member of the Aachen Cathedral choir as a boy, brought the Charlemagne-era choir to international recognition in the 1960s? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:54, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::I'm tempted to ask for "this Charlemagne-era...", just so we definitely know it's the same choir, but it works. Kingsif (talk) 23:04, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::we'll need one of the {{@DYK admins}} for this too, and the New Year foods hook. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:25, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::::nevermind, we're still squabbling on the new year's. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:49, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::::::I've changed the Pohl hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:41, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Volkswagen worker organizations|Volkswagen worker organizations]] ==
Is the Volkswagen hook just a really long-winded way of saying the company was one of the first to have a workers' union? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: I think it's the specific type of union that matters here? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:31, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Yasmin Miller|Yasmin Miller]] ==
Was it that unusual for an athlete like Yasmin Miller to use a park to train during COVID? From what I hear, most of them, even in rich countries like the UK, had to do so. The real hooky stories are the ones from poorer countries without public parks, like the swimmer nearly getting eaten by a shark, or building their own sandpit. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
:I agree and I don't see anything in the article that I think would work as a hook. SL93 (talk) 02:11, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:Pinging {{u|Dumelow}}. SL93 (talk) 02:12, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:yeah, not going to contest this. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:18, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{re|SL93|Theleekycauldron|Dumelow}} Even if it just mentioned that when Miller was training in the park, local children would copy her, is something different. Kingsif (talk) 02:24, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::I guess that would be fine if we really want the article to run. Children are known for copying things including myself and I'm no one special. SL93 (talk) 02:26, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::It would be interesting, perhaps even hooky, if there were sources that said whether or not she finally achieved Master of Laws degree in international commercial law. — Maile (talk) 02:37, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::Can't find anything, though her twitter suggests she is, er, vaccine-sceptic. Interesting, but probably not hook-appropriate. Kingsif (talk) 02:53, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:I found this quite interesting personally, but then I don't usually write sports biographies. An ALT as suggested above, otherwise if the consensus is that it is boring then just don't run it - Dumelow (talk) 08:11, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::ALT3: ... that children copied British champion 60m hurdler Yasmin Miller (pictured) while she was training in her local park during the COVID-19 lockdown?
:::{{re|Theleekycauldron}} I'm going to assume you promoted this and ask you to swap alt3 in? It may not be the most exceptional, but the way Dumelow has phrased it does add more punch for me. Checks out, sourced in article. Kingsif (talk) 21:46, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::i think that'll work, yeah—swapped in theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:48, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Dumping in Dixie|Dumping in Dixie]] ==
{{tq|... that Dumping in Dixie was the first book to cover environmental injustice in the United States?}} - for all purposes, this is PLOT. The real world element is just "first to", but is that really enough (X is first book to write about Y is pretty bland, maybe a date would help this one if it's more recent than expected for the first?). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: Added "the 1990 book" theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:I thought that "plot" meant fiction. MOS:PLOT refers to fictional content. SL93 (talk) 01:20, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::At DYK, I use it as my catch-all for "media hook only talking about what's in the media" (not referring to the MOS, caps was to differentiate from simple/literal plot); even non-fiction works need some real-world element, so maybe I need a better shorthand. Kingsif (talk) 02:02, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::do we have a rule against entirely "in-universe" hooks for non-fiction books? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 05:35, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::If it's the case that hooks can't be primary sourced to the article subject, yes, but even if not I still take the real-world factor to mean that DYK is for things you won't know just from "seeing" the boldlink, so "building looks like X", "book is about Y", "film mentions Z" aren't acceptable. Kingsif (talk) 06:43, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::hmm, that's a useful rule if that's true—I didn't know we had that. But I disagree with your interpretation of the broad idea here, you wouldn't know that Dumping in Dixie was the first book to do this just by reading it. I don't know if there's even an in-universe aspect to this hook. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:45, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::::That's why I said besides "first" - the rest of the hook is "book is about Y", and the first to do something isn't always interesting. The year does help in this case. Kingsif (talk) 06:51, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- Talk of plot is absurd. The real issue is whether it was actually the first as it seems easy to find counter examples. Bullard himself wrote books on this theme before this one, such as Confronting Environmental Racism (1983), which was published 7 years before this one. And there are other authors too such as [https://www.sunypress.edu/p-214-environmental-justice.aspx Environmental Justice] (1988). Andrew🐉(talk) 19:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- :From the bottom of the EPA source: {{tq|This timeline presents EPA's involvement in the Environmental Justice Movement and the major events leading up to it. This is not meant to be an all inclusive history of the movement in general.}} I don't think this hook checks out. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 19:22, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- :(as nominator) For reference, here are the specific quotes from the sources: {{tq|Dumping in Dixie by Dr. Robert Bullard was the first book focused primarily on documenting environmental injustice in the United States.}} {{tq|The book that Bullard eventually wrote about that work, 1990’s Dumping in Dixie, is widely regarded as the first to fully articulate the concept of environmental justice.}} {{tq| His “Dumping in Dixie: Race, Class and Environmental Quality” was the first book to introduce many readers to the field of environmental justice (Westview Press, 1990).}} I suppose an alternative hook can be:
- :* ALT2 ... that Robert D. Bullard has emerged as the "father of environmental justice" since the publication of his 1990 book, Dumping in Dixie?
- :though I'm not too sure.. any thoughts? (Also {{ping|Riley1012}} as reviewer). eviolite (talk) 19:29, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:*:{{re|Eviolite|Theleekycauldron}} The alt2 is sourced in article and I would say it is interesting enough. I'd ping to thank Andrew for drawing attention to it, but I really think he's come into this with a negative mindset so I'll give him some space. If he's stuck around and is reading this, thanks. Kingsif (talk) 21:50, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:*::agreed! I've swapped it in :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 22:41, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Goliath Tabuni|Goliath Tabuni]] ==
{{tq|... that due to guerilla commander Goliath Tabuni, Puncak Jaya Regency became "the most violent" in Papua?}} - the most violent what? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: regency, I'm assuming? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::I added "region" to the article per "Since then, Puncak Jaya has been considered "the most violent" region in Papua." Regency would work also, but that is repetitive. SL93 (talk) 01:40, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/1552 Broadway|1552 Broadway]] ==
Can we link the women in the 1552 Broadway hook? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: We can, but I generally only link something if we really have to—the more links there are, the more we distract people from the bolded article that we want people to pay attention to. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:26, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::That kind of conflicts with the 'guideline' (or some unofficial rule I remember) that we don't mention names unless we can link them. I would say it comes down to how relevant they are to the hook; does it work best if someone knows who these people are, and thus we need to link them for those who don't? Or does it totally work no matter what the names are? Kingsif (talk) 01:56, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Johann-Werner Prein|Johann-Werner Prein]] ==
{{tq|... that Johann-Werner Prein, an Austrian operatic bass-baritone based in Germany, took part in the 1994 premiere of Schulhoff's Flammen?}} - without any context as to what Flammen is and why it might be unusual for such a person to be in its premiere, this is just "actor acted". — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: I'll ping Gerda Arendt for this, she's usually got an explanation and I've learned not to argue too much. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::I had the same thought. Though I tend not to argue with Gerda about interestingness for reasons. SL93 (talk) 01:17, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Same, though maybe it is concerning that DYK regulars feel we can't challenge someone on how interesting their hooks are. It's on the DYK checklist, and I like Gerda and she's a great contributor, but someone being unhappy that they keep getting questioned on one part of the review shouldn't mean we skip that part for them, right? Kingsif (talk) 01:56, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::That is a lot of discussion back and forth. I think almost everyone just gave up on that. SL93 (talk) 02:06, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::I always thought it was weird that her role hooks tend to get a pass whereas similar hooks by other editors often get rejected. I understand that she's the most frequent contributor to DYK and she's done great work over the years, it's just that it feels odd that the usual standards that editors have about role hooks don't seem to be used for reviews on her hooks. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:58, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:: Gerda's hooks usually score poorly with our general readership but she is well aware of this and indifferent to vulgar tastes. As she seems to be a subject-matter expert and this is a matter of high culture, we should respect her preference and wishes. De gustibus non est disputandum. Andrew🐉(talk) 13:09, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::I disagree that being a subject-matter expert makes it so that her hooks don't need to meet the interesting to a broad audience criterion. I'm sure plenty of other nominators are experts in the field of articles that they nominate. SL93 (talk) 13:29, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- Honestly I think the hook should be pulled and ideally be replaced with something else. Like most of the opera roles hooks this isn't interesting at all to non-opera fans, as it's full of names and titles that aren't that well known to broad audiences. It's just not interesting enough to a broad audience. Looking at the article, it's almost entirely about roles, so I'm not sure if there's even a usable hook fact there. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:58, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- I've gone ahead and pulled the hook for now, editors are free to propose new suggestions at the nomination page. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:27, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- : Rubbing eyes (if there was any working ping I missed it, sorry, I'm travelling, and I am busy with Gwendolyn Killebrew for RD): How is that a role hook? It exposes an opera which the Nazis made disappear, so - written in the 1920s - it wasn't premiered until 1994, and in a translation that Kafka's friend Max Brod had prepared. If that is not supplying valuable facts to the general audience, I don't know, really, what we are good for. If someone can word it better: welcome! - I work towards making Flammen known (and the fact that this singer is open for the unusual), not the tenth Ring or Zauberflöte, which would be all too commonplace imho. Next year will see less of me on DYK, promised. GA, FA and RD seem better ways to spend my limited time. Look at stats for Günther Rühle: [https://pageviews.toolforge.org/?project=en.wikipedia.org&platform=all-access&agent=user&redirects=0&range=latest-20&pages=G%C3%BCnther_R%C3%BChle how many (few) for DYK, and how many for RD] (where we just give the name, and interest is there)? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:43, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Firstly, the hook is about Prein and not Flammen; indeed, if the hook was about Flammen, then it being written in the 1920s but only premiering in 1994 would make a great hook. Secondly, it's a role hook because the ultimate format is "opera singer X played a role in Opera Y", which doesn't really say much about the person without additional context. It may appeal to you, as someone who is very interested in classical music and is a classical musician yourself, but it's hard to say that it would appeal to anyone else given that, as Kingsif suggested above, the work itself isn't well-known enough to catch the attention of the typical reader. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:48, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::It should also be noted that Flammen being written in the 1920s is not even mentioned in Prein's article, so if that angle is to be used, said information has to be in the hook subject's article (i.e. Prein's). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:50, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::: I disagree. The kind of repertoire a singer performs IS relevant, and this one sings an amazing unusual array of early 20th-century opera. That is the key hook, but I believe that mentioning one of them is better than a summary, and picking the neglected one seemed interesting to me. The detail of why it's more interesting than the others should not be part of any singer's article, nor of the hook. We also have no room for that it's a Don Juan myth opera, but I thought that Flammen is close enough to Flames to raise interest just by the title (+ it's nicely short). I have been told again and again to not say it all in the hook but just kindle curiosity. - The hook was in prep on 3 Jan because it's the singer's birthday, and I think it would be a nice gesture to put it back there. I do prefer to recognize a singer for a birthday rather than death, but please don't make it too hard. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:02, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::: Well, it wasn't for 3 Jan, - not even that worked. But we have 2 hooks mentioning Christmas in prep 7. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:18, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::{{re|Gerda Arendt}} You know I like your work, that I care little for opera but the technical details fascinate me. This only gets across when you explain them. You say the key hooky part is that Prein "sings an amazing unusual array of early 20th-century opera" - why doesn't the hook say that? In the past, you have nominated hooks of the format "X opera singer was in A, B, and C" where A, B, C are very disparate works - but only someone already interested in opera can tell that from the titles. Saying they are disparate in the hook, however, makes it clear. And this precludes the need to mention roles or places or dates that make them different, and if the examples would be too lengthy, just saying "Prein unusually sang a wide array of early C20 opera" at least tells the readers that something about him isn't run-of-the-mill.You say you think that naming a single unusual work he was in is better than summarizing that he was in lots of unusual works, but then you also picked the most neglected one? With people not knowing what it is by your design, how are they supposed to know it is unusual? And with only one mentioned, how are they supposed to know he was often in unusual works? To wit, say you have a movie star who acts in lots of films that are shot on 8mm, but the hook just said "X actor was in the movie Y in 2010". Making a film on 8mm in 2010 is unusual, and moreso is someone choosing to be in multiple! The hook does not say either of those things, and someone with a knowledge of filmmaking will not get it.For the other things you mentioned: Flammen and "Flames" don't sound alike enough in English that I connected them until you mentioned it, and I don't know why "flames" makes something interesting anyway? Sure, some people have heard of Don Juan, but the hook would still be "opera singer was in opera", just with a bit of fictional detail. Would "actor was in film which is based on book" be a good hook? No.The long and short of it is: there is some really interesting stuff with stories of operas. You can't explain it all in a hook, we know this, but then short and sweet only works when the interesting factor is short and sweet. If it takes lots of connections to explain, summarize it, or find something else. You've said in the past that you like to recognize people in DYK hooks for their career and achievements, not for random weird parts of their life; I think that putting up a hook like "opera singer only wore underwear on Tuesdays" is going to get more people to click through to find out about the person, and appreciate their talents more in contrast. With Prein, if his biography can get some connecting clauses that maybe compare how unusual the works were (nothing excessive), we could try to make a hook out of that. Because right now it's nothing more than a prose list of works; there are whole books on him in the references, do they say nothing except "he was in A, then B, then C"? Kingsif (talk) 22:24, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::: I am sorry to not have the time to read all this now - probably next year. We talk in the nom. Why I didn't say "vast array ..."? Because it would be my OR. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:40, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Elspeth Green|Elspeth Green]] ==
{{tq|... that Elspeth Henderson stayed on the line despite a direct hit by a Luftwaffe bomb?}} - what line? I assume telephone, but it might be a tightrope for all I know, it doesn't give any clues while assuming the reader knows to what it refers. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
:The article says phone. It took me a few seconds to find that in the article and fix it. SL93 (talk) 01:31, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:: Kingsif assumed that this was a telephone line and was correct. There is therefore not a problem that needs fixing here. Hooks are supposed to be brief and punchy, not wordy and pedantic. I oppose change. Andrew🐉(talk) 09:49, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::One extra word does not equal "wordy and pedantic". SL93 (talk) 10:31, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::Oh yes it does. See the sorites paradox and last straw. Andrew🐉(talk) 13:00, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::The problem was that, regardless of what type of line it was (being hit by a bomb is reason enough to get off anything, surely), the hook jumped right in as if the reader knew who Henderson was and why she would be on [whatever kind of] line. Frontloading - putting the hooky part (here, the bomb) first - is always a good idea because it avoids this kind of confusing prelude that can turn readers off before they get to the punch. I wasn't so clear explaining that initially, but then again neither was the hook ;) Kingsif (talk) 22:31, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Just observing as a non-British reader, the original hook does not make me want to click. I wonder if it would be acceptable as this:
- ALT1 ... that WAAF Corporal Elspeth Henderson never left her post despite a direct hit by a Luftwaffe bomb?
