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Talk:Bhutan at the 2020 Summer Olympics/GA2

GA review

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| result = Passed. // Chchcheckit (talk) 20:18, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Bhutan at the 2020 Summer Olympics/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: {{User|History6042}} 00:00, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Chchcheckit (talk · contribs) 13:13, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

GARC. thank you for getting thinsg in order // Chchcheckit (talk) 13:13, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

:@Chchcheckit, you are welcome for me getting it in order. History6042😊 (Contact me) 22:42, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

::@Chchcheckit, fixed source 25. History6042😊 (Contact me) 20:49, 22 April 2025 (UTC)

:::@Chchcheckit, just a quick reminder about this since it has been a bit. History6042😊 (Contact me) 23:53, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

::::yeah sorry dw Chchcheckit (talk) 12:52, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

::::@History6042 spotchecks to do Chchcheckit (talk) 17:16, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

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{{small|(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)}}
#It is reasonably well written.

  1. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
  3. :a (references): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}}
    c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
    d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  4. It is broad in its coverage.
  5. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  6. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  7. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  8. It is stable.
  9. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
  10. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
  11. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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Overall:

Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}

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Broad

  • Covers all relevant categories
  • Editor has addressed complaints from previous GA review in adding more background to competitors and context etc.

Prose

  • Formatting is good

References

  • No unreliable sources used
  • {{tick}} {{s|Reference 25 is not properly formatted- no access date or source date}} (resolved)

Spotchecks

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  • [2]: {{tick}} {{green|The appearance of Bhutan at the Tokyo Summer Olympics {{underline|marked their tenth consecutive summer appearance}} since it first entered the Games during the 1984 Summer Olympics}} 1984 point verified, but does not confirm or state it was their tenth one
  • [8]: {{tick}} {{green|Karma began archery in April 2009.}}
  • [12]: {{tick}} {{green|While training for the 2020 Games, Karma did a "Robin Hood" shot, which is an arrow being fired into another arrow that is already in the target board, splitting it, just like as told in the stories of the legendary Robin Hood. The odds of doing the shot is 1 in 3,000}} Passes/verified: however per MOS:PUFFERY/WP:WORDSTOWATCH (referring to use of "legenedary") is there a better way of writing the stuff around Robin Hood?
  • {{s|[13] {{green|Ngawang Namgyel was trained in Japan before the Games.}} I cannot access the souce myself, and would appreciate you typing/copying relevant text from the source}} Source was inaccessible, other spotchecks done instead
  • [15] {{tick}} {{green|Lenchu Kunzang was trained as a police officer, graduating from the Jigmeling Police Training Centre in Gelephu in 2012, topping her class in rifle shooting, and was later stationed in Phuntsholing}}
  • [20] {{tick}} {{green|Bhutan was represented by one female athlete at the 2020 Summer Olympics in archery: Karma in the women's individual event. She qualified for the women's individual recurve at the Games by reaching the semifinal stage and obtaining one of the three available spots at the 2019 Asian Archery Championships in Bangkok, Thailand. This marks the first time that a Bhutanese athlete achieved an Olympic quota spot in any sport.}} Source says "quarterfinal" not semifinal
  • [24] {{tick}} {{green|He}} [Namgyel] {{green|qualified via a universality place from the International Judo Federation.}}
  • [28] {{tick}} {{green|On 24 July, she participated in the qualifiers of the women's 10 m air rifle. She got 681.1 points, putting her in 43rd place overall, failing to advanced to the final.}}

Copyvio

  • Passes with [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&oldid=1286612565&action=search&use_engine=0&use_links=1 6.5%]
  • no other media besides flag, which has rationale; passes.

NPOV

  • Minor issue resolved, otherwise just stating facts

Stable

:@Chchcheckit, {{Done}} all spotcheck things except I do not remember my account password to the Kuensel source and can no longer access it. History6042😊 (Contact me) 20:00, 25 April 2025 (UTC)