— Maile (talk) 13:30, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
I have changed it to:
- ... that WAAF Corporal Elspeth Henderson remained at her post despite a direct hit by a Luftwaffe bomb? Gatoclass (talk) 17:21, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:ooh, i like that theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:33, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::Yes, I like that also. — Maile (talk) 18:22, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::Thirded. Kingsif (talk) 22:31, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
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== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Daniel Henchman (publisher)|Daniel Henchman (publisher)]] ==
There's a stray comma in the Daniel Henchman hook. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsif (talk • contribs)
: Fixed, that came from a pictured that i removed. in the future, that's the kind of thing you should probably just fix on your own—Mandarax and Ravenpuff don't take every change they make here. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
== [[Template:Did you know nominations/Miya Cech|Miya Cech]] ==
{{tq|... that Miya Cech is said to "do what [she] can with nothing" in The Darkest Minds?}} isn't even just PLOT, it's like a contextless snippet of some press release synopsis that functionally means nothing. It tells me nothing except there is someone called Miya Cech in something called The Darkest Minds. Kingsif (talk) 01:04, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:Ping {{yo|Andrew Davidson|Daniel Case|p=}} as nominator and reviewer (I'm the promoter). theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:26, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::That would actually be {{u|Pamzeis}} and {{u|Feminist}}. Daniel Case (talk) 06:31, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::sorry, my bad—i clicked on the elspeth green hook by mistake. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:36, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:as for actually fixing the hook, that comment was intended to be praise for Cech, in that she gave a good performance in a rather bad movie—"do what they can with nothing". How about:
:*ALT0a: ... that Miya Cech was praised as "do[ing] what [she] can with nothing" in the ill-regarded The Darkest Minds?
:Open to workshopping here. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:43, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{re|Theleekycauldron}} Ah, sometimes quotes of praise can be turned into acceptable hooks, but the ones in Cech's article seem pretty standard - as in, no unusual turns of phrase or things actors aren't usually praised for. The article doesn't give much besides "starred in X, of which critic said "good job"," but we might have something about her being born in Japan but in two television shows called "American"... Kingsif (talk) 06:48, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{yo|Kingsif}} I think it's pretty unusual for an actress to be praised for being an oasis of a good performance in an otherwise bad movie, no? and the quote to that end seems quirky enough. I could be wrong, but that praise doesn't seem to be inside-the-box "good job". theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:51, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::::Not really. This year there have been some bad/panned movies see praise and award nominations for certain actors (Ariana DeBose and Rachel Zegler in West Side Story, Jennifer Hudson in Respect), and variations on "did their best with bad material" is a pretty common way of praising such roles (it's seen again later in Cech's own short article as "does solid work [...] even if the script doesn't always give her the best lines"). Not to forget, the coverage of this in the article is limited to {{tq|In 2018, Cech made her film debut in The Darkest Minds as Zu, a mute girl who can manipulate electricity. The film received generally negative reviews, but her performance received praise. Deadline Hollywood said "Cech do[es] what [she] can with nothing", while IndieWire considered her a standout.}} - I was trying to think of a way to expand, but (appropriately for her bio), the response focuses on her within the film, so we can't say she was the only good performance when there is an absence of detail of any other performance. The Decider review quote for Rim of the World might have something ("She's funnier [than the males], too") to work with, but the coverage of her is pretty routine, not very hooky. Kingsif (talk) 07:10, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::ALT1: ... that Miya Cech, born in Japan, appeared in American Horror Story and American Housewife?
:::This can work, though according to the article, she only had guest roles in these two shows. And if the concern with the original hook is that an actor who "did their best with bad material" is pretty common (i.e. not hooky enough), so is multicultural representation in American cinema. feminist (talk) 07:26, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- Oppose change The hook does what it can with nothing as the article seems to be mostly a list of the roles that the subject has played. The use of square brackets is unusual but this is a virtue in a hook as it may attract attention. The ALT1 hook is inferior because the point about the different nationalities is subtle and so easily missed. It might also generate concern about cultural appropriation which seems to be a big deal in acting nowadays. Andrew🐉(talk) 11:28, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- Honestly none of the hooks proposed so far seem to be all that interesting. The original is rather vague and seems to dependent on brackets. I agree with Andrew that ALT1 isn't great since the connection is too subtle to be noticed by most readers (indeed, I noticed the two "American" mentions before the "born in Japan" phrase). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:03, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1 is a yawn, countless actors born elsewhere appear in movies of another country. I support leeky's copyedit of the original hook, ALT0a. Gatoclass (talk) 15:51, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- {{re|Narutolovehinata5|Gatoclass|Feminist}} throwing out alt2 because I still think "a critic said an actor was good in a film" is worse than just saying they were in the film, being pseudo-promotional. ALT2: ... that Miya Cech has played characters called Kono, ZhenZhen, Zu, and Amy? Not great, but hopefully might get a chuckle at the end. Kingsif (talk) 22:36, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::I'm fine with that one. SL93 (talk) 23:01, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::{{yo|Kingsif}} mmm, not quite a fan—i don't think that kind of bait-and-switch would be particularly unheard of, particularly for asian-american actors. Simu Liu has played "Lah Zhima" on Star Wars: Visions, "Xu Shang-Chi" on Shang-Chi and the Legend of the Ten Rings, and "Gilbert" on Women Is Losers. If we can't get consensus on a hook, I suggest pulling it while we work something out. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 23:11, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{re|Theleekycauldron|Gatoclass}} I did a bit of research; I found an [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZCZrS-YMEaU actors on actors video] with her. Some things: she likes Harry Potter and is "in" Hufflepuff house and would want to play Luna or Hermione if she was in the movies; she filmed a Nickelodeon show from her home in Davis using a green screen (because pandemic); she thinks Canada is cold (they have a chat about Canada being cold, twice); she learned to do magic tricks for her role in Marvelous and the Black Hole; she used wires, apple boxes, and a parallelogram to record anti-gravity scenes in The Astronauts; her "craziest set experience" was showering on a tour bus between shooting scenes for different movies in different cities on the same day; she does calligraphy; she wants to be a director and felt it was "huge" working with female Asian-American director Jennifer Yuh Nelson on The Darkest Minds; she found it hard to play her character, a mute girl, in The Darkest Minds because she likes to talk a lot, but felt the role helped her learn how to act expressively. I can add any of these to the article as needed if you think something is interesting, courtesy ping to creator/nom {{ping|Pamzeis}} before I do. Kingsif (talk) 00:03, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:: Who cares what the names of some characters she played were? Please let's just stick to ALT0a, it's easily the best that's been proposed, it tells the reader that not only is Cech a capable actor who can rise above her material, but that The Darkest Minds was a dog. Lists of names of characters or movies on the other hand, deliver no useful information whatever. Gatoclass (talk) 23:44, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{re|Gatoclass}} If you really want to go with it, can we do it without a boxy quote? "... that critics thought actress Miya Cech performed well in The Darkest Minds, despite not being given much to work with" is at least palatable. Kingsif (talk) 00:03, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::: Not an improvement IMO - it's wordier, more ambiguous, and omits that the film was poorly received. I have however given ALT0a a small tweak for clarity, so it now reads:
:::: ... that actress Miya Cech was praised for "do[ing] what [she] can with nothing" in the ill-regarded The Darkest Minds? Gatoclass (talk) 00:13, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::Excited to hear your view on my further suggestions, but agree that alt0a edit is getting better. Kingsif (talk) 00:17, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::I like it. feminist (talk) 03:17, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
= General discussion =
{{archive top|result=The proposal to forbid hook copyediting without discussion is a perennially failed issue at DYK. Editors are encouraged to notify nominators when copyediting but it is not a requirement for reasons of practicality; WP:BRD applies to hooks as to any other content. This is not going to change and there is no point in discussing it for the umpteenth time. Gatoclass (talk) 15:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC) }}
Minor things can be fixed by anyone. SL93 (talk) 01:18, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:agreed—for wording swaps and changes and typo fixes, make the changes you want to make and ping the nominator. If you have an issue with the hook fact itself, that's when to come here. Substance comes here, style can be fixed boldly. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:25, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::I was only going to bring up hookiness issues, but dumped everything. I don't plan on regularly picking at every hook, but nearly every set having something I probably would have contested before promoting was a little shocking. Kingsif (talk) 01:56, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
Can we get a clue on who is asking? I can't follow it. Is it {{u|Kingsif}} asking all of these? Kingsif, are you asking multiple questions on multiple preps? I'm confused. —valereee (talk) 04:15, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:{{re|Valereee}} Yes and yes. I basically dumped all my comments on every prep and queue here. Responses broke it up but the bullets should section off each hook. Kingsif (talk) 04:26, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:: It got really confusing as it expanded. Maybe in future we sign each bullet point query to help clarify? That would also provide a date for each, which is helpful. —valereee (talk) 04:29, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::: I added unsigned templates and expanded everything into subheadings. That should make it easier on the eyes. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 05:31, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
- Oppose Bold stylistic changes to hooks by bystanders are outrageous and should be forbidden. A hook which has been composed with care and then reviewed and approved represents an established formal consensus for that form of words. To alter an approved hook without consultation and agreement is disruptive as it is impolite and will tend to annoy and drive off contributors.
: I'm here because I was pinged. But I was pinged in mistake about a hook that I haven't worked on. Putting all the pending hooks into play is generating chaos and confusion. We have an established process of proposers, reviewers and promoters. This established workflow is efficient and productive and so does not need changing.
: If instead, we have a free-for-all committee in which everyone speaks at once about everything then this will multiply the work by duplicating and repeating it; generate argument and bad feeling, and so tend to destroy DYK. A relevant precedent is WP:ITN in which the nominations are considered collectively by a peanut gallery. Just about nothing gets through that process and so the productivity of ITN is poor – less than one blurb per day and so their set of blurbs is usually quite stale. DYK's current productivity is many times greater so, if it works, don't fix it!
: See also WP:INTODARKNESS.
: Andrew🐉(talk) 10:13, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::I disagree about it being disruptive, but the majority of these hook issues seem to be unnecessary stylistic preferences such as moving something to the front such as the first two hooks mentioned in queue 5. There is no established consensus on plot elements referring to non-fiction works. I don't think we should have admins rushing to the queues to edit non-errors. SL93 (talk) 10:48, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::I feel strongly that the time to comment on hooks is before they are approved, and that later comments should be few, and must be notified to the hook nominator and reviewer. There has been far too much last-minute tinkering in the past, often escaping the notice of the nominators and reviewers, as it happens on pages they don't watchlist (and would go mad if they did). Johnbod (talk) 13:23, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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seriously, though; participation can be messy, but it makes DYK a better, more interesting place with better artisanship. i'd love to see more people add their voices to our domchor. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 23:20, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
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I propose that this entire shambles be closed immediately before it does any more damage. If it remains open, then I'm going to comment on every single hook as that is what we have been invited to do. This might get noisy so be careful what you wish for ... Andrew🐉(talk) 10:20, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:"If you don't stop I'll do what you want" isn't the threat you think it is? More voices can only be helpful, moody or not. As said above, I'm not (and hopefully nobody else is) planning to do this all the time. But every few weeks, a number of complaints about interestingness of hooks on the MP are raised, and I thought an exercise in final checks might at least be a reminder to regular contributors that they can and should challenge boring or windy hooks. Kingsif (talk) 22:42, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
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I kind of see Andrew's point. The whole thing was just kind of a time sink. What was the point of this? Are we proposing that this is needed weekly? It's taken up a ton of energy. How productive was it vs the time it took? —valereee (talk) 01:36, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:In the interest of CIVIL, I'm not going to tell you here the impression this comment leaves, but please read the comment directly above yours that answers all the questions. Kingsif (talk) 01:40, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
::I was thinking earlier that this exercise in examining the hooks was pretty productive, as I find it annoying that editors wait until things are on the main page to comment. I realize nominators have worked hard and don't want their approved hooks diddled with. On the other hand, better now than at WP:ERRORS after it's on the main page. — Maile (talk) 02:36, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
:::I'm not objecting to people querying hooks. I query hooks pretty much every time I move a prep to queue, fairly often 2 or 3 hooks in a single set. What I'm objecting to is something that looks pointy: I'm going to finetooth comb everything on the Qs/Ps page today and mass query everything I see that could possibly be queried. {{u|Kingsif}}, I'm sorry the comment left a bad impression, because I don't like thinking I've left a negative impression of me for any of my colleagues here. If you want to each day check the most recent move-to-queues for something you thought needed a query, I'd have zero objection. You can do that daily as far as I'm concerned. But this was like two weeks' worth of hooks all in a single post. Someone else had to come along and subsection it. —valereee (talk) 20:44, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::{{re|Valereee}} Thanks - I genuinely thought it would be useful, and most of the engagement was quite quick and, er, receptive. Yes, the impression was that you thought I was being POINTy, but I wasn't. I didn't think a one-time dump of the entire prep list would be unwelcome or disruptive (what is this talkpage's purpose if not to interrogate and fix things) but I can see how so much at once could feel like too much. But I dunno, a couple of editors seemed to quite eagerly discuss many if not all the things I brought up; in the past, I have not infrequently made queries on nom templates, but that doesn't get so many eyes on it. I was glad to see more engagement here. Kingsif (talk) 22:48, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::@Kingsif, probably just a misunderstanding between two colleagues. It happens online. :) Best to you. —valereee (talk) 23:22, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
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[[Template:Did you know nominations/Barton, Kinder and Alderson]]
nomination categorization
We had a discussion a while back about nomination categorization, and I think I just found a solution—is there a way that the talk-page transclusions of DYK nominations could add categories to just the article's talk page? That way, we could intersect the categories with the other talk-page categories from WikiProjects to get the various needed categories—for example, crossing all the talk pages with open DYK nomination with articles in WikiProject biography would give us all the bios. The categories should be transcluded only if it's an open nomination, of course. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 08:14, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:It's possible to make the template only provide the categorization when it's transcluded elsewhere, but that would mean that the categories also show up on the DYK pages where nominations are collected. —David Eppstein (talk) 21:18, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::that would be just WP:DYKN and WP:DYKNA, no? I'd be okay with that... theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 23:23, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::update:the feature has been implemented at :Category:Articles that have been nominated for Did you know! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 09:49, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
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120 approved nominations
We are at 120 approved nominations. The queue page says that it goes to two sets a day with at least 120 approved hooks, but I didn't follow the end of the last conversation about if that should change. {{@DYK admins}} SL93 (talk) 02:02, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:We're in the first round of WikiCup now, so we'd need to go to 2-a-days for that anyway. —valereee (talk) 02:07, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
::Oh, that is a useful reminder to me. I joined earlier. SL93 (talk) 02:08, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:Is there any reason we shouldn't go ahead and do this now? I'm sure it will mean doing some swaps, but that shouldn't matter for the next set? —valereee (talk) 02:09, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{yo|Valereee}} i've moved the relevant hooks, we're good theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:13, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:we have a christmas sheni set that's currently schedule for Jan. 7. I've moved them down to the bottom prep set, but they'll need to be moved further than that (we're running a backlog of promoted queues, so I'd prefer to wait until the admins promote some preps to queues rather than depromote the noms.
:For the admins: before noon UTC (roughly ten hours from now), please change User:DYKUpdateBot/Time Between Updates from 86400 to 43200.
:Bureaucratic stuff out of the way, everyone please feel free to discuss whether this eleven-day one-a-day period was too short. happy new year! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:12, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:Arguably artificial as the queues are backlogged, but at this point inevitable, so - here we go! A new year's gift from the DYK queue. While I'm here, Happy New Year everyone! Canadianerk (talk) 02:14, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
{{done}} We're on 2-a-days. —valereee (talk) 02:21, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
: We are on two sets, which means that Canticle IV: The Journey of the Magi, requested for 6 January, sits now in q5 for 3 January. Which may be a good chance to get Johann-Werner Prein (now approved) in there for his birthday?? It will need an admin. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:36, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
::Pinging {{@DYK admins}} for Gerda. SL93 (talk) 19:39, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:::Is there a problem with fulfilling the request? SL93 (talk) 16:55, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::maybe {{@DYK admins}} has a bystander effect—every admin thinks every other admin is going to do it for long enough that everyone puts it out of their mind. with a little passive-aggressive reping to the admins there, just for sparkle. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:03, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::Make it easy for me -- instead of linking to the articles, which is not where I need to work, people asking me to help them can give me convenience links to the queues/preps/nom templates as appropriate. :) It's why I always link to the nom template, queue, provide each full hook plus ping nom, reviewer, promoter whenever I need to query a hook: to make it easy for someone to help me by giving them every link they could possibly need. I got pinged here last night, saw it was going to be complicated, saw that the links were to the articles, and decided I didn't have time. I have some time now, so I'll go at least get started. —valereee (talk) 17:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::i stand (or, most likely sit) corrected :) if you still would like links, i'm happy to provide, but it seems like you're on it at the moment. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:22, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::I don't think you should feel responsible for providing all the links the requester didn't. I said something because I want to help requesters understand how to make it easy for me to help them. :D —valereee (talk) 17:27, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::::ah, i understand :D theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:36, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::Aaaaand there's no space in Prep 4 or Prep 3, which is where I need to make that first move. {{u|Theleekycauldron}}, do you have a preference for where that hook should go? —valereee (talk) 17:22, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::{{yo|Valereee}} cleared a spot in prep 3 for ya theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:26, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::::Speaking of which, gerda, I'm not sure I understand the magi hook—what does it mean to "set" a poem? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:35, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::::Thanks, Claudia! Would you also be willing to promote Template:Did you know nominations/Johann-Werner Prein to somewhere in prep so I don't have to go remind myself of the exact steps lol? I get paranoid when I haven't done that in a while that I'll forget a step. —valereee (talk) —valereee (talk) 17:36, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::::{{yo|Valereee}} done-dunino! seventh hook of prep 5 :)) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:47, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::::: I think you mean prep 5 ;)
::::::::::{{done}}, and thanks for the assist! —valereee (talk) 18:09, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
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prep 5
I just cleared this prep, as it seemed to have been moved but not cleared. Just making sure I didn't misinterpret. —valereee (talk) 18:53, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:@prep 4 also -- @Amakuru, am I missing something? —valereee (talk) 18:58, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{Ping|Valereee}} oh no, sorry I just forgot. Thanks for clearing up! — Amakuru (talk) 19:08, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:::No worries, I just wanted to make sure I wasn't just staring right through something obvious! :D —valereee (talk) 19:21, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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Current main page
The hook for Daviesia devito and Daviesia schwarzenegger has been rewritten so that it is no longer at all quirky. Better suggestions than the current wording appreciated at main-page errors. Espresso Addict (talk) 04:27, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:I wasn't expecting my suggestion to be taken, especially within minutes of saying it, when I basically said that I'm in the minority when it comes to misleading quirky hooks. I thought it was common sense to not use a minority opinion without further discussion. Sorry for assuming wrong. SL93 (talk) 16:51, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
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[[Kaori Maeda]]
Hi! I just created this article (it's not yet complete though as I'm still planning on adding a filmography section, I just had to get it out of the way to meet eligibility). I was thinking of nominating it for DYK but I wasn't sure if it had any information that would be considered hook worthy, so I wanted to ask for feedback here first before nominating it. Would either of these options work as broadly-interesting hooks?
- ALT ... that prior to starting a voice acting career, Kaori Maeda was part of a high school band that covered songs by LiSA?
- ALT1 ... that Kaori Maeda cites Mister Donut fortune-telling as one of her hobbies?
To be honest, I'm a bit iffy with the first hook since, while LiSA's well-known among anime fans and Demon Slayer was quite a popular anime with some mainstream appeal, I'm not actually sure if she's broadly well-known enough to add hookiness. I'm more partial to the second one since it seems funnier, though any feedback is welcome. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:08, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:Further thoughts: I discussed these hooks with NLH on Discord and came up with the basic shape of ALT1 inspired by a mention in the jawiki article. I'm partial to ALT1, though should be considered involved regarding it. The jawiki article also discusses her ambidexterity and that she's apparently some sort of expert cartwheeler (my Japanese isn't good enough to be sure), which could be incorporated into other potential hooks. Vaticidalprophet 15:43, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
::My only question is what Mister Donut fortune telling entails - does she predict new donut flavors? Did she just practice fortune telling at Mister Donut? Is this a thing I haven't heard of before, maybe some explanation is needed (in the article - the hook is fine, but the article only gives the context that she used to work there). Kingsif (talk) 22:58, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Kingsif}} Unfortunately the sources I could find (including the tweet) do not actually clarify exactly what it means (apparently it was also mentioned in a radio interview that I have no access to but is mentioned in the article sources). I can't tell if it means fortune telling using donuts or if it's simply her brand of fortune telling. I wonder if it's fine to just let it be mentioned in the article without further context (there's a reason why I put it in quotes in the article). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:58, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
::::I think ALT1 is much more intriguing and therefore more hooky. I don't need to know how to perform donutmancy to be curious about it enough to click on the hook. As for the article, we can only write to the level of detail our sources provide. —David Eppstein (talk) 20:10, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
:::::Oh yeah, ALT1 is amazing. I just want to know more, so I asked. If the sources don't explain, then I'm sad, but the hook is the hook. Kingsif (talk) 22:38, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you all for the comments. I've now nominated the article for DYK at Template:Did you know nominations/Kaori Maeda; further discussion can take place there. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:51, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
QPQ question
Can I use a QPQ on another nomination if I had to withdraw a nomination? SL93 (talk) 16:48, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{yo|SL93}} for Ladoga Skerries National Park, I think you're fine keeping your QPQ on IAR—no one reviewed the thing, it wasn't rejected, you just took it back within a few hours. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 17:04, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::@SL93, I agree, if a nom was withdrawn or rejected, you should feel free to reuse that QPQ. —valereee (talk) 17:24, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::My question is now moot. {{u|Kavyansh.Singh}} has significantly expanded the article. I will add them to the DYK. SL93 (talk) 19:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
[[Template:Did you know/Queue/5|Queue 5]] issues; admin needed
There are two issues with Queue 5 that need to be fixed by an admin.
The first is that the third hook has the text {{tq|<---special occasion hook-->}} visible in the queue. It needs to be properly commented out, and it would help if the comment gave the special occasion date (January 3), since we do change from doing one to two promotions a day and back again.
The second special occasion hook in Queue 5, for Cornwall Electric, should be run no sooner than the second set on January 5 (currently Prep 2), because the 1998 ice storm guiding the timing ran January 5 through 10 in Canada. If this special occasion comment had been given a date, it would probably have been moved sooner. It would be appreciated if an admin move this hook to Prep 2 or Prep 4 (so it runs during the day in Canada), and a hook be swapped into Queue 5 in its place. Pinging admins valereee, Maile, Cas Liber, Wugapodes, Amakuru, and Gatoclass, in the hopes this can be handled soon. Also, more queues need filling, if any of you are up to it; only two are filled at the moment. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:52, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:Fixed the markup, my bad! Added the date. —valereee (talk) 19:55, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:Sorry, BlueMoonset, I'm not following the other request? —valereee (talk) 19:57, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::Okay, so Cornwall Electric (hook 6) from Q5 needs to go to P2 or P4 and Jan 5 added to its spec occ comment? Any preference on what we're taking out of 2 or 4? —valereee (talk) 20:06, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::yeah, I have a preference—P4 doesn't use any non-u.s. non-bios. I'll clear a slot out of Prep 2. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:08, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::Okay, I think I've gotten that done so far...what goes into Q5 now? —valereee (talk) 20:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::if you could take the 1999 legal case (Prep 5, slot 6) to replace the q5 cornwall electric hook, that'd work best theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:10, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::ec, working —valereee (talk) 20:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::Ok, think I got it, but I've been making dinner all the while and it's never a bad idea for someone to check my work. :D —valereee (talk) 20:24, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::everything looks good on my end—thanks, valereee! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:27, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
Prep 1
The article Levantine Arabic uses Wikisource as reference 269 which I think might not be considered reliable since its a wiki. it doesn't source much of the article so it should be an easy fix. Pinging nominator {{u|A455bcd9}}. SL93 (talk) 04:07, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:You mean it is citing a primary source text that is available on Wikisource? Maybe the ref needs editing, but that should be fine if the information is non-controversial. Kingsif (talk) 04:27, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:Hmm, it's the Lord's Prayer in Arabic, I wonder how much of that is also just translation? I'm more worried about the English translation, I've never seen the Lord's Prayer like that! Kingsif (talk) 04:31, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{u|Kingsif}} I have tried to use unreliable sources for uncontroversial content, but that was never let through. Maybe I just need a guideline that says "non-controversial content can be sourced to unreliable references". SL93 (talk) 04:33, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::As someone who grew up Catholic, I have never heard of such an English translation for the Lord's Prayer. SL93 (talk) 04:34, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:::Yeah, and the English one has a reference. My point was more that Wikisource collects primary documents, it isn't the source itself, so it isn't unreliable. Like google books hosting a book - use the book as primary, and google may be unreliable but not the document it's hosting? The fact it's all translations throws it out of whack. Potentially, we don't need a source for the translated text but do need a source that says "this is the official translation". I'd like to examine the English one, especially if that's what the others may be based on. This seems trickier than just "find a better source for ref 269"... Kingsif (talk) 04:37, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::::I guess the word "wiki" threw me off. I do know that Google Books does have unreliable publishers such as Lulu at times. I'm glad that I brought this up though since something else was pointed out. SL93 (talk) 04:40, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::Wikisource is a Wikimedia site, it could be hyperlinked! FWIW, [https://www.lords-prayer-words.com/lords_prayer_arabic.html here] is another source for the Arabic text and its romanization. I'd like to discuss with the nominator before editing the article, though, even the English. Kingsif (talk) 04:43, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::Hi,
::::::Thanks for checking the sources!
::::::For the English version, I used "1988 ELLC" cited in Lord's Prayer#English versions. I think it's fine as there are dozens of versions/translations/Christian denominations and no "official" one.
::::::For the Modern Standard Arabic version, if Wikisource is not suitable, then similarly any Arabic translation of Matthew 6:9-13 would be okay. For instance, [https://st-takla.org/Bibles/BibleSearch/showChapters.php?book=50&from=1&to=28 here], [https://www.arabicbible.com/nt-text/118-matthew/1052-matthew-6.html or here], or [https://www.copticchurch.net/bible/arabic/SVD/Matthew/6 there].
::::::What do you think? A455bcd9
::::::(by the way, I recently opened a peer-review on this article, feedback welcome!)
::::::(talk) 08:07, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Now in Template:Did you know/Queue/1. FWIW, I've heard so many different versions of the Lord's Prayer. Trespass against us, lead us not into temptation, thy and thine are what I learned, but I've heard lots of versions that used closer to the phrases in the article. —valereee (talk) 17:53, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Queue 1: Uranium mining in the Bancroft area
- ... that uranium mining in Bancroft, Blind River, Beaverlodge, and the Northwest Territories made uranium Canada's number-one mineral export in 1958?
As far as I can tell, apart from Bancroft, none of the other locations in the hook (Blind River, Beaverlodge and Northwest Territotries) are mentioned at all in the target article Uranium mining in the Bancroft area, which means it's not compliant with eligibility rule #3, {{xt|"The fact(s) mentioned in the hook must be cited in the article"}}. As an additional point, it's unclear how significant Bancroft was in the overall point being made here about exports from Canada. If we're going to go with this hook fact, it would be nice if the article indicated exactly how major the contribution was from Bancroft specifically, since that's what we're focusing on here, not the other locations. Pinging {{ping|Theleekycauldron|Mike Peel|CT55555}} as promoter/reviewer/nominator. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 10:59, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:Good point, I missed that. There is a second hook at Template:Did you know nominations/Uranium mining in the Bancroft area - maybe just change to that? (I've just double-checked that one is in the article) - or add the facts from this hook into the article. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 11:44, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::Hi Mike Peel and Amakuru how can I be most helpful here? Some notes:
- I could improve the article to mention the split between the locations (not easy).
- I know that Bancroft i very significant overalll to the national percentage, but I don't have quantifiable data to back that up without research.
- I could suggest a better hook? (maybe easiest solution as I see it). Some notes on that: The uranium prospecting in Bancroft was "greatest uranium prospecting rush in the world." Source: http://www.geologyontario.mndm.gov.on.ca/mndmfiles/afri/data/imaging/31C13NW0075/31C13NW0075.pdf (page 3 officially, page 10 as per the PDF reader) - that's probaly a more exciting hook than anything I've proposed to date. CT55555 (talk) 16:36, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::OK thanks for the responses {{ping|Mike Peel|CT55555}} I'm happy with either ALT6 or CT55555's new suggestion here myself (if Mike also approves that one), one of those two seem the easiest route to take at this point. Thanks — Amakuru (talk) 18:15, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::: I think going with ALT6 is best - "greatest X in the world" is rather subjective. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 20:59, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:::: I support that. CT55555 (talk) 21:05, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::{{ping|Mike Peel|CT55555}} {{done}} thanks for your input! — Amakuru (talk) 21:49, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::I... don't support that, I'd much rather keep the current hook. I'll add the material about the other regions myself, that's no problem, and I don't think it's a huge issue that we don't say where the bulk of the uranium comes from. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 21:50, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::welp—that's that, i suppose theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 21:52, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::{{ping|Theleekycauldron}} I think this could easily change still, if the info is added to the article. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 22:57, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
[[Template:Did you know nominations/Carmine]]
User:I'ma editor2022 attempted to create a nomination here; I've moved it to its own nompage and translcuded it to WP:DYKN. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:37, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Queue 1: Levantine Arabic
- ... that Levantine Arabic is often written in Hebrew characters online by Bedouin, Arab Christians, and Druze in Israel?
In the article, I'm seeing the line {{xt|"Israeli Druze and Bedouins preferred Hebrew characters"}} under the "Writing systems" section, but I can't see a specific reference to Arab Christians using Hebrew characters online. Unless I've missed it! I suspect from the DYK nom page that this is verified by the source Shachmon, Ori; Mack, Merav (2016) but it would need to be explicitly included in some way. Pinging {{ping|A455bcd9|David Eppstein|Theleekycauldron}} who were involved with the hook. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 10:29, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:Oops, I misinterpreted the phrase "code-switching"—I can't access the above source, so i can't copy the above citation to add the necessary content. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 10:33, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:Hi,
:The sources are quoted in Template:Did you know nominations/Levantine Arabic, I copy/paste them here:
:* "Colloquial Arabic written in Hebrew characters on Israeli websites by Druzes (and other non-Jews)". Jerusalem Studies in Arabic and Islam (43–44): 15: "In other words, the Israeli Druzes, most of whom vote for the Zionist parties, usually use Hebrew script for writing online comments in colloquial Arabic. However, the Golan Heights’ Druzes who regard themselves as Syrian, do not use Hebrew characters for such purpose. The Galilee Bedouins who show strong support for the Zionist parties — although less than the Druzes — often use Hebrew letters for writing colloquial Arabic in online comments, whereas among the Negev Bedouins, whose support for the Zionist parties is much more limited, such usage of the Hebrew alphabet is not very common.";
:* Abu Elhija, Dua'a (23 January 2014). "A new writing system? Developing orthographies for writing Arabic dialects in electronic media". Writing Systems Research. Informa UK Limited. 6 (2): 190–214. doi:10.1080/17586801.2013.868334. S2CID 219568845: "Israeli Druze and Bedouins were found to prefer Hebrew script for status updates rather than Arabic or Latin (Zoabe, 2012).";
:* Shachmon, Ori (2016). "Writing Palestinian dialects: the case of 'Hikāyat al-xunfusā'". Jerusalem Studies in Arabic and Islam (43–44): 13: "In addition, Arab youngsters in Israel today, mainly Druze and Christian but also Muslims, gradually use more and more Hebrew characters in their text messages, Facebook correspondence, personal blogs and public forums.";
:* Shachmon, Ori; Mack, Merav (2016). "Speaking Arabic, Writing Hebrew. Linguistic Transitions in Christian Arab Communities in Israel". Wiener Zeitschrift für die Kunde des Morgenlandes. 106: 223–239. JSTOR 26449346
:Another source (Shachmon, Ori; Mack, Merav (2019). "The Lebanese in Israel – Language, Religion and Identity". Zeitschrift der Deutschen Morgenländischen Gesellschaft. 169 (2): 343–366. doi:10.13173/zeitdeutmorggese.169.2.0343. ISSN 0341-0137.) mentions that Lebanese people in Israel can also write Levantine in the Hebrew alphabet. A455bcd9 (talk) 10:38, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
::I've just added the information to the article ("used in Israel, especially online among Bedouin, Arab Christians, and Druze"). A455bcd9 (talk) 10:47, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:::{{ping|A455bcd9}} thanks! — Amakuru (talk) 16:37, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
''[[Template:Did you know nominations/Price of the Modi Years|Price of the Modi Years]]<!-- Template:Dykn -->'', ''[[Template:Did you know nominations/To Kill a Democracy|To Kill a Democracy]]<!-- Template:Dykn -->'', and extending DYK guidelines to non-fiction books
Since the same problem is coming up on two nominations, and since my objections don't rest on the grounds of DYK's explicit guidelines (or a solid maintenance tag), I want to bring this here (I'll ping nominator Venkat TL, who nominated both articles, and reviewers Storye book and Gwillhickers). I have two big issues with both of these nominations, and I think approving both of them was in error and that these articles need significant transformation before they are ready for the main page.
First, both of these articles present the synopses of the book as fact, placing political opinions in Wikipedia's voice with sparse or no attribution. That alone should give reviewers pause under WP:VOICE—arguably, the same problem applies to a third nomination as well, Our Hindu Rashtra.
But second, and more importantly, I just don't think that argument synopsis is enough. I had a brief discussion about this with Gatoclass and Vaticidalprophet, and while I agree that the book in question (The Alignment Problem) was probably fine in retrospect, since it contains a lot of encyclopedic content that isn't related to plot summary (if not 1500 character's worth). However, these nominations have barely a pretense of doing that—they contain one-line descriptions of the various degrees of and qualifications held by their respective authors, but nothing externally encyclopedic such as critical reception, significance, impact, popularity, controversy, etc. I was this close to taking both articles to AfD, but there are critical secondary sources out there (although none are used in the articles, as far as I can tell) that suggest that these books may actually be notable. We have WP:ALLPLOT for fiction books, and DYK's supplementary guidelines prevent hooks about novels from being entirely in-universe, but no such guideline exists for books that place themselves in the non-fiction category, so I can't argue that this technically breaks any policies. However, I couldn't in good conscience put these on the main page in the state they are.
So, my thing is this: This isn't explicitly in the DYK guidelines (being non-fiction), and there's no maintenance tags I can use that fully describe the problem. But the fact that these books happen to be political manifestos and not fantasy novels don't give their article licenses to ignore real-world analysis and encyclopedic content and call it a day. Neither the hooks nor the articles offer anything about the book that can't be found in the book, and if that's fine for every non-fiction book hook and article, then there's really no point to having WP:NBOOK at all. To quote WP:ALLPLOT: {{tq|Note that regardless of the length of the page or the number of edits made to it, a page containing only plot summary is still a stub - an incomplete article}}. I don't see how we couldn't say the same for non-fiction books—and we don't feature stubs. Anyways, that's my shpiel—apologies for the length (and if this wasn't strictly necessary). Thoughts? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 08:30, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:@Theleekycauldron I am still learning this, but as I understand DYK requirements are chosen based on community consensus. DYK Participants are expected to meet the requirements that are based on community consensus. Satisfying individual perfectionists will turn the DYK review into a preliminary Good Article review. While everyone of us have good intentions for the improvement of these article, we should not be using the lack of GA or B or C status on the article to block a DYK that has passed the community supported DYK requirements. I request you to clearly elaborate things. (1) How in your opinion DYK requirement are not met here? which points Please share links too? (2) what sections/content do you want added before you will be satisfied with these articles. Venkat TL (talk) 08:53, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
::In my opinion, these nominations have yet to meet the neutrality (WP:DYK#gen4a, under WP:VOICE), length (WP:DYKSG#D11 and WP:DYK#gen2d), and "eligibility other" requirements (WP:DYKSG#D13). And your articles don't have to be C-class, by any measure: lots of the articles i wrote that have seen the main page are start-class articles about fictional works or characters. And, as other users have pointed out, a strict DYK review can compare to a lax GA review, but I'm not looking for that by any stretch. Really, if the articles had substantive reception sections that show real, external, critical analysis of the book, that would be enough. 1500 characters' worth isn't necessary, but it should be not insignificant—more than just "
::And to be totally clear, I'm not trying to block anything; I'm trying to help improve the article to the point where it can be featured (and get a clearer sense of how DYK guidelines apply to non-fiction works), instead of rubberstamping. I look forward to seeing all three articles on the main page, but not just yet. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 09:11, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:This is an interesting case, as someone who's taken multiple non-fiction books through DYK. (Both fiction and nonfiction books seem to inspire complex DYK discussions, for slightly different reasons for each.) I see where Leek's complaints are coming from. I don't think it's a bad thing for a synopsis to be a major share of an article -- ALLPLOT (which I agree is translatable to nonfiction synopses, if not 1:1 translatable due to ALLPLOT's specific context in the long-running and acrimonious disputes over Wikipedia's fiction coverage) is not MOREPLOTTHANANOTHEREDITORWOULDHAVEADDED, and is in significant part a copyright issue rather than an article quality issue per se -- but the given articles have noticeable issues with POV due to uncontextualized synopsizing. (In maintenance tag terms, both could certainly have a POV tag.) I don't think they would be able to run DYK in their current state in significant part due to failure to contextualize. I might actually be inclined to say we should be stricter on 'real world connection' for nonfiction than fiction; I'm an outspoken critic of "no in-universe hooks for fictional works ever" because it's an attempt to handle a serious issue (hook interestingness) in a way that's at best net neutral and often individually negative, but given non-fiction books that get articles are so often about controversial subjects, presenting their content uncritically on the main page can be...questionable. Vaticidalprophet 10:23, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
::@Theleekycauldron, I do believe that you have the best intentions for the article and the DYK. Please share those sources you are talking about, here or on the article talk page, that you feel could improve the article. I will be happy to include them. @Vaticidalprophet A lot of what you are suggesting appears as personal preference to me. Instead of making abstract or policy discussions, it would have helped me and the article more, if you would suggest exactly what needs to be added/removed/updated. Leaky has given some pointers. I will try to include those suggestions. These articles are just recently started, hopefully it would improve overtime. Venkat TL (talk) 10:45, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
- I agree with Theleekycauldron, I think we should avoid these kinds of hooks for the most part, as they are presenting the findings of a particular author as if they're truths, without the usual context and balance which one would get from regular assertions in Wikivoice cited to multiple secondary sources. If the fact presented is correct and can be backed up by other sources, then it should be presented as such. For example, for the "lost 20% of its workforce under Prime Minister Narendra Modi" case, if this is an uncontroversial statement which can be verified with other sources, then we should be describing how the book presented that information; while if it's not a correct statistic, then we shouldn't be saying it at all as that's misleading. As an aside, the article Price of the Modi Years itself seems to have WP:VOICE issues, in particular with statements like {{xt|"India will pay the price of Modi years, primarily on its economy and society"}}. This is clearly a POV statement about a real-world topic, and I've not seen a synopsis of non-fiction presented in this kind of "plot" format before. — Amakuru (talk) 16:52, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:* Re To Kill a Democracy. I don't disagree with what has been said above, but I think you are all going about it the wrong way. Complaining about the article from a great height is not helpful in this case. It is more useful to advise (and assist if possible) the creator of the article, and any other editors who may want to help to improve it. I have said on the DYK template that I think that the DYK nomination should be suspended until this and other issues are resolved, and I have put a link to this discussion there. I have also written positive and specific advice on the talk page of the article. I have added extra links into the External links section, in case the creator or future editors might find them useful. The creator in this case is not a vastly experienced editor, and they have already been asking for help. We all had to start somewhere on WP. If you are able to advise the creator in a positive and practical manner, that would improve the article a great deal, and I look forward in hope of seeing the contributors to this discussion doing just that. Storye book (talk) 17:08, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:*:I couldn't agree more, Storye book—I'm sorry if I don't come across as constructive. I think I was looking for consensus that there was a problem before helping the nominator find the solution, since otherwise it'd be rather WP:SLOPpy. with that out of the way, we can start talking about what's next :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 21:10, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:::* Thank you, {{u|Theleekycauldron}}. That is good to hear. Storye book (talk) 21:17, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
- This is a complex matter. I agree we should not be presenting the argument of a book in Wikipedia's voice in a hook, unless independent secondary sources (i.e., high-quality book reviews) endorse the book's argument, and perhaps not even then. This isn't very different, to me, from requiring that hooks not be entirely based on in-universe elements of a fictional book. I don't think a synopsis being a substantial part of the article is a large problem, though. The article should establish the subject's notability; should include enough non-synopsis content that a reasonable hook can be written; and not omit critical material in a way that skews our coverage relative to what reliable sources say. But DYK doesn't require perfection, or even detail; our bar is intentionally fairly low. I haven't engaged much with the first two nominations, but I hope to help the nominator a little with Our Hindu Rashtra; hopefully something useful will come of that. Vanamonde (Talk) 17:47, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
{{Clear}}
DYK's December wrap, 2021
: The number of people whose permission I need before I can do whatever the hell I want... Let me tell you something—there's really a lot to be said for fascism.
:: – Josh Lyman (Bradley Whitford), on The West Wing{{`s}} "Bad Moon Rising" (2001)
Welcome back, everyone! :D I'm sorry this is so late, I've been super busy and trying to catch up on stuff. It's been a hell of a year, and I say that even though I wasn't even around here for the half of it. Because of that (and to the disappointment of my husband), i'll be leaning a little heavier on summarizing this month rather than the entire year. No reason to skimp on December for having the rotten luck of being the last month, after all. Also, next month's will be shorter, I promise. Let's hop to it!
As always, an ovation for our most-viewed hooks of the month: (Did you know...)
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File:3 utilities problem plane.svg
File:Tusks in City of Mombasa.jpg
- ... that on an average night, between 130 and 200 people can be found Outstanding in the Field (example pictured) for about five hours? by ezlev—19,620 views in 12 hours
- ... that on special occasions, the city of Gloucester supplies a pie made from lampreys (lamprey pictured) to the British monarch? by Dumelow—39,220 views in 12 hours
- ... that it's pronounced "gif", not "gif"? by yours truly :) 17,473 views in 12 hours (without an image, too—not too shabby if i do say so myself)
- ... that it is impossible to draw non-crossing lines from three houses to three utilities (pictured) in a plane? by David Eppstein—17,408 views in 12 hours
- ... that United States Marines have repainted the Mombasa tusks (pictured) several times? by eviolite—17,356 views in 12 hours
To let you in on a secret, I actually really like the two-a-day sets :) sometimes it feels too quiet around here. Nonetheless, we switched over to one-a-day on the 21st, just before Christmas. Speaking of which, the Christmas sets! I'm sorry to report that they were not... the best performers, but I wouldn't have it any other way. We had fantastic sets for Christmas and Christmas eve, and thank you so much to everyone who contributed! There was a little bit of disagreement over how to best format the Christmas sets; some thought the sets should all be run in one day, while others wanted to run one set on Christmas Eve and another on Christmas Day to utilize the December 24 hooks. In the end, when we switched to one-a-days on the 21st, we swapped queues to opt for the Christmas Eve and Christmas Day sets (a swap and switch, by the way, for which I nearly got shishkabobed—right here at WT:DYK). We are also still waiting on the incredibly important moving of the SOHA from the bottom to the top, since Wugapodes is quite busy lately transcending the mere mortals to join the High ArbCom (congrats, by the way :D). Lastly, there was quite a bit of sprawl when Kingsif swept of all of the prep sets and queues for mistakes, leading to lots and lots of discussions and hook swaps. Thanks to everyone who discussed and found solutions, and thanks to Kingsif for the vigilance!
And finally, for our ever-wonderful quality quirkies that did not receive that sweet sweet validation of making WP:DYKSTATS—there were so many this month, unfortunately: (Did you know...)
- ... that trade negotiator Michael Smith
's negotiating style was summarized by a sign at his office door that read "This is not Burger King"? by Ktin - ... that Indonesian politician Iskandar Ramis had to be hospitalized after attempting to make juice? by Jeromi Mikhael
- ... that the album series Jingle Cats spawned Jingle Dogs, Jingle Babies, and a Japanese video game in which "the object is to breed and care for cats, which begin to sing when they're done copulating"? by SL93
- ... that after Kellogg's announced plans to replace striking workers in 2021, members of r/antiwork organized to submit fake applications to the company's hiring system? also by ezlev
- ... that Cibo paints Italian food over neo-fascist graffiti? by ezlev
- ... that the Global Methodist Church is part of a proposed divorce over marriage? by Pbritti
- ... that William Goebel was sworn in as Governor of Kentucky a day after being shot? by Kavyansh.Singh
- ... that George Asprey was not born with a silver spoon in his mouth – according to the Daily Mirror, it was a silver shovel? by Moonraker
= Year-end wrap =
: Just when you think, you're in control,
: Just when you think, you got a hold,
: Just when you get on a roll,
: Oh here it goes, here it goes, here it goes again...
:: – OK Go, "Here It Goes Again" (2006)
Like I said before, I really only got here in August. I read through most of the archives, and was going to try and highlight the most important thing that happened every month—but the announcement of Yoninah's death in March weighed too heavily on anything else to be found. Instead, I'd like to use this space to share something with y'all as I intersperse our most-viewed DYK images and hooks for the year. I promise, this extremely uncharacteristic display of emotion will be as brief as possible and most definitely non-recurring.
Growing up, it was kinda hard to find common ground with others interest-wise. I was, and am, pretty personable (if i do say so myself), but I'm still kind of an oddball. My parents might have cared what my grade in geometry was, but probably not what I found interesting from the class (for the record: t'was logic and proofs. That shtuss ruled.) So, I did lots of cool projects and spreadsheets and documents, but all of it just sat in folders. And even when the results were interesting to others, they didn't care about the process, or all the things I learned along the way, making me feel trapped in that respect. I still got by socially just fine, and today I'm so lucky to have my friends and husband and family; I love them all to the stars and back. Let's be real, though—none of the other going-into-eighth graders that year toted the mueller report and a graphing calculator to summer camp.
I had no idea what I was getting myself into when I volunteered to build one (1) prep set here nearly five months ago, just as a what-if. But I'm sitting here, after a length of time that feels like both the blink of an eye and an eternity, and I feel such gratitude. It's crazy to me that I get to be a part of this place that celebrates knowledge and discovery—not for the sake of grades, or a paycheck, or fame, but just because we're all committed to making a more knowledgeable space for everyone. It feels like, after quite some time, that I get to be among peers who value the work I do—in barnstars and buttons and praise, sure, but more importantly in genuine discussion and interest and collaboration towards a common goal. That is irreplaceably valuable to me.
So, I'd like to extend a heartfelt thank-you to everyone who made my experience on the site both enjoyable and impactful. I wish you all a bright 2022, full of storytelling and curiosity :) Cheers!
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|... that after being hijacked, United Airlines Flight 175 almost had two mid-air collisions with other aircraft before crashing into the South Tower of the World Trade Center (pictured){{-?}}
|File:Chadwick Boseman by Gage Skidmore July 2017 (cropped).jpg
|... that Chadwick Boseman (pictured) was the seventh actor to receive a posthumous Academy Award nomination?
|File:"Red Cross Dog" - Alexander Pope.png
|... that mercy dogs (example illustrated) were trained during World War I to comfort mortally wounded soldiers as they died in no man's land?
|File:The Law is Too Slow MET 2835-180.jpg
|... that the 1935 New York anti-lynching exhibitions included Death (modeled after the lynching of George Hughes), Necklace (by Aaron Goodelman), This Is Her First Lynching, and The Law Is Too Slow (pictured), and were intended to support anti-lynching legislation, while earlier similar proposed legislation was supported by the NAACP using the lynching of Henry Lowry?
|File:Ahegao Belle Delphine.gif
|... that Belle Delphine{{`s}} online popularity surged after she mimicked the orgasm faces (example pictured) featured in some Japanese manga?
|File:Kristoffer Domeij.jpg
|... that Kristoffer Domeij (pictured) set a record when he died after 14 tours of duty in more than 10 years as a Special Operations Ranger?
|File:SO4 Hoe open Web.jpg
|... that hit-to-kill weapons (example pictured) require no warhead as their high velocity gives them many times the energy per kilogram of TNT?
|File:Megan Phelps-Roper 266660 (cropped).jpg
|... that Megan Phelps-Roper (pictured) announced her departure from the Westboro Baptist Church when the church planned to protest at the funerals of the Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting?
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{{notelist-talk}} theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 13:21, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{ping|Theleekycauldron}} thanks very much for this excellent summary of last month's records and your impressions of the year as a whole. I'm sure I speak on behalf of everyone in giving a huge thanks to yourself and the others who put their time into DYK day-in-day-out. As noted, there was a huge hole left behind when Yoninah tragically left us, and it's very encouraging that others have stepped up to fill that void and bring new ideas to the project in that time.
:Also, I hear you on your "what I found interesting from the class" theme... I can identify with all that. I too have played with graphing calculators for hours, just making interesting shapes and exploring what different things look like. I can also sit for hours with a map, just charting out where the various roads or railways go and what their history was, not because I need to travel anywhere, but just because I admire the order and logic of it all. All things which play nicely into being a Wikipedian!
:And let's be honest, while writing articles is great on its own, having a project like this one (and also GAN, FAC, the various contests etc.) where you get to validate and discuss those articles with others adds significantly to the satisfaction. Obviously my main role at DYK is to sanity-check the hooks on the final leg of their journey, and I apologise to anyone who may be annoyed by my pernickety points, but I only do it because I care about the project and I want our front page to represent the best of what we have to offer! So a happy new year to yourself Leeky and everyone else, and here's to much more entertainment and useful work in the coming year! — Amakuru (talk) 14:34, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
::I couldn't agree more :D theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:35, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
Prep 2: [[The Hatchling]]
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context: theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 11:09, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
- Original hook: ... that a giant puppet dragon called The Hatchling was paraded through Plymouth, England, by her puppeteers, then flew over the sea?
- Hook as modified by me: ... that a giant puppet dragon called The Hatchling was paraded through Plymouth and flown over the sea?
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Urgent attention please: I'm sorry, but this hook will have to be revised. I have just noticed that the hook has been changed without consultation with the article creator (me). Please note that there is a convention at DYK that where the creator and other contributors to the article are available and cooperative, it is normal to consult them before changing the hook, because they may know something that the promoter or reviewer does not.
In this case, the hook in its present form is misleading, and also disappointing. It says that the puppet "was flown" over the sea, but the hook does not reveal the very rare and rather exciting situation that this giant puppet was flown as a kite (and not, as might appear from the hook, that it was packed up in an aircraft and flown overseas).
So could we please change it to the following:
- EITHER: ...
that a giant puppet dragon called The Hatchling paraded through Plymouth and flew over the sea? - OR: ... that a giant puppet dragon called The Hatchling was paraded through Plymouth and flown as a kite over the sea?
I should add that it is an accepted convention in the English language to speak of a puppet as if it were alive, so long as it is made clear that it is a puppet. Thus, we can say that the puppet Punch traditionally hits Judy with a stick, and we don't need to say that actually a puppeteer does it. So I believe that my first suggestion should be acceptable. But if you are concerned that people speaking English as a second language may be misled, then my second suggestion is telling a clearer truth (which is still really rather an exciting and extraordinary achievement - that giant puppet, that was paraded through the streets on rods, turned out to be a gigantic kite, whose line had to be held by a ship which pulled it off the cliff and over the sea). Storye book (talk) 11:06, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:Hi there, Storye book! I'm sorry, I totally didn't catch that you were referring to that during promotion. The original hook tripped me up because it uses "was paraded... by puppeteers" as well as "flew over the sea". If you want to use either the "either" hook, or the "or" hook, I'm definitely fine with that. As long as we're consistent on who has agency in the language. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 11:17, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:: Thank you, {{u|Theleekycauldron}}, Yes I could see that you changed it for linguistic reasons, but unfortunately that changed the meaning. I have already respected your linguistic cause in my alternatives above. Let's go with the above "OR" hook that says it's a kite, because it is clear to everyone. Storye book (talk) 11:39, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:::swapped :D theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 12:14, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
[[Template:Did you know/Preparation area 1|Prep 1]]
There's an interesting opportunity here; feminist has given us two hooks about redistricting in the United States. Specifically, the redistricting arms of the two major U.S. political parties, the National Republican Redistricting Trust and National Democratic Redistricting Committee. Now, I know that we don't like putting two next u.s. hooks next to each other (mechitza required), and definitely not two u.s. hooks of the same topic, but the Democratic and Republican parties are like a mudslinging yin and yang. It's not like we're running two random state legislators; these two organizations are each other's direct counters, they round out the topic. I think it'd be interesting to run these hooks side-by-side—we'll still use only four U.S. hooks in the set, but I think it's novel and interesting. I've implemented in prep 1 for now, just as a preview; thoughts? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 09:00, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:Sure. feminist (talk) 09:02, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
Prep 2: [[1963 Indiana State Fairgrounds Coliseum gas explosion]]
The hook has just been changed from -
- ... that a 1963 gas explosion in Indianapolis during a Holiday on Ice show has been called one of the worst disasters in Indiana history?
- to
- ... that a 1963 gas explosion in Indianapolis during a Holiday on Ice show is considered one of the worst disasters in Indiana history?
I just wanted to confirm that I approve the change, because ref. 43 of the WP article demonstrates that a number of authoritative sources have agreed on that point. Since the system pinged me about it, I'm putting the approval here. Storye book (talk) 10:46, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{yo|Storye book}} actually, Amakuru struck the hedgebit entirely—I personally have no issue with that (it represents the consensus of reliable sources), but you may want to take that up if you disagree. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 10:48, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:Also, the system didn't ping you, i did :) if you approve of the change, a thank-you would probably be sufficient (and not necessarily unwelcome :D) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 10:49, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:: Thank you. Please define hedgebit? (I googled it, it's around, but undefined). I don't suppose it matters, now, but I was just trying to work out what Amaraku did? Storye book (talk) 11:00, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:::you caught me, i made up the word. It was from "hedge", which means to... nevermind. anyways, amakuru cut "is considered" entirely. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 11:02, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
::::Sorry, I probably should have consulted on this, although I was aware that the hook is not running in the immediate future so people would flag it if there was a problem. The bottom line for me is, per WP:WEASEL, why are we saying it "is considered" something, without directly saying who it is that considers it that. It seemed that if it's so widely considered that, we can simply state it in Wikivoice. Another option might be to use "widely regarded" or similar, to convey that it is not an inalienable fact but that it is supported by lots of sources. WP:WEASEL does also mention "widely thought" as something to watch, but I've seen it used quite a lot with a footnote detailing the sources. — Amakuru (talk) 11:14, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
Queue 1: [[John Giordano (martial artist)]]
- ... that American martial artist John Giordano, who taught karate to women and the handicapped in the 1970s, held plays similar to kabuki theatre?
Although technically not incorrect, we see in the article that Giordano also taught karate to men during that period, and to me the above sentence seems to imply, rightly or wrongly, that he only taught the two groups mentioned. On a separate note, I'm not sure we should be using the term "handicapped" here even if it was the prevalent usage at the time in question. Both [https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/handicapped Cambridge dictionary] and [https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/handicap Merriam Webster] listed it as a potentially offensive term for disability. Pinging {{ping|Theleekycauldron|Muboshgu|SL93}}. — Amakuru (talk) 15:12, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{u|Amakuru}} ... that American martial artist John Giordano, who taught karate to women alongside men and disabled people in the 1970s, held plays similar to kabuki theatre? I also changed handicapped to disabled people in the article. I didn't know that handicapped was considered so offensive, but I do know as someone with autism that [https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/inclusive-communication/inclusive-language-words-to-use-and-avoid-when-writing-about-disability disabled people] is often better. SL93 (talk) 16:44, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{Ping|SL93}} OK, your suggestion works fine for me. And it's probably one of those terms that is fine for some people, and in some locations, but not in others... Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 18:07, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
{{Clear}}
Older nominations needing DYK reviewers
The previous list is entirely used up, so I've created a new list that includes all 14 nominations that need reviewing in the Older nominations section of the Nominations page, covering everything through December 28. We currently have a total of 219 nominations, of which 118 have been approved, a gap of 101, down 13 over the past seven days. Thanks to everyone who reviews these.
December 22: Template:Did you know nominations/1963 Indiana State Fairgrounds Coliseum gas explosion (experienced reviewer requested to check first-time reviewer)December 25: Template:Did you know nominations/George Alexander AlbrechtDecember 26: Template:Did you know nominations/Kip Andersen (filmmaker) (two articles)December 26: Template:Did you know nominations/The Canadian BrothersDecember 27: Template:Did you know nominations/Marquois scalesDecember 27: Template:Did you know nominations/Nayoro Main LineDecember 27: Template:Did you know nominations/Super Mario 64December 27: Template:Did you know nominations/2021 Chandigarh Municipal Corporation electionDecember 27: Template:Did you know nominations/Gunung Mas Regency (Review postponed until expansion completed)- December 28: Template:Did you know nominations/RAF Chia Keng (Review postponed until expansion completed)
December 28: Template:Did you know nominations/Man's GenesisDecember 28: Template:Did you know nominations/Jim JohannsonDecember 28: Template:Did you know nominations/Samuel J. Friedman TheatreDecember 28: Template:Did you know nominations/Grand Bargain (humanitarian reform) (A review has been started on 6 Jan 2021, to be completed shortly)
:Since all of the above nominations have been taken (except for the one still being expanded), I've added the 11 nominations remaining from 2021 below; these are all of the remaining unreviewed Older nominations. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:11, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
:*December 29: Template:Did you know nominations/Freedom (Frudakis)
:*December 29: Template:Did you know nominations/Kaori Maeda
:*December 30: Template:Did you know nominations/Chinese dama
:*December 30: Template:Did you know nominations/Ravish Malhotra
:*December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/War of the Keys (two or three articles)
:*December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/Beverly Russell
:*December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/Avraham Tamir (two articles)
:*December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/Bo Hines
:*December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/Truck-kun
:*December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/4th Submarine Squadron (United Kingdom)
:*December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/First homosexual movement
Please remember to cross off entries as you finish reviewing them (unless you're asking for further review), even if the review was not an approval. Please do not remove them entirely. Many thanks! BlueMoonset (talk) 00:26, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
{{Clear}}
<s>Queue 6</s> Prep 3: Machine learning in earth sciences
- ... that machine learning can recognize rocks automatically?
Three points regarding this:
- I'm wondering if the syntax of the sentence is correct, as it seems to me that machine learning is a process, not an entity in itself. Thus I wouldn't think machine learning itself would recognize rocks, but rather a machine would recognize rocks after undergoing machine learning.
- What does the word "automatically" mean in this context? Presumably if we're saying that the machine recognizes the rocks, that's sort of self-evidently automatic, i.e. without human intervention.
- Which part of the article does the hook correspond to? There's a section on recognizing fractures in rocks, and then a separate section on Geological structure classification, which might be what is meant by "recognizing rocks", but it's not entirely clear to me.
Pinging {{ping|Graeme Bartlett|SL93|Theleekycauldron}}. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 16:00, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:"Machine learning (ML) is a type of artificial intelligence (AI) that allows computer systems to interpret data while eliminating the need for explicit instructions and programming." per my reading of the wikilinked articles. SL93 (talk) 18:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{ping|SL93}} Well I'm not sure that squares with my understanding of the term. From our own article, {{xt|"Machine learning (ML) is the study of computer algorithms that can improve automatically through experience and by the use of data.}} and then {{xt|"Machine learning algorithms build a model based on sample data"}} (emphasis mine). It is not an entity in its own right, but a study or a principle. Similarly, from [https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/machine%20learning Merriam Webster]: {{xt|"the process by which a computer is able to improve its own performance"}}. So machine learning isn't an actor in its own right, but rather a process by which actors (i.e. machines) gain abilities, or the study of that process. Since this is due to go live in less than two hours, and I'm not sure we've settled the issues above, I've moved the hook out to Prep 3 for now to give more time for discussion. If I were acting unilaterally, and considering the three points above, I'd probably amend the text to something along the lines of:
::* ... that machine learning can be used to recognize rock fractures?
::Obviously happy to hear alternative and dissenting views on this, however! — Amakuru (talk) 10:09, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:::{{u|Amakuru}} I would be fine with that, but I hope that {{u|Graeme Bartlett}} will respond. SL93 (talk) 16:46, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
::::{{ping|SL93|Graeme Bartlett}} sure, thanks, I hope Graeme will be able to respond too. Incidentally if we want to keep it as "recognize rocks" rather than "recognize rock fractures" that's probably OK, as long as we're clear which bit of the article that corresponds to and that it is unambiguous and properly sourced! — Amakuru (talk) 18:03, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::I am happy with the alternative proposed by Amakuru. (But I would dispute our Machine learning definition (that it is a "study")). Rather than just fractures I was trying to say it can classify or identify rocks. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:00, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::{{u|Amakuru}} It looks like the wording can be changed to your suggestion. I'm not sure if I would be able to do it. SL93 (talk) 22:52, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
{{Clear}}
Prep 2: Shirley Chisholm
- ... that the first black female U.S. presidential candidate for a major party's nomination, Shirley Chisholm (campaign poster pictured), is largely credited for paving the way for future candidates Barack Obama and Kamala Harris?
If "nominee" means "presidential nominee" (from that article: {{tq|A candidate for president of the United States who has been selected by the delegates of a political party at the party's national convention to be that party's official candidate for the presidency}}), then Kamala Harris was not a nominee. Perhaps "future candidates" would be more accurate? DanCherek (talk) 16:10, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:Pinging {{u|FormalDude}}, {{u|Johnbod}}, {{u|Theleekycauldron}} for their thoughts. DanCherek (talk) 16:12, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
::i'd be behind changing "nominees" to "candidates", even though Harris was technically nominated for the veepstakes? people don't need us to tell them who Obama and Harris were anyway, so it's not worth being technically correct on that one. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 16:15, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:::I'm fine changing that to candidates. ––FormalDude File:Emojione 1F427.svg talk 17:23, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
::Personally I think a VP nominee is a "nominee", but if people (more than just one or two) want to change it, fine (though as always this sort of thing should be brought up well before it hits the main page). Johnbod (talk) 17:25, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:::I think "nominee" would have to mean a presidential nominee. Otherwise, it's pretty much saying nothing - she might have been a nominee for a position on the Handforth Town Council for all we know. Putting in "major party" per the below seems legitimate too, and looks to be the way RS are framing it. — Amakuru (talk) 18:22, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::Not really - the VP is on the ticket in a presidential election. But whatever. Remind me never to review a US political nom again. Johnbod (talk) 03:08, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
::::Sounds good to me! ––FormalDude File:Emojione 1F427.svg talk 19:05, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
= Factually wrong =
By no means am I an expert in American politics, but I do know that Charlene Mitchell was the Communist candidate in the 1968 presidential election, and she was racially black. (Source: [https://www.nytimes.com/1968/07/08/archives/communists-name-negro-woman-for-president-exlos-angeles-bookkeeper.html?searchResultPosition=2 The New York Times]) That was 4 years before Chisholm was a candidate. Doesn't that make the hook factually wrong? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
: Courtesy pings again for {{ping|FormalDude|Johnbod|Theleekycauldron}} – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:56, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
::Hmm - can we squeeze a "major" in here? Mitchell was only on the ballot in 2 states - our dense coverage of the election doesn't seem to say which, or how many votes she got. Johnbod (talk) 18:03, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
::: Yeah, Mitchell didn't received much votes. "California, 260 votes; Minnesota, 415; Ohio, 23; Washington, 377. Total: 1,075" (Source:Guide to U.S. Elections. SAGE Publications. 2009. ISBN 978-1-60426-536-1 p. 808) – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:17, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
::::From Chisholm's article: {{tq|Chisholm became the first African American to run for a major party's nomination for President of the United States}} "Major" must be included. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:03, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::I've updated the DYK per above. ––FormalDude talk 01:01, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
Prep 1
Hi...Can I request to bring back the hook for Tulio de Oliveira in prep. 1 for a rethink on the hook in light of information on another article being worked on.. Eftyhia Vardas? Whispyhistory (talk) 19:10, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
:done! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 04:12, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
::Thank you. Will ping after going through. Whispyhistory (talk) 07:17, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
Prep 3 Florence Church Bullard
Suggest moving this to Prep 4. Florence Church Ballard was an American Red Cross nurse who was deployed to France during World War I. This is how France came to decorating her. But I'm thinking Prep 4 would be a better time slot for viewing in the United States. — Maile (talk) 12:18, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{yo|Maile66}} agreed, and that works better for bio/non-bio image balance as well. I'm hopefully getting around to building preps sometime this morning, so I'll use bullard in P4. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 12:33, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
::Also, I just added "American nurse" to the hook, to clarify it for readers. — Maile (talk) 12:36, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
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gotta go for a bit
{{yo|Coolperson177|Canadianerk|BusterD|Kavyansh.Singh|SL93|Cwmhiraeth}} I just started winter semester, and it's kind of knocked me off my balance. my sleep schedule is quite literally nocturnal at this point; I'm building preps at one, two, even three in the morning, and things slip past me when I do that (as you can see from WT:DYK and WP:ERRORS). I need a few days to get my bearings; so, y'all (especially you new/interested prep builders) are going to need to take over the preps sets while I'm out. I'll be floating around still, and I should be back in a few days—I'm really sorry this is without notice, too. i'm sure y'all will be just fine :) thanks so much! back in a jiffy theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 00:59, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
:Sounds suspiciously like wisdom to me. First things first. BusterD (talk) 04:13, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
::Don't, they might not come back! Kingsif (talk) 06:19, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
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[[Template:Did you know/Queue/1|Queue 1]]
Do we really need these two hooks, uninteresting to non-Americans, in the same set? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:08, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- ... that Adam Kincaid of the National Republican Redistricting Trust defended lowered competition in US House elections, arguing that the changes would save the party money?
- ... that the National Democratic Redistricting Committee supported lawsuits in North Carolina and Ohio against alleged gerrymandering by Republicans?
- {{yo|Cwmhiraeth}} I floated the idea at WT:DYK up here—I do my best to explain why I thought it might be neat up there. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 07:31, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- I didn't see your previous post, but I'm OK with them running together. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:01, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- In my opinion, no- we should be aiming for diversity in hooks, and running two US hooks on the same topic doesn't seem appropriate. We wouldn't do this for any other country, not sure why US hooks are allowed to break all the rules... (Yes, I read the other topic, but don't agree that we should run both) Joseph2302 (talk) 11:07, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- Indeed our own prep building guidelines, specifically N6 of WP:DYKNN, say that this sort of thing isn't allowed. Why on earth are we doing this tomorrow (When it isn't even an election day in the US anyway)? We wouldn't do this for the UK so why are we allowing the Yanks to get away with it? The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 23:11, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
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[[Template:Did you know/Queue/5|Q5 Jan 14a]]
I tweaked from
- ... that before the Swiss surgeon René Prêtre specialized in surgeries on children's hearts, he treated victims of gunshots and stabbings in the Bellevue Hospital in New York?
to
- ... that before the Swiss surgeon René Prêtre specialized in surgeries on children's hearts, he treated victims of gunshots and stabbings at Bellevue Hospital in New York?
Any objection, @Paradise Chronicle? valereee (talk) 15:13, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
:And while we're at it...is "surgeries on children's hearts" a stylistic choice? I probably would have written "pediatric heart surgery", but YMMV. valereee (talk) 20:23, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
Use of Lang template
It was suggested I ask this here. Recent DYK article Johanna Quaas had the use of the {{tl|Lang}} for the German words (including a quote, a couple of names, and place names). The proper names used the template's parameter italic
setting it to no. More info about the template, how it's used, and its rationale are on the template page. Should DYK articles on the main page only have English words, and if they have non-English words, should they have the Lang template? Thanks for input in advance. – Elizabeth (Eewilson) (tag or ping me) (talk) 17:50, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
:Clarification – the hook did not contain non-English words. – Elizabeth (Eewilson) (tag or ping me) (talk) 17:51, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
::Articles should in general be written in English, but Wikipedia's MOS does not (and should not) prohibit the use of short phrases in other languages for uses like quotes, titles, or names with their translations, as seen in this article. DYK has no additional rules on article content in this regard, nor should it. —David Eppstein (talk) 18:52, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
:::Thank you very much. – Elizabeth (Eewilson) (tag or ping me) (talk) 19:35, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
::::Well, there was {{diff|Errors|1064561748|prev|this request}} at Errors the other day that I actioned. It made reference to {{slink|Wikipedia:Did you know/Supplementary guidelines|Other supplementary rules for the hook}} C10, which states: "Enclose non-English text in
Older nominations needing DYK reviewers
The previous list is down to one nomination available for reviewing, so I've created a new list that includes it as one of the 15 nominations that need reviewing in the Older nominations section of the Nominations page, covering everything through January 5. We currently have a total of 214 nominations, of which 102 have been approved, a gap of 112, up 11 over the past eight days. Thanks to everyone who reviews these.
November 30: Template:Did you know nominations/Sangatsu no Phantasia- December 19: Template:Did you know nominations/Dendrodoa grossularia
- December 30: Template:Did you know nominations/Chinese dama
December 31: Template:Did you know nominations/Avraham Tamir (two articles)January 1: Template:Did you know nominations/Komet WindpumpJanuary 2: Template:Did you know nominations/Blend (textile)January 2: Template:Did you know nominations/Statue of Andrés Manuel López ObradorJanuary 3: Template:Did you know nominations/Candy (H.O.T. song)January 3: Template:Did you know nominations/Die ersten MenschenJanuary 3: Template:Did you know nominations/Star RedJanuary 4: Template:Did you know nominations/Drinking Coffee ElsewhereJanuary 4: Template:Did you know nominations/Preet ChandiJanuary 5: Template:Did you know nominations/Osteogenesis imperfectaJanuary 5: Template:Did you know nominations/St. George's Episcopal Memorial ChurchJanuary 5: Template:Did you know nominations/Day-TimerJanuary 5: Template:Did you know nominations/Wizard Pharmacy
Please remember to cross off entries as you finish reviewing them (unless you're asking for further review), even if the review was not an approval. Please do not remove them entirely. Many thanks! BlueMoonset (talk) 06:33, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
Requesting new reviewer on 5 December DYK nomination
Wondering if I could get a new reviewer on Template:Did you know nominations/Play-by-mail game? Nominated 5 December and I've checked with the reviewer regularly here and his talk page. I discussed a reviewer change with him on his talk page and he was agreeable. I think he is just very busy IRL, and his response seemed to confirm that. Appreciate the assistance. Airborne84 (talk) 02:33, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
:Happy to pick this one up. Vaticidalprophet 02:43, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
::Much appreciated! Airborne84 (talk) 13:25, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
Admins needed for prep-to-queue promotion
{{@DYK admins}} – We currently have only 2 queues filled (for 24 hours). Will any of you be able to promote more preps to queues? It would be of great help. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:52, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{@DYK admins}}I don't want to be a bother - but the above is still the case, unfortunately. Any assistance to open up more preps, ditto'ing Kavyansh.Singh, would be helpful! Canadianerk (talk) 02:30, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{yo|Canadianerk}} what worries me is that we're at 106, and once we fill these two preps Maile just promoted, we'll be at 92. We don't drop to one-a-day until we're below 60; if the admins are already fatigued, this could present a strain. To be fair, it is friday night/saturday morning, but this seems to have happened in the middle of the week as well. Nonetheless, I'm sure we'll be just fine :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:27, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
:::With 4 queues filled, no need to panic! I only promote preps when there are 3 or fewer queues filled. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:15, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
:::@Theleekycauldron I haven't been here long enough to assess properly, but it definitely seems that 2-a-day this cycle has had more empty queues than last month-
:::Part of me wants to point out that keeping the queues and preps full as much as possible could enable a switch to 1-a-day faster (doing more work now to overall reduce the workload, instead of leaving empty queues which essentially delay a switch), but ultimately it does come down to the amount of work DYK is asking for *now* and admins' existing tasks elsewhere. I don't know what balance we could establish, but if you're concerned (and admins share it) then we'll need to open a larger discussion on the issue at some point, if this pattern is recurring. In the interim, thanks to the admins who responded to this ping swiftly, and to all admins who manage the queues! Canadianerk (talk) 18:23, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
Procedural/rules question
I found a brand new article today that I thought would make a great DYK. This is a about a cemetery monument on the National Register of Historic Places, so unquestionably notable. It was sitting in draft space for over three years. A new editor expanded it, added refs, and submitted it to AFC where it was approved. At this point it was not quite long enough for DYK (1,385 characters). I was going add a sentence or two to make it DYK-eligible and wound up doubling it to 2,712 characters. I did the nomination and it was reviewed and failed by {{u|Nick Moyes}} because he thinks it should be merged into the article on the person buried there. Our rules (D5) say a nom is placed on hold if there is an AFD, and (D6) says a DYK can't have dispute tags, but neither applies (Merge is not a Wikipedia:DISPUTETAG), so I don't see any valid reason for declining this nomination. One other consideration could be the amount of new content. There certainly is overlap with the biography article as the monument article does give background on the person. But it was not copied, this article was written independently. There are about 1,500 characters in the monument article that are not in the biography article in any form (I ran DYK check with the bio section completely removed and got 1,444 characters), so I think length is not an issue either. Can I get some additional opinions on this one. The articles are Hi Jolly Monument and Hi Jolly. MB 05:48, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{yo|MB}} I remember that John Gray (nightwatchman) was put on hold while a merge was being discussed—I think our criteria for what exactly a dispute tag is is a little looser than WP:DISPUTETAG. I'd wait until the merge discussion is resolved before proceeding with the nomination process. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:30, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
::Not formally, Did you know/Supplementary guidelines rule D6 specifically says {{tq|A list can be found at WP:DISPUTETAG.}} Our criteria IS what is listed at WP:DISPUTETAG. I also see that there was a question on whether John Gray was notable. Notability is not an issue here at all. MB 07:23, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
:::{{yo|MB}} Oh, I may be misunderstanding—I thought the merge question asking whether or not the monument is independently notable of the person? I think there'd be some objection to an article being aired on the main page while a merge tag is still attached, since that could result in consensus to merge and the article being redirected. I don't think the nomination should be failed outright (and I said as much at the nomination page), but I also wouldn't feel comfortable putting this in a prep set just yet. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 07:55, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
::::No, because the monument is listed on the National Register of Historic Places, I can pretty much guarantee it would survive AFD. The bio is also notable on its own. The merge suggestion is based on the two being closely related, and neither one being very long. MB 08:11, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Midnight Sun Mosque
I've started to review Template:Did you know nominations/Midnight Sun Mosque (2nd nomination). I then noticed that it was not created using the create new nomination code, but copied from the earlier Template:Did you know nominations/Midnight Sun Mosque. Could someone add the appropriate DYK structure for this new nomination, including both creators?
Thanks, Zeete (talk) 16:52, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
:Ah, yeah—Daniel Case, when nominations are closed, the nomination template on the page is substituted. I'd make a new nomination from scratch, instead of copying content from the old. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:16, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{yo|Zeete}} done! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:20, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{replyto|theleekycauldron}} This is a rare enough situation that unfortunately the DYK page creation page, useful as it is, is just not set up to handle. First, I wanted to save the original four hooks and their sources as it would have taken time I didn't feel I had at the time to retype all that (and I also wanted to augment the sourcing for one of the hooks with an additional source I had found during the GA expansion). Second, I believe I might have overwritten the original (which had already been archived) had I saved it anew, and we can't have that. Third, [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Midnight_Sun_Mosque_(2nd_nomination)&diff=prev&oldid=1066099663 as you yourself experienced], it just can't handle this sort of situation effectively.
We don't have many second nominations, not like we do in AfD, and the template needs to find some way to handle this. Daniel Case (talk) 01:32, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:::{{yo|Daniel Case}} fair enough—however, I'd still recommend you use the {{tl|NewDYKnomination}} template and manually fill in the blanks. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:41, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
The Clarion
At Template:Did you know nominations/The Clarion (Canadian newspaper) I had requested to hold promotion for anytime during Black History Month (ie - February), but the article was recently promoted to Prep 6 (which according to Template:Did you know/Queue means it will appear on the front page on January 21). Is there a reason it wasn't held until February? Mindmatrix 01:53, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{u|Mindmatrix}} I will unpromote it. I didn't notice that and it wasn't in the special occasion hooks. As the promoter, I'm the person to ask so maybe ping me if there is a next time for anything. SL93 (talk) 02:12, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{ping|SL93}} Much appreciated. Thanks! Mindmatrix 02:56, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
For fuck's sake
- ... that an advert for Hawkstone Lager, made using ingredients from Jeremy Clarkson's farm, was banned because it featured Clarkson saying the phrase "fuck me, that's good"? Queue 1
- ... that contrary to popular belief, a film rated PG-13 in the United States is not limited to one use of fuck? Prep 5
I see we have two more DYKs in the pipeline which are going to parade the word "fuck" on the Main Page. Which as usual may cause issues for educational settings which are required to have filters for young children.
Yes, yes, NOTCENSORED and all that, but I note that they're both from User:The C of E, who having been banned from putting various other controversial DYKs forward, now appears to be going for "let's see how many swear words we can do". This is all very juvenile, frankly. I suggest that if this editor can't find something better to do, they cease doing it. Black Kite (talk) 23:19, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
:First, excellent section heading. A+ shtick :)
:Moving on, the mentioned instances are two days apart (we can make that longer if necessary). I think the second one's pretty clearly encyclopedic; there's no way to talk about the one-fuck rule without saying the word (at least, no way that doesn't blatantly fly in the face of NOTCENSORED). We can't censor any topic that has to do with the word, and that one seems like a pretty clear-cut example of acceptable and necessary use. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 00:19, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::If it was any other editor, yes, but C of E has such an extensive history of being provocative in this area that it's hard not to see this as another one of his breaching experiments. See also this, this, and this. Pawnkingthree (talk) 01:25, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::Yes, but that's the point - they've chosen those articles to improve because it will get the word onto the Main Page, not for any other reason. Meanwhile, I'd also point out that the Hawkstone Brewery advert that was banned for saying the beer was "better than Birmingham ... and Spain" is actually funnier than the other banned one that was chosen... Black Kite (talk) 01:30, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:::I'm won't pretend my blood isn't boiling a little when reading that ANI thread, but I honestly don't care why The C of E chooses to submit a hook. If the lesson he learns from these experiments is that it's okay to impart useful information about a topic that contains a swear word (instead of what appears to be gratuitous use of curse words, as well as homophobic and racial slurs without encyclopedic value), then I'm okay running the hook. His hooks belong to the collective, and if they don't violate his sanctions or DYK rules, I don't see a reason to pull. It's not like he's swamping the main page with curse words; he was credited for 78 hooks last year, when we ran over 4,000. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:50, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::::Given how recent the Adolf Uunona debacle was, and how even more recent Template:Did you know nominations/Watermelon song was, I can't be certain C of E has learned much at all. Vaticidalprophet 02:15, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{ec}} As usual, The C of E goes for the dirty or controversial word, even though there are a number of good potential non-swear-word hooks for Hawkstone Lager, at least, thanks to Clarkson's antics. May I suggest that an admin pulls the Hawkstone from queue while the inevitable discussion occurs. Next up: Template:Did you know nominations/Dick Graves, with "cock"—the article is written to emphasize the phrase "Dick's cock", though it's talking about a solid-gold rooster used to advertise a newly opened casino restaurant, "The Golden Rooster Room", and its "signature" fried chicken. (This is not explained in the article, of course, nor is the restaurant's name given.) Indeed, the entire paragraph is such a perversion of the facts in order to feature "cock" as many times as possible (seven at last count), that I'll be removing them all, and I strongly recommend that further sanctions be considered due to this deliberate use of inappropriate terminology in the encyclopedia: this is an article about an American casino and the sources use "rooster" rather than "cock". BlueMoonset (talk) 01:53, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:The source says "‘f**k me that’s good’", which means that The C of E has altered it to completely spell out the offensive term. That aside, I think that as a group just as we have declined to run a main page set about cannabis, we should surely be able to reject all these hooks focused on the one word. Why should we be obligated to run an ongoing series using profanity? DYK is not a project of doormats. — Maile (talk) 02:12, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::Maile, so far as I know, the restrictions imposed under their original ban have not been lifted; the latest attempt in November 2021 [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Administrators%27_noticeboard&diff=prev&oldid=1056823612 went down in flames and was withdrawn], as did the prior attempt in April 2021. So as an independent reviewer, I'm vetoing the Hawkstone Lager hook currently in Queue 1, and requesting that you or another admin remove the hook and reopen the nomination to find a non-swear-word hook. Thank you. (Queue 1 will need a replacement hook from a prep area.) I've also vetoed the hooks from the Dick Graves nomination above. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:30, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{done}} - Please check me to make sure I did it correctly. The nomination is back under December 26. — Maile (talk) 02:50, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:::While we are at it -- what's the procedure to veto the second hook? I am not too good around AfD and the like -- but, I would really want to challenge why we need a page for an "often-quoted guideline". A quick scan of the sources listed there do not refer to this as a rule nor as a guideline, unless I am missing something. Ktin (talk) 02:48, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::::I don't know how to answer that, but I think the second hook makes it look like DYK is being played. I question if the content of the article is even notable. But counting the title, it does manage to mention that word 10 times. Given the over all content from this editor lately, it does seem that they are trying to see how many times they can use DYK to drop the profanity into Wikipedia, specifically the main page. Which seems to me like an abuse of editing privileges, but nothing to prevent them from doing so. On the other hand, I'm not sure DYK has to accept all of these. — Maile (talk) 03:28, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::::{{yo|Ktin}} a strict reading of The C of E's sanctions would give you the power to unilaterally depromote and strike a hook iff you felt it used unnecessarily provocative language. Since that's not the basis of your objection, an AfD or merge proposal would be required to unilaterally depromote (or you could just [classified]). theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::Done. Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/One-fuck rule Gamaliel (talk) 03:51, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::::::theleekycauldron, I don't see any "if and only if" in the original sanctions about vetoing hooks at all, much less any requirement that the hook "used unnecessarily provocative language" to be eligible to be vetoed. If a reviewer has any sort of real problem with the hook, the veto means that The C of E has to stop fighting for said hook and propose a {{tq|substantially different alternative}}. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:40, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::{{yo|BlueMoonset}} i mean, yes, but I imagine there'd be a row if reviewer used The C of E's provocative history to unilaterally veto a hook because, say, it just falls into the grey area of the in-universe rule. I think the language I used above was a bit strong, but i don't think I was flat-out incorrect—hear me out:
:::::::In Vanamonde's original statement, where they lay out their reasoning for the proposals, they really only cite The C of E's provocative hooks as cases where he gets argumentative: {{tq|The question is whether potentially offensive content is being used to educate the reader, or for shock value or to push a POV, per WP:GRATUITOUS... when these hooks have been challenged, The C of E has been obdurate to a degree, refusing to modify their hooks in any way...}} I don't see how you could, based on the scope of the ANI thread and the systemic problems it laid out, use this veto power unless these specific issues with the hook were involved. And even if you could, I especially don't see how you could use Ktin's problem, which is with the article's notability rather than any issue with the hook, to pull and strike it unilaterally. The article was AfDed and subsequently pulled—for the issue Ktin brought up, that's what's supposed to happen. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:21, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::::I don't want to get too sidetracked here, because this discussion could easily stretch to thousands of words without resolution—what I'll say is that I just didn't want Ktin to end up at the center of something chaotic or troublesome because they construed the sanctions too broadly. I thought it'd be better to play it safe and stick to original intent. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 06:24, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:::{{yo|Maile66}} looks like you forgot to put blank credit and hook slots in the vacated Jim Beam spot in Prep 1; but the queue and relisting looks okay. Thanks! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 03:38, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
::::Ahh ... thanks. BlueMoonset just took care of that. — Maile (talk) 03:43, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::Happy to do it. Looked fine otherwise. Thanks for taking care of it! BlueMoonset (talk) 05:40, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- A bit late to the discussion, but my reading of The C of E's restrictions is that any of his hooks can be vetoed without appeal for any reason. While I suppose the spirit of intent was to limit it to controversial areas which could broadly be interpreted to include any areas he had issues with in the past, the close was actually quite broad and in theory any of his hooks could be rejected for any reason. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:55, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- :{{yo|Narutolovehinata5}} like I said above, there'd probably be a row if someone tried to use an excuse that wasn't relevant to provocativeness to strike a hook. in any case, we'll cross that bridge when we get to it; I don't think anyone's tried that yet. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 02:36, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
- FWIW, The C of E has suggested a perfectly good ALT1 at Template:Did you know nominations/Hawkstone Lager. My alternative suggestion was "...that an advert for Hawkstone Lager made using ingredients from Jeremy Clarkson's farm, was banned because it contained Clarkson claiming that the beer was better than both Birmingham and Spain?" [https://www.express.co.uk/celebrity-news/1533826/Jeremy-Clarkson-beer-lager-banned-better-Birmingham-diddly-squat-farm-shop-news-latest]. Black Kite (talk) 10:07, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- Also late, uninformed and anecdotal, but FWIW, in all my time as a student I never once accessed (or observed someone else intentionally access) the Wikipedia main page, Wikipedia was found via search results (direct to articles)... That aside, is the concern that a school would accidentally or intentionally block the Wikipedia main page, or the site overall? 'cause the latter is surely already happened, because of the sheer volume of "inappropriate" content for children across the English Wikipedia? The amount of fucks has surely caused technicians more than enough headaches than the handful/year of swearing that is barely tolerated on main page? Tl;dr - school boards' use of filtering software on computers to determine our conduct doesn't seem like a rational basis to me... Is this about the "juvenile"-ness of swearing, or is there actual merits to a "think of the children!", christian parents approach? Because the former is more than a bit silly, and the latter, I'd have to plea for some evidence on why this concern is necessary, and widespread enough to reject hooks. From my experience, teachers were far more concerned about the reliability of Wikipedia (source: attended catholic school) and were certainly persuasive enough that they could have argued to block the site altogether. A quick google search seems to confirm that the entire premise of the project is of far more concern to schools and teachers (and students using us as a crutch/treating Wiki as a source) than this argument. Canadianerk (talk) 03:03, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
- The Hawkstone Lager campaign is deliberately very meta and so can't be taken at face value. So, it would fit the spirit of the campaign if we were to ban it too. If you want a bureaucratic excuse then see often overlooked rule 10. Also, from the reviews I've seen, while it may be great advertising, it isn't actually very good lager, being rather flat. Andrew🐉(talk) 09:49, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
- In any case, I've proposed a new hook for Hawkstone Langer, so a new review would be appreciated. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:19, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
<s>Queue 6</s> Prep 7: Mighty Bomber
- ... that calypsonian Mighty Bomber believed that the judges denied him the Trinidad and Tobago Independence calypso monarch title in 1964 because he was born in Grenada?
This hook seems to be inaccurately conflating two separate things mentioned in the article, namely:
- In 1962, he was did not win the "Independence calypso competition", and later complained that he had been denied the title due to his birth. As far as I can tell this competition was not the Calypso Monarch, but a separate event. (It was won by "Lord Brynner", while that year's Calypso Monarch was won by "Mighty Sparrow").[https://www.guardian.co.tt/article-6.2.407014.fea8fe3331]
- In 1964, he did win the Calypso Monarch title.
I would therefore suggest removing the reference to Calypso Monarch from the hook and clarifying that it was 1962, for example:
- ... that calypsonian Mighty Bomber believed that the judges denied him the Trinidad and Tobago independence calypso title in 1962 because he was born in Grenada?
Pinging {{ping|Guettarda|Epicgenius|SL93}} as nom/reviewer/promoter — Amakuru (talk) 12:22, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:That sounds good to me. To be honest I must have overlooked the two facts, since they were in reverse chronological order: {{tq|In 1964 Bomber won the Calypso Monarch competition, defeating Sparrow.[1] He placed fourth in the Independence calypso competition in 1962 which was won by Lord Brynner (Kade Simon)}}. – Epicgenius (talk) 15:10, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
::{{re|Amakuru}} Thanks so much for catching this - I'm not quite sure how I typed 1964 instead of 1962. As for the rest - the winner of the independence calypso competition was the independence calypso king (see [https://www.guardian.co.tt/article-6.2.407014.fea8fe3331 this] for example). "Independence calypso monarch title" or "Independence calypso competition title", but "calypso title" would be ambiguous wording. Guettarda (talk) 16:20, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Guettarda}} I'm obviously no expert on this, but per my link above, which shows that Lord Brynner won the independence calypso event with Mighty Sparrow in second and Mighty Bomber in fourth,[https://www.guardian.co.tt/article-6.2.407014.fea8fe3331] and the Calypso Monarch article which shows that Mighty Sparrow won in 1962, it would appear that the "Calypso Monarch" and the "independence calypso contest" were separate events, probably held around March and August respectively. — Amakuru (talk) 17:47, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
::::{{ping|Guettarda}} given the ongoing dialogue over this hook, and that it is due to run in the next set, I have postponed it out to preparation area 7 so we have time to get it right. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 20:45, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::{{re|Amakuru}} Moving it to Prep 7 is fine with me (I thought Template:Did you know nominations/Kenny J was in there, but it looks like it's been moved to the Queue). The short answer is it doesn't matter to me too much which wording you go with.
:::::I trust your judgement. The longer answer is yes, the Independence contest was separate from the normal, annual Calypso Monarch contest, though until Calypso Rose won it in the 1970s it was known as the Calypso King. The idea of a "King" of Carnival is a part of European Carnivals, and probably originates there. At the Dimanche Gras show (Sunday night before Carnival; so either February or March, depending on when Easter falls) the King and Queen of the Bands are crowned, together with a Calypso King (later monarch; more recently there are separate King, Queen and Monarch competitions). So the winner of the Independence calypso competition was presumably crowned "King" because that's what the winners of calypso competitions are always called (with perhaps an extra dig at the British monarchy intended). Trinidad and Tobago became independent on July 31, 1962, hence the date for it. All a long way to say "yes, these are different" and "no, it doesn't matter". Guettarda (talk) 22:01, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Wedding of Princess Beatrix of the Netherlands and Claus van Amsberg
Template:Did you know nominations/Wedding of Princess Beatrix of the Netherlands and Claus van Amsberg appears to have been abandoned by its nominator who is still active elsewhere on Wikipedia. Does anyone want to adopt this, or should it be marked for closure? Flibirigit (talk) 15:51, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:Nomination was adopted. Flibirigit (talk) 00:08, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Queue 6: Haematomma ochroleucum
- ... that the lichen Haematomma ochroleucum belongs to a genus with a name meaning 'bloody eye' in Latin?
Two points on this: (1) the "haema" root, meaning blood, is from Greek, not Latin as far as I'm aware. And (2) I couldn't verify the meaning of "tomma" and whether it definitely refers to an eye, in either Ancient Greek or Latin. But I don't speak either language, so perhaps it's correct. Would someone who knows a bit more about this be able to verify what's going on here? Pinging {{ping|SL93|Narutolovehinata5|Theleekycauldron|Storye book|Leomk0403}} who were involved with the nomination. Thanks — Amakuru (talk) 11:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:* The information used for the hook comes from the article [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haematomma_ochroleucum here], and that information comes from an offline citation, which was taken in good faith. Latin used for taxonomy, gravestones, stained glass windows inscriptions, sometimes old Roman monuments, is frequently in the form of dog latin, which is and was a sort of equivalent of schoolboy Latin and Franglais, that is an inadequate, lazy or idiosyncratic and short-form attempt at Latin (or another foreign language) peppered with elements of one's own native language (or Greek in this case). It was used in mediaeval times in the UK for legal and other purposes. Genuine Latin scholars sometimes laugh their heads off when translating dog Latin. So don't expect a direct primary-source Latin-grammar translation of Latin taxonomy and trust the secondary sources because they understand the specific usage in each case (sometimes WP rules can be useful).
:* Haematomma is a form of the current medical term Haematoma (Hematoma in the US), which may be described as "an abnormal collection of blood outside of a blood vessel" An example (should one be punched in the face) might be what is popularly called a black eye, or bloody eye. Storye book (talk) 14:45, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:*:{{ping|Storye book}} OK, that's fine, I can see that the offline cite was accepted in good faith, but it does need to be accurate even so. I've reopened the nomination page. Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 20:05, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
::I'm more than a bit perturbed that this article was lifted from my sandbox with nary a mention of my work in the revision history of the article. This is the second time that this user has done this with my work and it's really not on! My work on the original (in my sandbox) can be seen [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MeegsC/Articles/Haematomma_ochroleucum here]. It long predates the appearance of this article in live space! This user never even asks first - s/he just moves things to mainspace under his/her own ID. Can this be stopped? MeegsC (talk) 21:49, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:::Oh...yeah, yikes. That's a blatant copyvio. I've placed a G12 tag -- WP:CWW is okay with attribution, but this is unattributed and, more urgently, with nothing resembling permission. Vaticidalprophet 21:52, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
::::I closed it, but the closure is messed up for some reason and I don't know how to fix it. SL93 (talk) 23:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
:::::{{yo|SL93}} fixed—you want to make sure that everything is in the {{tl|DYKsubpage}} template before closing the nomination. if it happens after you close, move the bit that says
::::::{{yo|MeegsC}} which was the other article that was lifted? And, if you'd like, we can move your sandbox version to mainspace once the infringement is deleted; you'd receive DYK credit for a new nomination? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 01:45, 18 January 2022 (UTC)